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Originally posted by: Arshix144

Funny, quirky and adorable are the words that are coming to me to describe the chapter. Loved the playful nature of the whole update, I could almost picture the pen stand hitting Arnav in slow motion and then her offering him a band aid for the supposed damage that she caused😆. I bet I will find out what Arnav's thinking in the next chapter. Thank you for giving us both POV's, you do it so smoothly. I think I prefer this genre any day to the intense love hate sagga that seems to be popular these days!😃 Looking forward to reading the next chapter oh and thanks for the song, me loves it!

Originally posted by: 88sandy

wonderful update

i think this is one of the most well written stories that most people are not reading. they really should.

Can't wait for lavanya to stay for slumber party I suspect things will get pretty awkward. Love arjun and khushi relationship.

Apologies for late comments, was little busy! But why did you change the name, any specific reason or just like that? I have no issues with any of the names, generally asking... Coming back to updates, I loved the way you write so many scenes with such precision. Arjun-Khushi behaves like a normal brother and sister who leaves no chance to embarrass each other and poor Arnav got the hit 😊 Both the updates were exceptionally well written esp Arnav-Khushi encounters, slowly slowly they are getting with each other and now eagerly waiting for next update for the girls slumber party, lets see what new situation arises for Khushi.. Thank you so much for the PM..

Originally posted by: -Delilah-

No, don't mind me...😆

awesome writing and fab story..loved it!!!

I can't believe I have t read this before I absolutely love it!!!

okay. to begin with i am literally extremelyyy sorry for being late! 😳

i had read the chapter as soon as you pmed me...but that was quick as i had class back then and thought of commenting later after coming back. but i totally forgot! im such an arse! im sooo sorry dear! :(

then now when i revisited the thread, my confused and wandering mind just realised how forgetful it is too apart from being the above two and thus landed back on commenting 😊

enough of my sad long story. coming back to update..it was super wala superb! lol. arjun is one helluva brother...i realised how i miss my bro by reading that who's far away from me nowadays 😭

and god! lavanya aka lava(for me :P), she's one of a kind. we all have one friend like her in our group, dont we?? 😆 who's drooling over "Hot" boys every now and then..!!
now lets see what happens at the sleepover...im so excited and jumpy!

update soon pls 😳😛

am first 🥳
Amusing...arey hum bh cheating karte hain...i like lavanya di lolz and why was everyone glaring??? At arnav...awesome work...update soon...thanx for pm