A Different Kind of Dance-SwaRon OS ;) PM's Later

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Hola Friends😃. What happens when two of the biggest suckers for Sad stories come together to write a Happy OS? They fail misrably, curse their luck, but stand by each other, and slowly, very slowly, attempt to finish off something in More Than a Month, which Normal Souls would hardly take 10 days to write.

That is Deep(My Smarty) and Me(Her Smarty) 😆 For You All.

So Yes, this OS did take that long.

Oh and Marium This is the Happy OS u wanted. SO we dedicate it to you. I kept this a surprise from you all the while, that Smarty would be writing it with me, coz I wanted to know how you would react. I mean such sad souls we are na..Ok I know I mentioned that earlier. Just nervous bout it. Hope u like it. It took a lot of Effort, and Taunting each other to write Fatafat. 😆😆

So here You Go. And Speakers On

A Different Kind of Dance- SwaRon OS


"Idiot...Stupid...just go to hell u moron!" Sharon hit the send button on her phone.She made a 'dhip' sound as she sat on the couch pouting.
Her phone buzzed and she read the message."Hahahahaha" Swayam had replied.The reason for the message she'd sent was cause Swayam had cancelled their date.
"you are gonna pay for this Mr. Shekhawat" she muttered under her breath. She clutched her phone and swallowed hard to control her anger. Her eyes darted to the direction of their huge wedding photograph at the wall in front of her. She contemplated chucking her phone at it but decided against it.

***
*Ting tong*.He rang the bell for the third time and said a quick prayer. It was 10 in the night. He thought about ways of making up to her and hoped the bar of chocolate in his hand would be sufficient.
He was about to ring the bell again when Sharon opened the door. There she stood..his beautiful wife ..his angel...smiling. Nope she was grinning. From ear to ear.

He was surprised at her behaviour. Because he expected to yell at him. This was the third date after just two months into their marriage that he had cancelled. Ofcourse he had taken her on a few but it wouldnt matter would it?

"Swayam. You are back! So soon?"She widened her smile but he didnt miss the curt tone.
"yes..Sharon"He forced a smile knowing very well that this was the eerie calm before the storm. In his words..the calm before the siren went off.

She took his bag from him and went to the bedroom. He was about to follow her inside but something made him stop. It was his grumbling tummy. He looked at the food kept on the table. He looked at the room and back at the food, sighed and began eating. Afterall he would need energy to justify himself..loads of it.***
He entered the room and saw her standing at the window sill. He went and hugged her from behind. She jerked his hand away.

"I am so sor..." he began to say but she held out her hand asking him to stop.
He rolled his eyes at her drama and removed the chocolate his pocket and held it out to her. She turned away.Trouble!
"sharon wo kaam.."
"yes ofcourse i know kaam. So much work that this is the third date in two months. And am not talking only about this. Tumhare wajah se I had cancelled my hens party..coz u were sloshed after your bachelors..and now I still havent got time to mingle with my friends..Kria was right..all men change after marriage. Anyway good night." she walked upto the bed but he gripped her hand. She tried freeing herself but he kept holding her.
Atleast he was glad she had vented it all out.
"please.. I am sorry. I will do anything you say" he spoke in an earnest voice.
She quickly turned to him with a wicked smile on her face. So this was all planned. Her drama. He gulped hard and she bit back a chuckle.
"anything...phew...awesome." she said rubbing her hands together...oh no...she was smirking ...
"noo...sharon...nooo" he whined but she laughed an evil laughter..
She folded her hands behind her back and walked around him as she talked while he stood there helpless.
"like i said I didnt have a hens party..while you enjoyed your bachelors. I hope you know what such parties consist...booze..but lets drop that...i dont drink...strippers!"
She stopped walking and faced him.
"strippers? But you..i mean we are married. All this is done before marriage Sharon"
Another laughter from her.
"my darling husband. Here comes my point. You will be the stripper for me tonight. And you...will seduce me!"
She went closer to him as she said the last words. Swayam's eyes widened at this. He tried to open his mouth."and one more thing... I chose the song"
And she burst out into heaps of laughter. He stared at her hoping she was kidding. She will probably tell him its a joke and they would make up. Everything would be fine. He took a deep breath...exhaled.
She walked upto him."Sharon Shekhawat se panga liya hain tumne Mister." she snapped her hands in front of his eyes to bring him out of his chance.
"take it..or surrender"
There. That word she just used. Surrender. Now was the question of his ego."well...let the game begin Mrs. Shekhawat" he said grabbing her. For a moment she wondered if this was a bad idea. She chose to ignore the thought and played the song.
"And stop giving me looks like tum mera murder karoge...murder..murder...yes yes yes i got it..."
She said jumping up and down...and went towards the music player.


