[OS] Afterglow

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

None of Anyone's Business Dear Stalker ;)

@.Boss.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

OMG! Beautiful OS i've ever read! But it was kinda sad. It has potential to turn into some SS or FF. Please update the next part! I guess she's a spirit! Please write another part for this, i can't get sleep until then!

Quote

1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

I am from Jaipur and have been to the Amer Fort nd palace multiple times.

But it will never be the same again for me.

I just loved this story.

The way you have incorporated Chan Chan with Khushi Arnav's story is amazing

Loved the hint of the super natural mixed with the present times.

Beautiful story. loved it.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

one word epic

i loved it

i think u can change into SS

superb and mesmerizing OS

i am speechless and picture perfect

Quote

Srija Singh

@srija.singh04

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Wow👏

Now that was truly magical👏

brilliant work👏

And for some reason I am not happy but neither am i sad after reading it... coz isn't it blessing enough to actually find a love so true, so eternal after all?

Quote

vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

It was beautiful...don't even want to know why and what!

Quote

utthra1208

@utthra1208

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

loved it...
amazing os...its not just a os it has much more to it...
well written

Quote

S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

WOW it was different
loved it

Quote

asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

It ws sheer beauty... D way u decribed d gal she sounded lyk an epitome f beauty... I mst say u r a creative, poetic n descriptive writer... Very well done... 😃