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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Resd to be unresd later.

Will let u know.

Recommended by my Choti (lazyleaves)

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Colors, colors, colors everywhere...

The stage, the sky, the clothes, her outfit, everything was described through colors.

And I had guessed the moment she had appeared in white jingling her way through the corridors that she is either a sprite or a spirit...

But that didnt stop me from reading further, not even her warning to Arnav and us that Arnav and she couldnt fall in love.

We want to fall in love with a Goddess.

You havent mentioned that it is Khushi he is pursuing. But since he fell in love, I am assuming she is Khushi.

Great work 👏

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

that was just beautiful and it was recommended by lazyleaves! im gald she did! this was awesome

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Beautiful OS.
I haven't read anything like that. It was beautiful visually with all the depictions.
Ohh but the not so happy ending... "because if you touch me, you'd never be able to forget"

Thanks lazyleaves for recommending it😊

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

A very unusually exquisite piece of work! :D

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lovelyangel

@lovelyangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

First of all thanks to Zahra...otherwise I would have missed it

This os is enchanting...it is exquisite. Concept is creative, I haven't read anything remotely similar to it. You have communicated alot and yet left so much to reader's imagination and you have done all that magically. This is the first work of yours that I have read...and I am blown away by it. I am filled with vivid images of this os, in short your writing skills uff kia kahun mesmerizing. This is superb and I would love to read more of your works.

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Some things are best remained unanswered. This is one of those. The piece is mesmerizing, stunning and has rendered me speechless. I thank lazyleaves for highlighting this piece.:D

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arushi vaishnav

@arushiashvik

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

beautiful os

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mssj

@mssj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

That was just too brilliant. There were questions that were left in my mind after reading this piece if writing. But I'm not going to too much into it cuz the story is simply amazing. Great work.