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sree_dey

@sree_dey

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

I knw my previous comment dint make ne sense..😆
THANKS for the update dear...

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sree_dey

@sree_dey

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Havent read chap 10 still...i ll read by 2mrw nd comment on it 😊

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cherryteacake

@cherryteacake

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Love Dadis and Khushis relationship, at least there's somebody else who regards Khushi as more than a servant. Oooh both have them have realised there's something beyond friendship between them...damn all the 'status' palaver that sadly Khushi would be the most vulnerable at being subjected to. Many thanks for the quick updates 😊

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

eht can i say awesome awesome. please update soon.

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megh.arhi

@megh.arhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Awesome update.Pls continue soon. 😊

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

this is such a pleasant surprise... am sooo very happy u updated... n congrtz on the new thread...
needless to say tht the update was good... i can understand the turmoil khushi is in... its quite reasonable...but arnav doesnt seem to care about any of tht... i wonder how he will mk her let go of her apprehension especially when the rest of the world is alwys reminding her of her place... i missed the little kukkoo n her aynaav...
and i hope u get alot of free time.. ;)

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Wow! May your creativity be always at its best and let you surprise us like this frequently.

Alors, I loved the update. Every time I read Khushi watching them from a distance, I fell a pinch to my heart, it saddens me. Why do we have this social divide? Based on whatever, income levels, region, language ethnicity... Didn't man form societies because he found it better to live 'together'? Then why and when these social norms became shackles? Is it true when they say that the rich can do anything without caring much as they can hush it all with the money?

As much as I love to read Cinderella finding her Prince Charming or Lizzy uniting with her Mr Darcy, I too do fear of people's opinion or reaction. I lack that courage to be free. Aren't I a hypocrite?

Enough of my blabbers, you have penned this down amazingly. You don't just make me enjoy my reads, but give some food for thought too. Ciao :)

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minuu

@minuu

Trailblazer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Thread has been moved to A&S forum by mistake. I'd like to apologise for the inconvenience, have asked one of the A&S DT members to move the thread to the FF forum.

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

who would've thought that a hug could cause so much damage...

actually its not the hug its the feelings they felt while hugging each other i actually feel sorry for them...

but wat i dont understand is how can khushi get alarmed by just a single act after waiting 15 years to have him back...

and so much for wanting to make amends he just left...but i know he's going to convince her, persuade her...

cant wait for the next chapter...

loved it!

and congrats on the new thread!😊

Edited by __blossom__ - 12 years ago

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Khuarv

@Khuarv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

I just loved the ff mirage. You are an absolutely brilliant
writer and kudos to you for your ff "Mirage". Happy to
know that you have started another one.Just came
across this ff. The characters and the story is so amazingly
interwoven. I love your subtle storytelling.
That as a reader knowing that this is fiction ,I can't seem
to control feeling the pathos, agony or happiness or whatever
emotion the said character is expressing at that moment.

Arnav's guilt is beautifully potrayed but the most heart
wrenching is the loneliness of khushi and how she missed
her best friend thru all those years. Hope these both cross
the social barriers and whatever happened in the past and
love each other. Ready to wait for the story to progress further.
Once again a brilliant job 👏 .

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