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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heartbreakingly beautiful...
Heart breaking bacause its so short...for me...
I have been searching every nook and cranny of if...
To read something like this on arshi...
I did found some...but they only gave me tit bits of what I wanted tto see..
But u with only with this one os..capture ed something that I wanted ...to feel and read...just a suggestion as an ardent fan of ure writing...if in the future..
U want to start another ff on arshi...pls do it in a historical setting...
I would love to read...the feel that u gave in this os...made my heart bit increase..I was wishing that I dont finish it soon...I have reading it extra slowly...but all beautiful things comes to an end...this is one of ure best work up u till now...it wont be an exaggeration if i say that it was a masterpiece. ...do continue. ..and keep enchanting us with ure wonderful writing. ..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os...will comment properly on sunday or monday after my exam
reallyhappy thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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2 b tru,,meko ye jaada smajh nai aaya..:(he met her..n she wntd him 2 fall in lov..she new ol abt him..n den afta d performnce she was nowhr..wt did dt mean?was she really n apsara or wt?she said,,he wud nt b able 2 4get her..n here he actually cudnt..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely. Had a poetic touch.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome story. Beautifuly written. Is he heartbroken again? Hope he soon finds his love. Thanks 4 pm
Tamaru thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
It was indeed very beautiful
luvd it
its the first time i read somethng like this but it was amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was Amazing, when I was reading it, i got the Idea that she must be spirit as how you Protray it, but still how you wrote the whole thing, till the end I wasn't sure..šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Nice very Nice..
Enjoy Writing..😊
Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Absolutely Beautiful OS šŸ‘


lin2002 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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can u pls..turn this into an ff...:)...
i really didnt read any such concept..evr...so pls...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
This OS is definitely different.
The title is apt for this one
It was a bit sad but it leaves an afterglow
Beautifully written too

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