A Different Kind of Dance-SwaRon OS ;) PM's Later

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Namratha

@nami2811

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

I loved it! 😳
The song is so seductive n Swayam is d stripper ☺️
Poor Sharon! I pity that girl 😆
Thanks Deepika fro the PM. I would have missed a good one 😳

Quote

bhavika

@BhaviJas

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

well i m thinking ke me poor kisko bolu...bichare swayam ko jisko apni wife ke liye striptese karni pari...ya sharon jo apne aap ko swayam se dur nai rakh pai...
sooo both poor babies...😆
nd i luvd this hotty os...plsss do write more as i luv these types of os written for swaron...😉

Edited by vrushaan - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Neel

@neeliyer

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

awesomely naughty os .. it was really a different kinda dance 😆😆 .. poor sharon, her punishment got back fired 😆 .. loved it ..

nice work both of u ..

Quote

kshitija

@--Kshitz--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Res...
unres.
Supercool os guys...just loved it...
Its hilarious to imagine swayam doing such things n Sharon njoyin...Sharon is so naughty...
Loved each n every part...no the song selection too...
The dance was indeed very different...
Awesome work guys...

Edited by KS_SWARON - 12 years ago

Quote

Princess_Devil

@Princess_Devil

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awesome OS...
loved it...
swaron are tooo adorable...
nyc song selection ...
thnx frd pm...

Quote

prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Re_edited

Its one of the most naughty one shot...I just loved it..Song selection was superbb.. like its made for only SwaRon...

I loved the idea of seduction...And simply i cant stop laughing through out read...Swayam as a stripper..ROFL...

Loved the concept...Loved the way u expressed Swaron romance with song lyrics..I just imagine and i just can't stop my smiling...And loved the ending part...

I really enjoyed a naughty and romentic read..Great work..Keep writing more...

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago

Quote

Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

awesome... 😊 loved it.. 😊 cute and funny at same time.. 😉

Quote

Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sweetangelpayal
Ok I Edit..
Hola, Everyone...😃

Smarty Wad a Co Incidence..Even I am writing something with u for the first time😛😛

LOL...lame joke 😛...Vrushan IV yaad aa gya...tu bata kaunsa part..isne mere saath pehli baar kaam kiya he

You are mad, I love what you wrote, and I kept laughing so much. And ur work is NEVER lame

I seriously didnt like what I wrote 🥱

And madam, Concept aap ka tha, remember U told me Swayam seducing Sharon? And we ended up with this thought. But tuje yaad nahi hoga, itna time ho gaya, n tu budhi jo hain 😆

Mera concept 😲😲...tune writing pe bina baat ke credit diya..concept me bhi de rhi he..kya soch rhi he..is punya se tujhe Hritik mil jaega😛

So no u didnt add to my misery, u subtracted it..I mean agar tu nahi hoti toh ye os kabhi nahi likh paati main 😆😉

Me nehi hoti toh ye OS 1 month pehle post ho chuka hota😛

main bata du main kya kya sochi iske baad, what they did? 😳😳

Naa ..plzzz...khule forum me😲😲😲bezzati na kara🥱

Scolding..hahaha..u r too cute...Love You too my smarty 😃😳

LOL...me aur cute...cute toh aap ho ji...aur bhi bahut kuch😉😆🤣..love u too😳

Quote

Nishtha

@Jade_Precious

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

KYA BAAT
KYA BAAT
KYA BAAT
luvd dis OS
swaron
no...no... Actually swayam
kya baat
aisi harkatien rey se expected thi bt swayam... :-O
me toh literaly shocked

bt luvd d os it ws amazin