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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#621

😃

Awesome update ...

just shows how aloof Arnav had made himself by staying away from

home and the people who love him ...

being with Khushi he is learning again how to find happiness in simple everyday

things and doing little little things for others and deriving immense happiness

and pleasure from it ...

and most importantly ... learning to share with the more unfortunate ... 😊

The scene at the orphanage was really beautifully written ...

could imagine the happiness and excitement on the faces of all the little children

on receiving their own personal gifts ...

The last scene was too cute ... Khushi licking her chocolate like a kid ...

Thanks ML ... loved it ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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Shazeia

@shaz007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Each update gets more interesting and intriguing. I love your story as it makes me not just read through rather read between the lines...another long wait till Sunday 😉

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

Choco-licious update <3

Loved it😉

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

I read the chapter last night and read it again just now. I am not sure exactly why but this chapter really connected with me so well. I loved it. Very much.

The first line that caught me was - everything was in order. And then .. he smiled foolishly. Arnav Singh Raizada, the man whom you introduced to us, has started smiling foolishly and not being bothered about it. The rest is for us to feel and go awhhh and smile .. 😊

The brother-sister dilemma .. I just loved how you brought this equation. The fear they could not reason .. but was more than relieved to get it over with. This story is still very much from Arnav's POV. I really wanted to know Khushi's POV for the first time when you mentioned she too felt relaxed knowing Arnav did not think him as a sister. So far we are just observing the growth in and layering of Arnav's character. Khushi .. we have to assume or just take her as seen through Arnav's eyes. He has finally noticed and realized how she always hides her pain through her smile. So what's the plan lady? Will we get her POV? Or do you want to keep this story from Arnav's POV mostly?

The orphanage moments seemed to have bonded these two at a different level. And the chocolate scene was .. awesome! I loved it so much! What happened between them, sitting on the stairs .. that is supposed to stir something inside Arnav. I will wait to see what you have planned.

PS: So Naina finds out?

Edited by Omoraboti - 12 years ago

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Lovely update.. awesome work really..

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Loved it :) i wish i could write longer comments but i gues i'll stick to shorter ones as im not good at writing longer ones . Hope you are okay with it. Jus wanna say i love this story. Bas. Love you too :)

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thesis

@thesis

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

i was intrigued withur note man its an observation i need to learn to make ps woww that was a job well done man iloved every bit of it i am interested to see how the chemical equation change i loved there conversation amjust still discovering love ur writing gal ps Sunday plsss cum soon

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

fantastic update.actually arnav went back to his childhood .did he used to lick her hands at that time too? simple gestures but very romantic and touching .i can really imagine a dump found khushi sitting on the step .

interaction with the kids were very touching too.he did that to make khushi happy and the only thing that he wanted now is her smile .i am really ovr whelmed reading this update

i must say you are amazing

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#629

"Not all people who laugh are happy. Sometimes, laughter is the only way they know to hide the inner turmoil and sorrow eating them from the inside. Reach out to such people because they are the ones who actually need a shoulder to cry upon."

This quote is so true...

I loved this update...the way Arnav has loosened up around Khushi...the way they both definitely do not think of each other as siblings. 😆

I've been waiting for the people who do not support Arnav becoming closer with Khushi and it seems like one is at least coming out of the woodwork. I'm also waiting for Lavanya to make an appearance...what will Khushi do then? My heart already bleeds over what she has had to endure and I cannot bear her sadness...

Beautiful chapter!