Yeh.. Raat Ruk Jaye
Baat Tham Jaye..
Teri Bahoon Mein

She switched on Music player and he could hear that tune...which was taunting his manhood...she walked towards him and placed a quick peck on his cheek while whispering "Good Luck Honey"...


Khwaishein Jagi Hain
Pyase Pyase Labon Pe
Sii..

He still stood there ..thinking about his plan of action...his beautiful and naughty Siren...A sensuous night full of sensations where he will seduce her..didn't sound too bad to him...


He stared at her who had made herself comfortable on the bed to enjoy "THE SHOW"...


"You are so going to regret this Siren"...he muttered under his breath while wearing his naughtiest hypnotic smile on his face...


"You don't have the whole night Mr Shekhwat"...she provoked him...


"Oh yes...I know...we have many interesting things to do tonight" he said and gave her a flying kiss..which immediately scared her...she just hoped her plan won't backfire...

He moved towards the switch board made the lights dim..sharon repented her moves looking at the naughty glint in those brown orbs... next he reached the Music system and replayed the song from the beginning...




Yeh.. Raat Ruk Jaye
Baat Tham Jaye..
Teri Bahoon Mein

A goofy smile played on his perfectly carved lips...notorious glint was clear in his eyes..his perfectly chiseled dancer body swinging with the music...he winked at her ….



Khwaishein Jagi Hain
Pyase Pyase Labon Pe
Sii..

He started undoing his tie with the music ...and threw it on her...she gave him a dirty glare to which he grinned more...



Khud Ko Jala Doon
Teri Aahon Mein
Aagosh Mein..
Mere Aaj Samah Jaa..

Jaane Kya Hona Hai Kal

He started moving towards the bed while dancing ...he removed his blazer on the way...took her hand in his and and made her stand next to him...



Aa Zara
Kareeb Se Jo Pal Mile
Naseeb Se
Aa Ja Zara
Kareeb Se Jo Pal Mile
Naseeb Se Jile'

Next moment he rubbed his body against her...like a professional ...his hot breaths tickled her bare skin...her body stiffened against his...she tried to move away ...he caught her hand...and made her bump into his chest...



Yeh Jahan..
Saara Bhool Kar..
Jismon Ke Saaye Tale
Dheemi Dheemi Saanse
Chale Raat Bhar

He started unbuttoning his shirt...she tried to stop him...as she got a clear hint that her plan has backfired...



Pal Do Pal
Hum Hain Humsafar
The Abhi Dono Yahan
Honge Subah Jane Kahan

He removed his shirt and and threw it on the bed...she looked at him and sighed...Why...Why ...he has to look so damn irresistible when she was trying so hard to resist him...his chiseled naked torso was so inviting..and that naughty smile and seducing expression on his face were not helping her either ….

He turned her around ..still moving his body with the music...his intoxicating scent was playing with her mind...he caressed her face and rubbed his right thumb on her full lips...his touch made her loose all the control she gathered that moment...she closed her eyes in anticipation...small pearl drops started forming on her forehead...her breathing became heavier...


Kya Khabar
Aa Ja Zara
Khud Ko Mujhme Mila Ja..
Jane Kya Hona Hai Kal

He looked at his siren...her eyes were closed...her trembling lips...he just wanted to gather her in his arms and kiss her till his last breath...NO...he had a battle to win …


She felt his warm breaths tickling her nape ...she opened her eyes and looked at him...he was smirking ...she was loosing in her own game...this can't be good...she cursed him under her breath...he grin became wider ...


Aa Zara
Kareeb Se Jo Pal Mile
Naseeb Se
Aa Ja Zara
Kareeb Se Jo Pal Mile
Naseeb Se Jile'

He started moving towards her while removing his belt...she walked backwards...he started placing feather kissed on her bare shoulder...playing with her senses...


Sharon Shekhwat ..can not loose..she tried to motivate herself...Thudd...next moment she pushed him away and sat on the bed to enjoy the rest of "the show"


Khwaab Hoon
Main Toh Makhmali..
Palkon Mein Le Ja Mujhe
Maine Diya Mauka Tujhe Ajanabi'Hi'

He simpered looking at her flushed...the tinge of pinking red encouraged him to play his cards further...he mentally patted himself and moved towards her swaying with the music..showing his seducing moves ...



