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@__blossom__

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Awww...my heart went out to khushi...

Great Update!

Very well written

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Oho! Bechaari, my heart goes out to Khushi, again a life changing decision taken and she had no control over it, rather it was just out of anybody's control. Circumstances!!! And our Khushi has faced and fought many of them, so I think she will see it clearly once she lets out her first reactions. And though their future is dangerous, Arnav and Khushi will face it together and like Shyam, I'm happy too :)

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

This chapter was so beautiful. Every aspect showed that what both Arnav and Khushi did , their thoughts, their actions is justified in their own ways. Arnav making a decision for her, a very rational act but absolutely apt in their situation. But of course that statement was borne out of his love for Khushi, his need to protect her, her dignity and the sanctity of their relationship.

And my heart breaks for Khushi, she deserved every bit of happiness that should have come with this marriage. It was her chance to a new beginning, a life to be started afresh. And she should have had an equal say in all their decisions. But, fate is cruel. And I understand where all the tears, all the helplessness is coming from. Her trust is slightly shaken.

I wish happiness and peace to both of them.

A special mention for Shyam. He seems to me as a man mature far beyond his age. I'm assuming there is fear, and worry accompanying the joy he feels for Arnav at the news of his marriage. I'm beginning to love his character more than Arnav or Khushi's and this is a first.

Brilliant writing, as always! :D

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kristin

@sweet_5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

Good on you for marching on and continuing the story!

I think for Khushi she had thought that everything regarding their relationship would be dealt between the two of them. After years of being told what to do I can understand the breath of fresh air it must be for Khushi to be able to decide things on her own. Obviously her reality check came and it did not sit well, deep down I know that she will understand why Arnav did what he did in the future

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Minahil Nauman

@Minahil96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#695

Rae I Am Once Again In Love With Ur Writing Skills Sweetheart!

A Super Hit Writing Piece Once Again!

Loved It , Okay I Read It On The Blog But Posting The Comment Here So I Can Get A Reply From U! 😛

And Listen U Girl , We Are Always With U! Though U R Not Allowing Me To Read Ur Previous Work! 😆

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Anyways Good Luck!!

And Thankyou Once Again For The Super Story! 😊

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moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#696

A heartwrenching and numbing chapter. Poor Khushi...and poor Arnav to spring that on her.

I hope nothing gets in the way of the newly announced wedding...

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glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#697

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 12 years ago

#698

wow.. superb writing again.. awesome chapter..

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#699

for khushi when love had been rational and for arnav when heart had ever been rational.

both wanting same feeling from each other but again is situation able to give them chance.

what arnav do it didn't wrong, he done what was right at that time, to shut up everyone but on this way he hurt khushi

and this time khushi didn't cry on his shoulder, she left unequal, for her friendship gone wrong, to be loved questioned.

shyam knows both love each other, but is that so easy for both of them also.

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#700

chapter 8
Arnav's thoughts were that of a boy who has been longing for love and companionship for a very long time,who has seen the more ugly aspects of this world and who is burdened by his share of sins.
It was beautiful the way Arnav and Khushi stood strong for each other despite the horrifying situation.
Chapter 9
I can't imagine how it would feel to live at the mercy of the man who destroyed everything you ever held dear. No wonder Shyam fears Maamu-Jaan and Arnav is so protective of Shyam.Both the quotes in this chapter were beautiful.
chapter 10
Khushi was mourning for the loss of the trust and the equality in their relationship. It was heart breaking. Their decision to get married should have been an occasion worth rejoicing not filled with such sadness.
I dissappeared from IF for a long time and doing a lot of catching up.Sorry for being terribly late.
I saw your note regarding the disturbing accusation. It is ridiculous that someone would accuse you - a person who took the lead in fighting plagiarism.
All your readers stand with you Rae.