A Different Kind of Dance-SwaRon OS ;) PM's Later

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

awesome awesome awesome it was!!! 👏
it was so sexy!!! so naughty!!! and so hilarious 😆
god I loved it!!! ❤️
simply can't stop laughing 😛
Swayam the Stripper 🤣 🤣
awesome concept 👍🏼
thank you so much for the PM 🤗

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@Lawrentian_214

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

By default I have read all your works and I must say you're an apple of discord in writing beyond imagination. This time as always you nailed it to the core. An awestruck written OS By you. I loved it! 😉

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swapna

@shan16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

i loved it ..really a differnt kind of dance...n ya so is the os...a diffrent kind of OS from u ...happy wala ...with no sad drama ,,rona dhona...

its was so sentious n hawwt...

brillaint wrk by both of u...

keep writing OS's lyk dis...

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anushka1129

@anushka1129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

whatever written on swaron made me happy :-D ..n this one is so good..sharon plan backfire her ;-) if seducing is ur plan than obviously it will backfire na n who is doing all this" The Great Swayam";-) ..how can you resist him:$ ..it's just next to impossible :-D

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Comment re_edit on page no.6

Prateek

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Hey guys its a wonderful piece of work. Penned down so well. That I couldnt stop but laugh. They are incredible just like you two 🤣

Since the start I knew it had to be something like this but the title didnt give the slightest idea of it.

Anyways keep bringing such more works. I dont mind how much time you guys take 😉

PS: Aisa kuch likhne ke liye only Marium can demand. Kitna demand karti hai

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Awesome Os 😊

Sharon's revenge plan backfired on her only 😆

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Payal

@sweetangelpayal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

awesome update.. loved it.. it was superb... swayam cancelled date plan n sharon s angry on it n decided to tel him know how she felt.. n d revenge was superb.. swayam to do stripping n seduce sharon but it back fired on her was awesome.. loved d way sharon was controlling her.. loved d romance part n d intensity they share..

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

hey
this os has it all - fun, romance , passion , intensity, cute angry waala fight...
and though it was romance.. i had a smile on my face through the entire os...
and swayam and sharon were damn funny... but i can imagine such situations looking at their charaacters totally... angry siren and cutest yet naughty loverbboy.. with i know it all attitude
do write something more like this.. light fun... sometimes its nice to read such things...

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