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Rabina

@raveena2807

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Well well well!!! What was that??? I will say, seduction at its best. Sharon's little plan backfiring. But who cares?? Its a win-win situation for both. And what else there is to imagine??? Everything is just there for everyone to see 😉!!!

P.S. The song is perfect!!! Okay, and I was trying to imagine Swayam( i.e. Shantanu) dancing in this song!!!

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Rabina

@raveena2807

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

And Deep, which were the lame parts you wrote... I was trying to find them but didn't find any... In short, there were not any... It was wonderful... Good job Payal and Deep... And never mind the delays if this is what we get to read afterwards!!!!

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Ahem Ahem. . I read it when I was feeling sleepy but after reading it I couldn't sleep at all. . :P My bad. .Lolz. . Imagining swayam in that avtar was like ahem ahem. . They both were losing themselves but still they were acting determined to win the Battle. . :D It's an amazing, sensously beautiful OS! Loved the way you both defined all the things and their behaviour. . It is written flawlessly. .

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

awesome os by two of my most fav writers

thanx for the pm

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

my god
me commenting on jas k behalf par
di it was splendid
i mean amazingly awesome
wow
how can u guys manage to write so wonderfulty
it was lyk the best pf what till i read upto today
and
the song sequence
uff
,agical
and
perfect
amzing work
frm,
jasleen and purva

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

lovely os..

great work.. perfect song

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Nice os :)

ROFL Swayam stripping for Shaon

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Hey guyz dis 1 is superb ...thanks marium...:p hahah...u guyzz are unbelievable...incredible OS but wen it cmes 2 swaron u always mermerize me... 😆
thanxx 4 d lovely Os
Anandita
P•S i don think isse zyaada wild imagination kisi ki hogi... 😆 😉

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

I know i'm extremely late in commenting but I swear I have valid reasons,sorry😳
this os was so much fun!
Reading about married SwaRon is always a treat and Swayam seducing Sharon is a big,juicy,red cherry on the top😛
Poor Sharon lost at her own game but I'm sure she didn't mind at all..i fact i don't think she even lost at all😉
As for what I imagined...oh..writing that would get me banned from this forum and as newbie its too soon to pull stunts like that😉😆