Hosh Mein (Hosh Mein)
Aaye Naa Abhi

Ik Duje Mein Hi Kahin
Khoyi Rahe Teri Meri Zindagi..
Khamoshiyan Dhadkanon Ki
Suna.. Jaa
Jane Kya Hona Hai Kal

He moved his hands all over her bare shoulders ...he could feel her body shivering against his hands...

He suddenly remembered a certain movement he saw a stripped doing in his bachelors party...Woah.,..that will be fun..



While dancing he sat on her lap...and tried to move his hands on her face...


Ahhh..Swayam..you are so heavy...she groaned loudly and pushed him off her lap...poor guy fall on his back...he stood up rubbing his back...his gave her a deadly glare and pouted..his cute pout made her smile...she grinned looking at her husband...



Aa Zara
Kareeb Se Jo Pal Mile
Naseeb Se
Aa Jaa.. (Aa Jaa..)
Jo Pal Mile
Naseeb Se Jile..


You have to dance till the song ends honey...she challenged him...

Oh yeah...he said ….

He stood up while dancing...

Oh no..what is he trying to do ..she asked to herself …

He started unzipping his pants ...his eyes were beaming with his signature naughty glint...




Raat Ruk Jaye
Teri Bahoon Mein
Aagosh Mein
Aaj Mere Samah.. Jaa
Jane Kya Hona Hai Kal

She tried to hide her crimson red cheeks from him...this was supposed to be her revenge ….."bad move Siren"...he whispered huskily while sucking her earlobes...


Aa Zara
Kareeb Se Jo Pal Mile
Naseeb Se
Aa, Aa Zara
Kareeb Se Jo Pal Mile
Naseeb Se Jile..


As the song was about to end, Swayam tried to walk sexily towards the bed. Sharon was resting on the bed, hugging her pillow, blushing at his expressions. He bit his lower lip and she looked away.

As he walked, his foot slipped over a bedsheet which had been thrown around by him earlier trying on of his antic seduction techniques.

Sharon began bursting into peals of laughter as Swayam tried to balance himself. But he fell straight over her on the bed. Sharon immediately stopped laughing. Another bedsheet had somehow managed to cover his face and Sharon slowly pulled it down. She tried to get up immediately, still determined not to lose this battle, determined not to get absorbed in his eyes. As she was getting up, their lips brushed slightly.

There at that very moment, they both lost control over themselves. She grabbed him roughly and kissed him. He smirked slightly and kissed her back, as their toungues danced in each other's mouths, in synchronisation. She ruffled his hair as his hands waivered around her body, feeling every inch of her. She shut her eyes as he kissed her cheek and inhaled his deep masculine scent. Oh how she wished to hold him in her arms forever. The silly little prank long forgotten both of them made love like never before, and with each passing moment, fell for each other deeper and deeper

The End

PS: Jhootas, Chappals can be directed at Marium for making us write this 😆 Just Kidding. Hum saath hain, Smarty and I to face it all :P And Kindly do not ask what happens Next. Feel free to Imagine. That's why the open end 😛 Hum bhi dekhe how wild your thoughts go. So let us Know kya kya socha 😛 Isse zyada Khushi hum dono se bardasht nahi Hoti 😆😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok I Edit..
Hola, Everyone...😃

Smarty Wad a Co Incidence..Even I am writing something with u for the first time😛😛

You are mad, I love what you wrote, and I kept laughing so much. And ur work is NEVER lame

And madam, Concept aap ka tha, remember U told me Swayam seducing Sharon? And we ended up with this thought. But tuje yaad nahi hoga, itna time ho gaya, n tu budhi jo hain 😆

So no u didnt add to my misery, u subtracted it..I mean agar tu nahi hoti toh ye os kabhi nahi likh paati main 😆😉

main bata du main kya kya sochi iske baad, what they did? 😳😳

Scolding..hahaha..u r too cute...Love You too my smarty 😃😳
Edited by sweetangelpayal - 12 years ago
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Hey guys...🤗


I am writing something with payal for the 1st time...two suckers for tragedy when try their hands on comedy...this happens😆😆😆...the part written by payal is perfect...my part is super duper lame😛...sorry smarty...for spoiling ur mast wala concept😳

Concept & song selection was by payal..i just added to her misery ...i didn't help much😳

Well u can surely direct the joote ,chappal,tomato towards us...😛...i deserve them for delaying this OS for one month🥱

Still we hope you would like this OS...feel free to tell us what did u imagine further😛

PS- A special mention to my partner Nehal...without chanting her name...i can not write anything 😳...love u partner...😊

@Smarty...FINALLY😲
...We posted it...i delayed it for 1 month...still u didn't scold me😲...aww...u r a sweet heart..love u😳

