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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Aw what a feel good chapter, I couldn't help but feel all warm and fuzzy. I must apologize for being a tad late here but loved the chapter. You had me ROFL'ing with the whole Lavanya Di situation. And looks like Lavanya Di could be keen on Arnav" bhaiya" or rather keen on setting him up with Khushi anyway 😉 Arjun comes up with let's play monopoly idea and Arnav oblidges so that Arjun can spend some quality time with Lavanya Di? 🤣 You took me back to the days when I played monopoly, Khushi so conveniently and cleverly cheated leaving Arnav baffled! Must say I am having a ball reading this FF and can't wait for another doze of it!

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Enchante

@Enchante

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: -Delilah-

Hi5 sister. We're together in our misery. Even I had to go through the ordeal of calling my crush 'bhaiya'! 😆

Oh, the horror. :P

On a slightly different note, when are you writing another OS? I was just wondering, I swear. No pressure.😆

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#133

I realized after reading this chapter that I havent played Monopoly in my life, god which planet I was living in 😆 Superb chapter, just fantastic. Loved Arjun's crush on Lavanya Di, it was hilarious, poor chap! Due to Khushi he is forced to call her "Di" and his plan to impress her by playing Monopoly was rib-tickling. Good one! Very well written chapter and Arnav-Khushi indeed make a wonderful team in monopoly, eager to see how they will make a great pair for rest of their life 😊

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barauni

@barauni

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Liked the story... Part 8 please...😊

Edited by barauni - 12 years ago

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Yet to read this one. Me likes the title for this one a lot.

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Enchante

@Enchante

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#136

What a cute update! I lurve Arjun. If I can't get Arnav, I'll make do withj Arjun...only he has to be as devoted to me as he's to Lavanya Di.

Wear a garbage bag! And then Arnav singing Rabba Ve. LMAO!

Loved this update. I'll go buy a thesaurus for I'm running out of words of appreciation here.😆

So long, Del. :-)

Edited by Enchante - 12 years ago

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#137

nice update
arjun is cute
oh ipkknd good goood was missing rabba ve got them here
so they are meeting at night interesting!!
update soon
thanx for pm

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Hey there Delilah

Sorry, couldn't resist :)

I found this story quite by chance and I have to say that I am very glad I did! This is absolutely fantastic! It flows with such ease, such charm, such nonchalance yet you never feel nonchalant about it. For some reason it has me holding my breath...

The characters are so alive, so well etched out and yet etching out with every passing chapter hence keeping any possible monotony of knowing the characters for exactly what they are absolutely at bay.

With each chapter, a layer is unravelled and so beautifully too! You feel the characters' emotions, their thoughts...great writing!

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Faili thi siyaan raatein Aaya tu subah leke, Bewajah si zindagi mein Jeene ki wajah leke
Khoya tha samandaron mein Tanah safina mera, Sahilon pe aaya hai tu Jaane kis tarah leke
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta

I am sorry I just couldn't help it as soon as I saw the chapter title I instantly linked to this song and viola you provided us with the song too, it was so appropriate for this whole chapter and the FF :). Loved your dig at the show and us Fic readers and writers 😆 you see this FIC is running so smoothly and beautifully that it doesn't require the dramatics of Rabba Ve's and Arnav cornering Khushi and man handling her one way or the other. Arnav and Khushi are silently filling the void they both had by being there for each other without even realizing. Forever Lol'ing at Arjun's antics and Khushi's teasing and Lavanya's over excitement about the show haha! Thank you ma'am for another awesome update, looking forward to more! 😃

Edited by Arshix144 - 12 years ago

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#140

Teehee! greetings! 😊
aww..our poor lovesick Arjun is so in love with Lava di...or this is what he thinks and she thinks of him as her young bro...! but that didnt make any difference right!
arnav and khushi's midnight porch talks *sigh*. lovely. he's no longer a stranger...but yeah "smooth talking" though!
ok, so i can imagine myself at Arjun's place coz i have played mono very few times and lost every single time with my relatives being first class cheaters and conning my innocent brain ! 😭😊
amazing update! loved it!

ps- yeah! rabba ve is sooo catchy...

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