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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#701

That was an amazing chapter!

And I know you haven't proof read but check the 'Nave' bit when you do! :)

I really don't know how to feel about Maamu-jaan.
And Khushi, must be so confusing for her! I was in awe of the process with which Arnav just announced that she would be his wife. Would it have made a difference to Khushi if he had simply said they were going to get married?

Can't wait to read more! :)

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#702

ok i don't get it. is she that naive that she doesn't know the world they inhabit and its dangers? so big deal that he announced without falling on one knee, her answer was not going to change in light of what has happened in the story so far.

what was more important protecting her from the jibes of hoodlums or falling on one knee?

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#703

chapter ten..

khushi is surely hurt with the sudden decision...

but she will come through..

shyam is happy for his brother..

arnav hurting her..surely hurt both of them...

no matter what they seek comfort in each other...

marvelous update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

update the next soon dear😃

p.s. take ur time dear...dont stress urself too much.think its a passing phase in life..take care😃

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#704

Hey hun
In a way im glad i chanced upon this story
Because it is absolutely fantastic
An in another im really upset that i came across this piece of writing
Because it is fantastic

And i wish that i had come later so i could have read it all together
Because now it will give me sleepless nights and i will keep bothering you to update (nasty habit-i know)
But love, its a beautiful story

So sorry that you had to go through that accusation
Has it been dealt with...???

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#705

Chapter-10
The first dip in their journey of love and knowing each other. It's strange that it never happened when he got to know about her work, it didn't happen when they started to get to know each other, it didn't happen when she came for him not giving a damn for her own safety and it happened now when they are supposedly getting married.
I understand the hurt Khushi is feeling because she thought Arnav is the one who would treat her fairly in every aspect of life but he failed her at one major point - Their marriage in which they were to be considered equally.
She knows the situation wasn't such that he could have asked her but alas.. this heart!!!!
Loved it..

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#706

I can't wait to read where this is going to go. Thank you for the update!

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#707

Khushi's P.O.V. can b clearly understood...but I'm sure she realises the circumstances that made Arnav declare his decision without talking to her first bcos he has always given her the respect & regard that no one had/has bothered to...I'm really eager to read if Maamujaan is upto something now bcos I don't trust that man with yellow teeth one bit

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meem17

@meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#708

I read btlss for the second time few days ago
And except for the gangster theme
Both are worlds apart
The characterisation of arshi is also different
Few days ago if has lost a brilliant writer
Who was falsely accused of plagiarism
I don't want to lose another writer
Pls people stop jumping to conclusion
And angleteen I am falling in love with ure works

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#709

Originally posted by: meem17
I read btlss for the second time few days ago
And except for the gangster theme
Both are worlds apart
The characterisation of arshi is also different
Few days ago if has lost a brilliant writer
Who was falsely accused of plagiarism
I don't want to lose another writer
Pls people stop jumping to conclusion
And angleteen I am falling in love with ure works

Thanks for coming back here to clear this out.