Luv
Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Deeps Di is OS k liye u are asking for a sensuous song.. Blv me nvr did I think it wl b for dis different dance... 🤣.. A happy OS.. Or shud a say a hot sensuous OS? Brilliantly written bth of u. It strtd wit an angry Sharon nd her manaofying Majnu.. Nyc.. Loved deir chota sa cute fi8.. Nd den Sharon asked him what.. Stripping!!! Blv me imagining Swayam strip is hillarious... 🤣 nd the song.. Nyc selection guys.. It went rly well wit the situation.. Well after Swayam strtd stripping.. Mrs. Sekhawat strtd to loose herslf. This woman.. Jitni bhi determined hone ki koshish kare she fails miserably.. 😆 the stripping part ws great with Swayam trying to tke over nd Sharon trying to resist him... Ended deir their beautiful kiss... Lovely OS guys.. Come up with more joint works.. :)
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Edited!


Look who is here? 😎 I promised for one day reservation and here i am not edit it second day at time for the first time! Oh my gosh, are you dreaming? Nope. 😆 Stop smiling now and read the comment, you two cat women! 😳

Well, firstly thanks a lot to both of you sweeties for writing an OS for me as i really needed to read something amazing and sexy! 😛 I am bored with studies and i am not being able to study from 2 - 3 days at all! 😳 Thanks a lot Deepy and Payalia! 🤗

Well, when i read the title i was somewhat confused but when i clicked on the link and before even started reading, the song started and i was like OMG this is something amazing like i like! I totally love the song selection and Ouch it must have hurt Swwayam's manly ego! 😆

As it is a combine works so i am confused what to say individually to both the writers but thanks god you both didn't wrote something tragic or sad because believe me i wouldn't have read that thing at all! 😡

The OS was amazing, like i have read Sharon seducing and dancing for Swayam but omg this is something opposite and actually more exciting to read! Bechara Swayam must be dead scared of Sharon and when she saw Sharon grinning and all, i was like Oh bacchu teri kher nahi ab tu! 😆 First of all loved the part that even after marriage they both date and Swayam cancelled their date for 3rd time after marriage, he totally deserved what happened! 🤣

Loved how you both penned down each and every scene with song lyrics.. the way Sharon was blushing was utter cute and beautiful. I love when Sharon blushes for Swayam! :D How he seduced her by coming close to her and taking his shirt off and in end , when his started taking his belt off i was like.. go babe go! 🤣

I didn't know what the end will be the end was best because after all they are two body one soul and Sharon finally lose it all and give her handsome hubby a passionate kissy! Aww, loved the beautiful ending!


PS : You wicked payalia, i wanted s separate OS from you too remember? And now you will write one more OS for me separate to complete my demand and request too! (Eyelash batting) 😳 Muah, both of you! 🤗


-Marium





Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tannu_swayam

Deeps Di is OS k liye u are asking for a sensuous song.. Blv me nvr did I think it wl b for dis different dance... 🤣.. A happy OS.. Or shud a say a hot sensuous OS? Brilliantly written bth of u. It strtd wit an angry Sharon nd her manaofying Majnu.. Nyc.. Loved deir chota sa cute fi8.. Nd den Sharon asked him what.. Stripping!!! Blv me imagining Swayam strip is hillarious... 🤣 nd the song.. Nyc selection guys.. It went rly well wit the situation.. Well after Swayam strtd stripping.. Mrs. Sekhawat strtd to loose herslf. This woman.. Jitni bhi determined hone ki koshish kare she fails miserably.. 😆 the stripping part ws great with Swayam trying to tke over nd Sharon trying to resist him... Ended deir their beautiful kiss... Lovely OS guys.. Come up with more joint works.. :)



uzma..thats a different OS..not this one😳..i am posting it tomo...tere romance bhukha syndrome ke liye
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

uzma..thats a different OS..not this one😳..i am posting it tomo...tere romance bhukha syndrome ke liye


Are wah another OS.. This one did a lot of treatment to the syndrome di... Thanks for dis one...:) Waiting for ur OS!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Shit, Payalia maine abhi abhi emotions main akai mistake Lettre D'amour Swaron OS parh lia! I have swore ke main woh OS kabhi nahi parhungi.. shit and now i am crying all because of you.. ab tu iss OS pe unreserve kal hi hoga.;. aur likh tragedies! 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os

It was a happy os

Loved how it started with angry sharon n our majnu manaofying n their cute little fights

Joint venture of writing a os came out very nicely😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os lovely work
Thanks for the pm

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