[OS] Afterglow - Page 5

This is one beautiful work! <3 😳

simply amazing

i loved the way you have described the scenes. it was portrayed so well i his could visualize the moments...loved this

keep writing . hope to see more like this in upcoming days

all da best

bandiii ur awsssuuum
i was lost reading it wow wow wow

Originally posted by: kondhili

R...

Will take some time but will come back to unR this...Don't mind😉

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Not going to lie i was so looking forward to reading the OS from Its complicated. Hence was a little disappointed when you mentioned it was a random idea of yours but after reading this awesome OS words fail me. 😊

Hai that was such a poignant and vivid tale that you had going around there. The description were so detailed as if the whole show was running just in front of me.

No khushi just an arnav with an anamika who comes and goes but leaves a mark.

We can debate was she ghost, was she arnav's imagination but that will destroy the beautiful tale that you have penned out here.

A very visual and gripping tale which i couldn't seem to put down once i started.

You should definitely pen down your random ideas more often cause they are so amazing.

Thanks for the PM.

Liza

Hey Liza,

Firstly, thank you for such a lovely comment. I soo love your comments and always look forward to them :-)
Secondly, I know, I was rather disappointed with myself for not writing that OS while I had time. But this idea was hammering my brains for a while now, and I just couldn't hold it back anymore. Besides, I was just not inspired enough to write BD's POV (by then).

Anyway, I think you're one of the few readers who pointed out both the possibilities - "was she ghost, was she arnav's imagination".

So yes... thanks a lot again for the comment. :-) Loved reading your thoughts.
I would love to write more of these when the ideas strike again and time permits. 😊

Originally posted by: meem17

Heartbreakingly beautiful...
Heart breaking bacause its so short...for me...
I have been searching every nook and cranny of if...
To read something like this on arshi...
I did found some...but they only gave me tit bits of what I wanted tto see..
But u with only with this one os..capture ed something that I wanted ...to feel and read...just a suggestion as an ardent fan of ure writing...if in the future..
U want to start another ff on arshi...pls do it in a historical setting...
I would love to read...the feel that u gave in this os...made my heart bit increase..I was wishing that I dont finish it soon...I have reading it extra slowly...but all beautiful things comes to an end...this is one of ure best work up u till now...it wont be an exaggeration if i say that it was a masterpiece. ...do continue. ..and keep enchanting us with ure wonderful writing. ..

Thank you SO MUCH for this lovely comment, Meem.
I'm so glad that you liked it so much 😊 and finally found in this what you were looking for.

And I would LOVE TO write something historical. But I'm kind of obsessed with period romances and people from history. So if I write something I want it to be perfect and keeping up with facts a little. So I hope an idea strikes soon :-)

Anyway, thank you so much for the encouraging words.

Originally posted by: -Harjas-

OMG! Beautiful OS i've ever read! But it was kinda sad. It has potential to turn into some SS or FF. Please update the next part! I guess she's a spirit! Please write another part for this, i can't get sleep until then!

Hey thanks for the comment :-)

I would to continue this, but the ideas of how to go about it are not very clear, and neither do I think that they're going to be cleared anytime soon. So for now, it remains an OS. But maybe someday... if I form a proper story in mind, I might just be tempted enough to write another part or two.

I really hope got sleep last night :S :P

U always surprised us with ur writing...

Tum unres karne se pehle like kar deti ho..!
jao padho ja ke apni tareef page 7 par.. :P

Originally posted by: Anarocksick

Hey thanks for the comment :-)

I would to continue this, but the ideas of how to go about it are not very clear, and neither do I think that they're going to be cleared anytime soon. So for now, it remains an OS. But maybe someday... if I form a proper story in mind, I might just be tempted enough to write another part or two.

I really hope got sleep last night :S :P

It's different and nice as well. Thanks for the pm.