Virman SS: FATE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT New pg 31 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Sumana123

Guess What ?? All through the update I had Butterflies flying in my stomach and the reason is this exciting Update. Like seriously each line I was waiting what comes next and what he says and what she says. This is straight out of College "In Real Terms" no extra falling and pulling things 😉...Ria the damn sensible girl , I loved what she said to Viraat and Maanvi in canteen. Like a true friend she warned both to stay in limits. Maanvi's feeling are truly like madly in love with a Crush. And Viraat is a genuinely nice guy and "Cares" for Maanvi. Well I don't know why Boys Hover over this Care and Concern word whenever they truly fall for a girl. I think its in there genes. No really I have seen a few like this in my life so far. 😆😆 That's why we call Boys are little lacking in brain. The best part which I loved a lot as I was not expecting it in the FF was when Viraat tells Karan that he knows Maanvi like him and that's why he is stay away from her and also reduced texting series. It did hurt me but I clapped for Viraat that times but again guys always do that when they know that a Girl has fallen for them so the retract. Initially I was also scared that Mannu might face a heart break due to this friendship but you handled it so well and I loved it.


College Love Story in true sense. Ria and Karan are playing their Cupid roles too well. I can imagine how angelic Maanvi can look in that dress. Awkwardness is the first step in love ..I don't know who said but yes people say that. So the journey has started lets see when they let their feeling out to each other. Again Maanvi - Madan talk threw light on the matter of all is not well between Chaudhary and Vadheras ...I guess some cold war is going on but I literally laughed when Madan emphasized on the 2 years age gap as if 20 years gap and even Maanvi felt it. But she is too innocent to understand the intricacies of people and relationship. She is still in a cocoon.

I m totally and madly in love with the story ..and this can be judged from my long comment. A long update this time and I loved it. Want faster update *runs off*

Love
Sumana


Hope it didn't feel rushed when I made Virat realise that Manvi liked him. I didn't want to drag the story and hope it didn't disappoint you.
Well I won't make promises that Manvi won't break her heart, or even if Virat's heart won't get broken. So far everything has been all lovey dovey and sweet but soon the real fun will begin. By fun I mean the rhona dhona 😭 Coz I love a love story with many bumps on the road 😉 What's the use in getting to the end without facing any hurdles.
Thank you so much for the extra long comment you made morning even more brighter. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Awww! Virat its so sweet! Love it your concept :)
Continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Nush Diii, omgoddd what an updateee!! Completely enjoyed itt! Virats protectiveness for Manvi is soo lovely to see, and the way she loves him but keeps away so not to loose the friendship they share...ekkss he has fallen to? ;) hayeee ;) :P but he doesn't want to hurt her, ufff how sweettt, loving the way you are taking this story, and the flow to it is amazinggg, your an amazinggg writer honestlyyy...update soon nowww

-luv parii
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
Edited my comment.. Nush cant wait for next update.. VirMan togthr 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
First of Nush di hope u don't mind i call u di😛...so sorry for commenting late ...sorry...
Don't noe how i skip part 3 ~~~juz realized it now...so sorry...plz maaf kardoo

Part 3 ~~~Brilliant update 👏👏👏 manvi feelings were awesomely portrayed 👍🏼 her feelings for leaving her house n getting to a new place but at the same time was the sense of independence she was feeling after reaching a new place...it was soo nice n realistic :))) wow virat entry 😉 virman meeting finally :DDD virat remember her after all...really superb update :D

Part 4 ~~~Fabulous update Nush di i juz loved the whole update to the core❤️ ahaan virat possessive for manvi 😉 virman msg seccion so nice n awesome.!!!! virat is really a sweetheart...the way she was caring towards manvi...awwnjealous manvi eeks i loved tat part alot...😉 i must say karan is quite smart aur Mr virat buddu...he was in love...karan noes this😛 n muaah to karan n ria...they are rally nice frds...:))) virat n manvi together going to the party virat can't take his eyes off manvi eeks...😳😳 this is really exciting...:DDD really super Nice update Nush di...very very well written⭐️⭐️⭐️ i have a smile at the end...Lovely lovely⭐️⭐️ now waiting for next part...continue soon if possible...:))) will be eagerly waiting...thanks for the pm di🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
awesome update
loved virat in it
Is there any rift between their parents
Continue soon and thnks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
hellooo, ohhh god what is this u updated PART 4, and i was not knowing after first part i have not read other 3 parts , mujhe patta hi nahi chalta aap update kab karti hooo lol...okayyy now here it is my review for all 3partsss...sooo okayyy virat and maanvi met eachother through there parents on a trip , she was being allof but virat is such a sweet guy and yes from that time maanvi is having a crush on him. Maanvi not replying to his message and that's natural because she was being extra consious and yeah her father chose delhi for her futher studies that's a good idea and good for her too, she will be able to leave alone and independent and wow what a surprise Mr.Virat Vadhera is a senior student of that college...ria and karan are sweet and have sence virman feeling too, but ria is correct virat will not give his commitment to any relation and maanvi is a girl to die for any relation...virat have senced maanvi's feeling for him and that's also natural the opposite attraction both are attracted to eachother...now let's see what happen's in the party...do continue soon :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Nush di sorry for being late 😳

this part was just awesome.. 👏 and fantastic 😃 this was a very long part 😃 thanks for that 😊 coming to the update i totally enjoyed reading it 😊
the late night message convo of virman was good and then manvi got late for her class 😛
i loved the way she was getting annoyed with that girl Tina when she said this 😆 " His name is Virat not Viraaat,"Manvi thought to herself feeling annoyed at Tina
thank God Ria had warned manvi beforehand of not getting close to virat otherwise she will be heartbroken 😊
but seems like he is little changed because of manvi and they all have become good friends 😃
virat knows that manvi likes him wow! and therefore tries to little stay away from her 😊
virat has also fallen for manvi ⭐️
and both ria and karan are trying to let him know that 😃
update asap di 😃
love ya ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
This is getting on well! :D

Good to see you writing like this!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Superb update... loved it...So virat has unknowingly fallen for manvi...and manvi is also the chupa- rustam... 😳Hope virat realises his feelings soon...But I guess there is some problems btwn the two families..😕Virman are gonna be in big trouble later... 😒Cont soon and pm me...

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