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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#151

arnav waiting for khushi on the porch crooning rabba ve 🤣

what have you been drinking? just hilarious.

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mcmelina

@mcmelina

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#152

wao!!
after lot of search came across such a wonderful story!!

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

I looked up the meaning of the title - "Raabta" and it means connection. They really are connecting at all levels and the love story is building up so beautifully!

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Primmadonna

@Primmadonna

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

lovely. this is just lovely...and sooo cute😊

cntinue soon

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barauni

@barauni

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

I really liked the storyline a lot...

Specially the last paragraph was awesome!!!

You have a way with words and are pretty well at writing too...

Waiting for part nine... And thanks for the pm

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barauni

@barauni

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Nice update...

1) 1st of all i like it when i get a chance to comment first after i read an update... So i am happy now!!!!!😃😆😆

2) The update was really good and Arnav-Khushi's answer about being sure of death was a bang on one!!!! I really like it nut the other way it made me feel a bit philosophical!!!!😕😆 Hope you dont mind...

3) Kushi's Mom and her signs!!!! Uff... Its seeming hectic for a reader like me so how will be Khushi when she is all the around listening to that!!!!😆

4) Myself by Arjun!!!😆😆

5) The best part is Arnav correcting Khushi when she said his Mom looks like him instead of the reverse!!!!😆😆

6) And the Author's note that you post at the end of the update has always been my favorite😃 You either talk about the title you have chosen and explain it and give us the link on that song(mostly) or just explain some things and words like Drachenfutter!!!😆 I love them...

7) This time you asked us not to try on that sandwich Arnav made!!!😆😆

8) According to me it is better if you gave us long ones twice a week... Neither short ones regularly nor long ones once a week... It is a satisfaction if you read a long one but twice a week keeps you waiting...😆

9) Regular updates is also fine... The matter of fact is i am following this story and i am in love with it so please continue according to your own wish...

10) You said you prefer long comments so here you got one just below your post!!😉

11) Btw calling you Delilah is seeming like uncomfortable... Would you mind in telling me your real name please😊

12) waiting for part 10...😃

Edited by barauni - 12 years ago

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#157

Res! Will un-res in a bit :)

**Edited**

Loved the update!

One thing they are both sure of death..any hidden meaning to this? I mean, we don't know of Arnav's past yet. His parents or family.

Anyway, love the way they are so comfortable with each other.

The way they look forward to meeting each other at the porch..

Their midnight 'snacks' 😆

And their nok-jhoks

Loved it!

P.S: Thanks for the warning about the sandwich 😆

P.P.S: I would go with shorter updates on a regular basis 😊

Edited by SaRunLicious - 12 years ago

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Enchante

@Enchante

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#158

How can two people be so cute? It defies the laws of the universe

Mid night snack (well at least she called it a snack😆) and they already are behaving like a couple...go to sleep orders, cooking together, talking on porch. So refreshing.

Oh and have I told you that I love your song collection? Unwritten is like one of my favorite songs.

Continue soon. I go with short regular updates. Daily doze ho gay hai ab yeh mera😆

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@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#159

amazing one dear
so they are at comfort level and are friends
arnav really loves his mom
so arnav made sandwiches which do no look like sandwiches
well i really enjoyed reading it
and i love midnight snacks...death is mine answer too
superb update
thanks for pm
will be waiting for next update