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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Little confused about Khushi here.. Will wait for next update to read more..

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meem17

@meem17

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Loved the update
Cant wait to find out
Who is the new guy
Felt bad for arshi
Ruined suhagraat

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: meem17
Loved the update
Cant wait to find out
Who is the new guy
Felt bad for arshi
Ruined suhagraat

Thank You for your comment but dont you think a lot more than a suhag raat has been ruined? :)

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

This was an insight into Khushis mind, perhaps another girl would have felt content at being married but clearly Khushi looked at the broader picture. You wrote exceptionally well as always but i loved how she compared the scent of her mendhi to that of a scrubbed clean floor. Her observations at how, perhaps the TV was repositioned to make space for her. Marriage signified an end to her freedom..and again another girl would be anxious or looking forward about their wedding night, but Khushi once again was miles ahead... Arnav saw all of this and perhaps he too for a moment realized.or though. was it a mistake..looking forward to more and to find out whose steel gray eyes...

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Definitely was not expecting them to get married so soon, and especially not the feelings that Khushi was experiencing. Instead of rejoicing being together with the man she loves and being protected by him, she is upset and feels like it's wrong...really wonder why that is?? It was too sad reading the end of the first part, where they both felt the contempt.

For the second part, I'm really curious to know what was going on. Why was Khushi at the upscale hotel? Can't believe people are so crude that they treat people like that (shows what class they have!).

Now the mystery man with the grey eyes...really hope he won't cause problems between Arnav and Khushi.

Looking forward to reading more!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: khoshalar

Ummm...what?

Is this some new way of commenting that I am not aware of? Anyone?

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

I needs name for steel gray eyes. I know comment is to come but I'm having to keep away from ze laptop :(

But Rae, will say it again, my heart breaks for Khushi, now and then

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#728

chapter 11

they are married now...

but she isn t able to accept the change in their relationship..

i guess arnav finds it like caging her to save her..n getting her married without asking her properly...

grey eyes...hmm someone unknown...

wanting to know this person...

fantastic update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

update the next soon dear😃

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: meera30
I needs name for steel gray eyes. I know comment is to come but I'm having to keep away from ze laptop :(

But Rae, will say it again, my heart breaks for Khushi, now and then

Thats okay, Meera...hope you are doing well. :)

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#730

Everything has changed with his one one-sided decision of calling her fiancee.

They both know feelings of the other and know what's hurting the other but still couldn't make up for it. How to get over, move on after this one change - it has become slightly impossible for them.

Khushi knows well what he did was for her safety and respect but still she can't help herself from feeling the betrayal.

It's heartbreaking to see them falling apart, to see everything once held dear to them breaking like this in front of their eyes with both knowing the reason and consequences.

You brought out the inner conflict of Khushi very brilliantly and the way their relation ha changed in this one and a half week.

Its ironical and strange that they were together, in sync with each other, in love with each other when they were not together and now when they are one for the world they have become two strangers, the love and trust nowhere to be seen.

The scene at the hotel was very much realistic. People of all statures stop and see the drama even if they are not part of it, that's human nature - curiosity.

After the supposedly heartbreak and betrayal now comes the man who, it looks like, is going to increase the cracks in their relationship.