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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Congratulation for the new thread dear 🥳
The chapter was awesome
I just hate it as there friendship is decided because of their status

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Congrats for the new thread.
Another wonderful update.
You are getting into a habit of giving very pleasant surprise with the updates... love the updates...' aane do'...keep them coming.

So Khushi has now decided that she belong to a lower class and status than Arnav so she can't be friends with him... It has to be a relation of master and servant ... is it really because of this sudden realisation or because of the things she felt when they hugged... how long she will be able to keep the resolve... until Lavanya arrives? Or the realisation that she loves him will come to her before than... I put my bet on the former.

Arnav has come out of denial and wants to make amends... let's see how he manages it as Khushi has decided to put distance between them. Arnav has walked away in anger saying that he does not care... Well we don't believe him... I don't think he believes it himself... they were just words... Empty words.

Let's see where we go from here.
Adorable story... Absolutly love it.
Thanks for the update.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Loved the surprise.

The hug had different reactions from both.

Khushi thinks it is wrong.

Arnav doesnot agree with her but Khushi is right in her own way.

Our society is such that the caste and class system is deeply imbedded in it.

We might think ourselves to be educated and broad minded but we definitely donot mingle with people who are from a so called lower class. This is how the world is.

Hope to be surprised soon.

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Regardless of Arna's anger at the situation, I feel that Khushi was reasonable in her response to him at the end. The hug stirred up feelings or attraction for him from her end (I'm guessing), and she's smart enough to realize that it would not work out between the two, regardless of their feelings and attraction, because a) he's moving back to London in a month and b)nobody in his family would accept them together...I'm sure most of them don't even accept their past friendship, so they certainly wouldn't appreciate them being close as adults. Also, she's right that she doesn't want to get hurt again after rekindling their friendship as he is bound to leave her again, and she knows what that disappointment feels like.

I just love the way you write, and portray all these emotions. I really hope that Arnav can come to understand Khushi's point of view, and not let his anger cloud his judgement.

Thanks for quick update once again. It definitely was a nice surprise!

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@..mrinalini..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Read both the chapters🤗

It was all very poignant and exquisite.The hug,their reactions to it..it was expected I guess.Khushi is bound to think about the society,Arnav might not get her point,but that's how middle class societies function😵

You have taken a very subtle route and I have never read this kind of stuff before.So am all excited😳

Ranvijay-he's surprising me🤔

Love Dadi.I guess I have never said this before but I absolutely adore her.She is acting as a cupid and I'd love to think Ranvijay has similar intentions too😳

You are an amazing writer.No kidding👍🏼Take as many bows as you can⭐️😆

Will be waiting for more surprises-from you and ArHi as well😉😛

Congrats on thread 2🥳

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

u r sometime full of surprises

chapter9 and 10

Ranvijay...Ooo when i relize i understand his character there u show his new dimension

why he want khushi join them during trip and he actually focused to make plan to leave arnav khushi alone

khushi from 15 years she was leaving with memories of her friendship with her annyva and he's also but guilt overcome him

That hug...

Amends

Guilt

Return home

Friendship

Consoling

and something new

They still unable to name it but Khushi know she crossed the limit they are not kids anymore how difficult to feel that that childhood innocence is no more there now u always well mature and understand human now

They are a mature persons who have to answers elders

their childhood memories are so innocent like annyva and kuku

Nani comment on mami :D

arnav wants khushi come in Nuptials even dadi

dadi and khushi share strong bond i feel dadi knows in arnav khushi friendship there's something more than friendship and she's trying to catch it that's y she agree to send khushi with all to trip

khushi honestly speak with arnav with all reality and truths which she face and to some extend its really hard for her to accept that also

That hug brings change , she's trying to accept social reality and arnav himself also

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

omg! that's one heck of an wondersome ff...can't believe arnav left her for 15 long yrs!! how can he..its just not fair..khushi suffered frm loneliness like anything so much so that she had mastered the art of playing chess jus by herself...smart girl😊 m loving her character here..really its a wonder how childhood brings so many good memories just bcoz we behave just like ourselves during that phase of time..having no care wat the world thinks abt us.. enjoyin whatevr our heart tells us to..even our minds are in sync with our hearts...its strange that we wud actually be the total opposites of wat we were wen we become adults..and all this bcoz of the frigging people n society around us..khushi n arnav's childhood flashbacks are really soothing n enjoyable..how can these two be so cute n carefree back then...

wonder what terrible incident happened to khushi 15 yrs back..pls don't tell me its not wat i'm thinking...that wud be really heartbreaking n painful, imagining it happening to just a 10 yr old girl...but the part which is gettin me really worried is that arnav saw it happening, n yet preferred to keep mum n avoid her...what will happen wen khushi gets to knw abt this?..that her best friend didnt do anything to save her n didnt find it necessary to comfort her..wil she forgive him then?? anyway, m loving how he is trying to make amends..loved the new set of feelings budding in their hearts..felt bad wen he got angry n left frm there..but wat khushi told was right in its own way..what once he goes back to london?its something which only a girl hav to face...facing societal taunts n all..got so happy that ranvijay turned out to be the unexpected cupid..looking forward to enjoy this ff that i discovered just today...ur ff mirage has hooked me like nothing..the action scenes there were just wow!! whereas this ff has got a tender n soft feel of love which is vry beautiful..

Edited by poojasidd123 - 12 years ago

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

awww, I absolutely adored the part where arnav was watching her with his dadi. that was such a sweet moment.
but then mami had to butt in and ruin it :@

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samirao

@samirao

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

u surprise me again dear writer , first of all congrats on ur new thread , ur story truly deserve that and much more, now the update , was epic , very gripping as always , but I have 1 big q in my mind , and ita about arnav , IS HE DOING ALL THESE GOOD THINGS WITH KHUSHI CUZ OF HIS GUILT , OR HE REALLY INTRESTED AND ATTRACTED TOWARDS HER, I don't get it, any way I was so happy with the last update , I thought that they took one step forward , but now it looks like they took 2 step back word, ,,dear writer have mercy on our poor souls , and plz bring the love birds together , ,

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

I am so glad I stumbled on to this FF!! Love the way you are writing each character and those emotions!! It has been roller coaster ride so far.. And i am enjoying every minute of it!'