Virman SS: FATE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT New pg 31 - Page 24

Nush di !!! yayyy !! u updated :D i was so happy seeing ur tag !!! :D
The update was really Fabulous !!!! :D it was sweet ,romantic n long too !!! love u for tat !!!🤗
i really really loved every bit of it ❤️
Finally the truth is out !!! gosh virat dad !!! i never thought tat this would be the reason !!! this was so unexpected !!! virat dad :( feel bad for manvi n her family especially her dad !! he was paralyzed !!! :( everything was amazingly written !!! manvi feelings virat guilt were every feeling was portrayed very well !!!
the whole virman scene in the room was juz amazing ❤️
hayye !! virman scene !!! *ahem ahem * tat was hot !!!! maar dalaa :DDD😳
virman convo was soo nice !!! ^_^ n the scene when virat was going away my god tat was soo sweet nush di !!! i could juz visualize everything in front of my eyes !!!
haww wat is rahul doing ?? what is he upto ???
u noe i juz don't wanna stop reading !!! i noe i m being greedy but i really wanna read more !!!
really excited for next part !!! looking forward for it !!! continue soon if possible soon di !!!! :)
p.s !!! feel sad coz next update will be last part😔 but i guess everything good has an end !!! :(but i m satisfy until i can read something written by u !!! :) take care :)

Awsum as always.. The way they patched up was amazing.. But rahul is scaring me, what is he upto?? Waiting eagerly for next part.

goddd you updated after sooo longgg timeee...and the update was worth waiting :)) okayyy so the misunderstandings are FINALLY cleared and virat's father is seriously sooo evilll...awww virat is going to talk to his father, lets see what he will do now and suddenly what happened to rahul...better he be good only lol...and and and next part will be the last update, sooo soonnn :((

So glad about the revelation
i knew it will be to do with virats dance
happy that theyre finally ok
But rahul ne kya kiya
i hav a feeling its a plan of rahuls to get virman together
continue soon eagerly waiting 😉

Originally posted by: IAmAaru

KAMINI BACHI! GIMME THE NEXT PART AND THATS GONNA BE WHEN I I SAY WHAT I THINK OF YOUR STORY!

I like this threat!

nice update
loved it.. Atlast virman are together
this rahul is being evil
continue soon

Fab updt...after a long time ha...but never mind...loved virman cute romantice moments...finally misunderstanding r clear...but wats wrong with rahul...y this sudden change in his behaviour? This is something fishy...pls cont asap

nice update finally he got to know
who is behind there separation
and she inform about her and virat relation
then why rahul change his decision in last minute
update soon

Sorry for late...
Awesome part...
Liked it...
Too Good