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you wouldn't believe if I say I've read this thrice, but I did. Arnav seems like he is falling and hard. Can't wait to see what will happen in regards of lavanya.

Aww...such a cute update.

Waah lavaji that was such a cute update.

caught up with all the updates...and loved each one..

Well RK seems bewitched by Dadi..:) They make a nice team..

Awesome...just got this ff now...and man its AMAZING...please can you pm me for updates!

:D who indeed? I'm really curious about what ranvijay said to Khushi too!

hey such a beautiful story... PM me ur nxt update...

I'm sorry for being lethargic in commenting on your works...

I've read 'Mirage' and I can't express how delighted I was when I read it completely. I had so many things to say about your style during Mirage but never got real chance to do so. But when I started this FF, I said to myself that I need to articulate all those at least for this FF and put them in the comments somewhere...

I'm not good at analyzing the depth of the story or the personality of the characters but you have a very unique style which made me pay attention to every single detail of your sentences.

Coming to this FF, I know you've mentioned in one of your A/Ns about flashback which won't be revealed until the end and I'm absolutely fine with it given my experience with 'Mirage'. But one thing though, I feel that it is not just Arnav that is aware of the incident in the past but I guess Dadi also. Because she's been keen in getting these two together whenever she finds an opportunity. That is something very unusual for a lady who is affluent to try to get her grandson associate with a girl from a middle class family. Obviously she is taking Rajvir's help for that. If I'm not wrong, Dadi before trying to bring these two together, she first made sure that Arnav still has the same warmth and then proceeded with her plan. I think Rajvir flirting with Khushi in front of Arnav could be either fabricated or coincidental but in any case Dadi got the confirmation that Arnav still wants Khushi with that incident. She might have already got complete picture of Khushi's heart but she needed to confirm about Arnav.

Khushi is a girl who wants to just get back her only best friend in her entire world and Arnav is defeated soul who is lost due to some dark past and trying to search himself and his heart at the same time. I totally understand how you are trying to display their pain but I'm just short of words to express what I understoodJ

I have to say few things about your writing style – You not only write like a seasoned writer but the amount of flickering emotions you show in your characters is just amazing as if a person who got wealth of knowledge from his/her own practical experiences; and not to forget the events and incidents that lead one to another is just AWESOME; and I also got fascinated by the way you describe the surroundings.

And how do you come up with those random childhood events!!!! THAT is just BRILLIANT!!! I'm not a writer but I don't think it's that easy to come up with those random events between the characters…Net- Net, you seem like write so effortless. When you start your pen it just pours all your mind on the paper I guess.

Just finished reading chapters 12th, 13th and 14th. Very
beautiful updates. In chapter 12 loved how Dadi persuaded
Arnav to get a massage done by khushi 😳 . In chapter 13
loved how khushi goes thru all the trouble to get food to the kids
and to see the smile on their faces. The selflessness of khushi
is so touching. The part where Arnav realizes how lucky he is to be
surrounded by people who love him was very beautiful written.

In chapter 14 love how RK is irritating Arnav 😆 . I love the secret
meetings of Dadi and RK. Only khushi could name the furballs as basanti
and gabbar 🤣 .
I forgot to mention two things the last time I commented
1) congratulations on starting a new thread.
2) the banner of TTB is so beautiful.