Virman SS: FATE OR SOMETHING LIKE IT New pg 31

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

OMG di no suspense revealed yet !!!! it is killing me !!! i want to noe wat had actually happen?? Wat an update di Brilliant 👍🏼 the suspense the drama Awesome !!!👏👏 poor virat i m feeling bad for him 😔 the way he broke down coz of manvi left him soo heart touching :(((( i can't see him like this😭😭 he is suffering ;( n the last scene was soo emotional 😭😭 haww manvi left :(( is it??? she can't left like this :( written beautifully ⭐️⭐️ i really loved it ❤️ really exicited for next chapter !! :D will be eagerly waiting :))) thanx for the pm nush di :D

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ParthKiBabe

@ParthKiBabe

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Wait A minute!
I have never called you this!
YOU ARE THEBIGGEST KAMINI YOU KNOW! 🤪
Part 1 mein I got VEry Angry with MAnvi! whats The secret girl! And how dare you hurt my poor Virat!!!
Part 2 OMG! Vireat was too good!
His angst, his frustration so beautifuly depicted! i could picturise it!
I frelt as if I was watching a film you know!
I was like Clasping my hands and reading this like a mystery novel!
mere dil aur mat Dukha!! Just REVEAL the secret!!! Aur I will die along with Virat!!

AND AIRPORT SCENE!! You Really know how to flutter my tender little heart!
hoping for an emotional breakdown from Manvi NOW!!! IN THE AIRPOST as she sees Virat Hel;plessly crying for her~~
And A word of Advice for you! resgn whatever job you are doing now And Go Join CineVistaas Girl! Be Their Script writer!! :*

UPDATE JALDI!! :D :D

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: IAmAaru
Wait A minute!
I have never called you this!
YOU ARE THEBIGGEST KAMINI YOU KNOW! 🤪
Part 1 mein I got VEry Angry with MAnvi! whats The secret girl! And how dare you hurt my poor Virat!!!
Part 2 OMG! Vireat was too good!
His angst, his frustration so beautifuly depicted! i could picturise it!
I frelt as if I was watching a film you know!
I was like Clasping my hands and reading this like a mystery novel!
mere dil aur mat Dukha!! Just REVEAL the secret!!! Aur I will die along with Virat!!

AND AIRPORT SCENE!! You Really know how to flutter my tender little heart!
hoping for an emotional breakdown from Manvi NOW!!! IN THE AIRPOST as she sees Virat Hel;plessly crying for her~~
And A word of Advice for you! resgn whatever job you are doing now And Go Join CineVistaas Girl! Be Their Script writer!! :*

UPDATE JALDI!! :D :D

Hawww I'm not the biggest Kamini I think that's already being filled 😉

I know I know you all hate Manvi, but not for long, I promise, I really had a fun time writing this update, I'm extremely sadistic I know love breaking everyone's heart, I'm sure you didn't expect it.

I think we've seen enough of helpless and hurt Virat now its time he took control. 😛

Doubt cinevistaas are going to employ me, they've got too many contenders for the job. 😆 including you.

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Diii, what did Faria kaminii make you dooo 😡

The update was beautiful, its nice for once to see as Virat being the weak one while Manvi stands strong and tough for a change, this mystery is intriguing i hope you unleash it soon, and for that ill have to keep that Twino of mine farrr away from you.. 😕

eagerly waiting to read the next update, please make it soonnn

-Luv Pari

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

another awesome update of yourss but this time you just tried stretching it haan with all that filmy style the guy going behind the gal to findout wat has she been hiding for soo long well no probs i guess we have no option than waiting for the next update 😭😭

manvi hell bent on not saying the truth to virat even if rahul is asking her to say really galz can get too stubborn at times 😛😛

feeling soo bad for both of them virat is broken that she is in problem but is not ready to share it with him coz she doesnt trust himwith her problems instead she trusts rahul more and manvi hurt that she is the reason for this changed and hurt virat but she just cant help it sumthing related to her family is stopping her...

rahul and karan both are such awesome frends alwayz besides their frend and can do anything for them 😃

and virat's thoughts on women was really funny actually speaking kinda right he was but it was really funny 😆😆

update next part soon and do pm me 😊

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Ankita

@-ineffable-

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

OMG Nush di what was that 😛 it was amazing... 👏 loved it ❤️ whats the secret want to know it very much 😊
why is manvi not telling to virat ??

what has happened ?

virat is again hurt but he wants to get her back at any cost 😃

manvi went back to mumbai i think virat will be going too to know about this mystery 😃

do update asap soon 😃

Edited by Ankita1997 - 12 years ago

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meghasweet

@meghasweet

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Wowww its just awesomee wt d supense is behind nd its too good
plzz update soon :))

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

nice update what was reason why she left
reveal past soon this time he will go mumbai
to find the truth update soon

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: Captain_Pari
Diii, what did Faria kaminii make you dooo😡

The update was beautiful, its nice for once to see as Virat being the weak one while Manvi stands strong and tough for a change, this mystery is intriguing i hope you unleash it soon, and for that ill have to keep that Twino of mine farrr away from you..😕

eagerly waiting to read the next update, please make it soonnn

-Luv Pari

Didn't want to drag it like this but what to do, it was this or ending it but I promise everything will be out on the next update.

Ps: and don't blame Faria. :p