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Megha

@megsy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

hahahahahahahaa ha hahahahahahaha ha...

dip and payal...a fabbb job done!! i swear i was laughing hysterically imaging tanu as swayam doing alll those and at the same time the it was sooo sensuous ke paseene chutt rahe the...it titillated me sooo much, m not kidding...

dippp phir se niyat bigad gayiii

the song was a superb selection...perrrfeecctttly suiting the situation... main to gaana gaa bhi rahi this while imagining swayam doing all those moves...

and bechari sharon... hamesha uska plan usppe backfire kar jaata hai... ab swayam ke aage koi kaise tik payega!! swayam to god of love and romance hai!

and you guys sure wouldnt want to know what i am imagining ke open ended scene ke baad kya kya hua...hayeee these love birds!!!!!!

Edited by megsy - 12 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

who chose that song?!!! i visited this page and that thing started when i had just begun absorbing myself in the naughty part and i jumped sky high.

by the way humara bechara swayam in d3 would probably die if this happened in reality to him.

deepu---your part, (wherever the bifurcation came between urs and payal's...could not make out...it was seamlessly written) did not miss any essential body parts...not lame, or blind, etc. it was fully functional...and as erm---naughty as can be.

these sort of writings need to be written just so---not too much and not too less---the hotness quotient and the love quotient must be balanced to stop them becoming eroticas from romantics.

and both of u nailed it.

i am gonna cool off

by standing in front of the deep freezer now.

love--medha

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

amazing os

loved it

well done

the song selection was amazing

i wwas literaly laughing thining swayam's condition...

bichara

it was really well written...

i loved it

please do write more

and do pm me

Edited by spongy - 12 years ago

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Tooba

@maliha_khan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Very sexy very sensuous os... Loved it👍🏼

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Woah. The song fit the OS perfectly . What should I say.. It was nice one.. sensuous.. And enough for me to go back to my drooling zone. :P

Nice combined effort.

Good job! 👍🏼

Edited by tanha29 - 12 years ago

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

amazing and hilarious OS! Loved this side of SwaRon! :D

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

superb os amazingly written👏...and tum dono toh bohot achha likthe ho yaar toh khud ki buraai karna band karo aur saath mein aur zyaada joint works deke hume prasann karo😆 thnks fr d pm😊

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

umm...

can i SAY im speechless.???

cause i dk how to react to what i just read...

i just realized i was feeling cold a little while ago and now...

not so much...

if this is what you guys call ''happy" OS...

then i CAN NOT wait to read more of these!!!!

wooo!!!!

that toally caught me off guard!!!

out of all the crazy turns this OS could have taken... i did not see that comin!!!

but definitely a great job!!

both of you did great!!!

P.S.

PERFECT song selection!!!!

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Great os guys..:) Swayam seducing sharon hehehe was vry innovative and I cnt stop smiling thinking swayam strip for sharon so the tables turned in this os..:) A perfect combo of romance passion and also comedy at the same time.. You're posting one more os deepika that lovely send me a pm of that as well..:) Loved loved loved this os great work guys..:)

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

🤪 it was 😳 ...

amazing... I was 😳 while reading it... gosh swayam like this... omg devil Sharon.. I loved her for that...

hats off to both of ... it was superb..

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