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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

so happy 2 c u back. I had read mirage wen u wer away frm if. I loved dat story, nw m loving dis.
Read ol parts 2gthr nw. Beautifuly written. Love d flashbacks. Love kukku nd aanyav. Loved each nd evry updates. Emotions r beautifuly written. U make me cry too during d pain felt by arshi. Rk, is he helping out or playng any games? Wats d past? A wild guess. Did any1 misbehave wid khushi, a physical torture, nd vch was witnessd by arnav, i guess so. Khushi is changing. She was d 1 hell bent 2 make arnav realise deir frndshp nd nw arnav wen cuming out of hs shell, khushi is keeping distance.
I knw der is many mysteries 2 unfold nd waitng 4 dat updates.
Aftr reading mirage, i hav a faint idea, how u take up d story. It makes me believe dat khushi is obvious 2 d reason y arnav left her 15 yrs back. Waitng 4 story 2 unfold. Waitng 4 next chapters.
Btw ur update is in avaters nd signature forum, cn u jst transfr 2 fanfictions. Its difficulty 2 search. Nd btw u didnt tel wen vl b d nxt update.

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ankitamishra201

@ankitamishra201

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

awesome concept read it in one go waiting for more

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Congrats on the new thread!!

I just read the last two updates, RK is just way too comfortable for a soon to be Son-in-law. Why does Anjali not sense the creepiness I do LOL

I bet one of Arnav's family members have planted that whole class thing in Khushi's mind. At the same time it's a defense thing for her, why should she completely open up if she knows he's going to leave again and who knows if it will take another fifteen years. A part of me thinks Arnav does deserve the cold shoulder, In the beginning I thought Khushi was way to nice to Arnav. I would have have been one pissed of woman if I was Khushi

I'm very excited to see the wedding,that's if it happens ;)

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Fifteen years of desperation and longing had ultimately boiled down to this one moment and when it came alive, she wanted it to last for the next fifteen years.

But she was brought back to the reality by the deep distinct sound of his heart thumping on his chest, making her realise that this was all real.

This was not a dream that she could hold on to.

That one section really summed it up for me. So much happened in their shared past yet the truth was he did leave and she relied so much on their friendship and regaining that and a moment just one moment is something she could hold onto forever. It broke my heart as did the end of this chapter where reality truly dampened what the two shared. He was going to leave and once again she would be left with just one moment. You can't root for just one person here, you root for them both. It's another great chapter.

BTW could definitely live without Manorama, but she does have a way of bringing out one's insecurities, doesn't she?

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

amazing update congrats on new thread

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melonie

@melonie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Hi,

Will read the update and comment later. Liked the pleasant surprise 😃

But is there a reason why you made this thread in Avatar & Signature shop forum?

Edited by melonie - 12 years ago

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neena

@shadesofme

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

congo for new thread🥳
but wrong forum

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Khushi's fears are reasonable...

If she becomes friends with him now, she'll be in more pain when he leaves...
And not to forget her feelings when she hugged him... how can she even nurture such feelings when his family constantly reminds her that she is just a servant?? except dadi..

thank u.

kushiarnav1.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

First of all congrats on the new thread, hope this story has many more.

Loved the update it was amazing and brilliant, yet quite emotional.

Wow the hug was beautiful and so heart warming, they both realised a strong feeling between them and Arnav realised they could be soul mates.

Poor Khushi was so distraught when Mami called her a servant and saying she could not attend the nuptials, loved the fact that Arnav actually suggested it to the family and Dadi agreed as well.

However Arnav was shocked because even if Khushi is his best friend to the family she is just a servant.

Wow, Arnav actually went to khushi's house to personally ask Khushi to the nuptials, but she denied. Poor Khushi is confused because the hug has stirred different feelings in her and she is thinking she has crossed the line.

Arnav got angry at her refusal, but khushi knows that Arnav is leaving for London soon, she does not want to face abandoned again.

Hope they make up and hopefully Arnav understand khushi's reason for refusal, well we can always have Vij enter and play Cupid.

Please continue soon xx

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Superb Update...

The first part of the update was sweet...Them hugging each other...kind off reminisceing of their childhood friendship yet a start of a beautiful bond...

It is nice that Arnav wants to do amends but it is going to be harder than it seems as his family 's perspective of her is not more than a servant...

But the later part was like a punch in the gut...when mami addressed khushi as a servant...That is the truth...everyone else apart from dadi and maybe Ranvijay think of her only as the house help...

Khushi's fears are justified...Moreover Arnav is here only for his sister's wedding and will be leaving soon...Whatever happens she is going to have to face the accusations from the society owing to her class and status...

Update soon...

Edited by musicfan5 - 12 years ago

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