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Mahnoor

@Lalaland222

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

She was dead? :/

I want to knooowww. :(

But it was so beautiful. I imagined every second of it.

It was... Perfect. ^_^

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Venicestar88

@Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

oh boy! that is some writing...! the images you've created, that sound of her payals, that conversation... WOW!

thanks for the pm x

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

I think I now know what it is to be mesmerized!! A beautiful, haunting story. She had to be a ghost but it felt so real.

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

*swoons into a pile of mess*

This was so damn beautiful!!!!!

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Wow... that was brilliant !!

I kinda felt sad for Arnav in the end looking for something that does not exist !

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

R.

Firstly,all the best for your tests.

Secondly, i need to gather my thoughts for this. Would comment properly later.

Edited-

you simply outdo yourself only everytime you write. You have the most innovative ideas or you present them differently.

I just cant cite out instances from this to tell you how did I find them coz it would be injustice. Brilliantly unique. And the narration! Pleasantly illustrative.. Ends on a melancholic note and il sulk for a while now but this is terrific.

And il pat my back. I had an inkling where this would lead when i saw the name and how Khushi talked. It was mysterious. And then when she had refused to answer him. 8-)

Edited by Anupama. - 12 years ago

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sugandha mishra

@sugu2569

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

just one word this time ... MESMERIZING !!!! :)

and ...ZING is for the extra *zing in this os

Edited by sugu2569 - 12 years ago

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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

It was like reading a fairytale. something out of the world.The words gave a poignant feeling.

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Anamika Kumari

@Anamikarocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

I was disappointed that you didn't kept your promise!!!

But to tell you the truth...I'm at peace!!!😊

I don't give a damn now what you should have done or not!!!🤢

I am just mesmerized by this beautiful and amazing OS!!!!⭐️

When I was reading earlier...thoughts like she is a ghost , imagination OR hallucination were coming...but now I'm at peace in my mind...just blank and still deciphering the words of the girl...reason of her tears...her disappointment for Arnav...😲

They can't be together!!!... but the love, the afterglow of the beautiful love would be there forever!!!😊