Arhi TwoShot : On Resisting Temptation *complete*

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Brilliant and fabulous start to the two shot, I just love your writing its absolutely phenomenal and the update was written beautifully and exceptionally well. So poor Arnav was getting so frustrated because khushi had been ignoring him for 4 weeks, loved the kitchen scene it was simply superb. Loved the part where Arnav said he can resist everything apart from temptation and also loved the way he tried to get khushi's attention by eating the Laddoo with the sugar in it and it worked. The ending was amazing when Arnav said delicious and he was implying it to khushi and then said also to the Laddoo. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

Thank you so much!! Very happy and humbled that you enjoyed all the different aspects of this update, and even happier that you took the time to type out what you liked! That always means a lot to me - I'm really moved :) Thank you!! The quote is one of my favourites and I was sorely tempted to use it in an Arhi story, so I'm really glad you enjoyed it too!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: desisoaps05
As usual- THAT WAS SOOO CUTE! I LOVED IT. Of course you should continue! (and everything else you write too :P )

Aw, now I'm blushing again! Thank you sooo much :) It's really sweet of you!

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe
beautifully written

Thank you!

Originally posted by: khushiarnav88
Count me in! Loved it! As for what to update first, well, you know my answer...MDJND! It's my absolute favourite!

Anyways, if you update and I don't respond, that's because I'm writing Medical licensing exam. Wish me luck! :)

First of all, all the very, VERY best for your exams! I understand how important they are, and hope you do really well in them! Good luck!

And thank you so much for taking the time to read this and commenting! It means a lot to me!!

Originally posted by: kpk1002
Loved it!! Can't wait for part 2😛 I also loved your version of what happened to Shyam...why couldn't the writers on the show have thought of that ?😉

Thanks for the PM.

Thank you!! I'm happy you've enjoyed this so far :)

Lol, as for Shyam ... well we'd have missed Dhaiya Ho and all the epic Arhi romance Shyamu inadvertently caused :p The hut wala scene and the scene where Khushi is unconscious and Arnav was crying wouldn't have happened if Shyamu was at a pineapple farm. Pity though :P

Thanks so much again for reading and commenting :)

Originally posted by: hiahmed
to me, arnav and khushi's relationship has always been about gestures, the palpable silences, the heated gazes, the stolen touches. thank you for bringing that aspect of the relationship in ur writing. it was so damn sexy

@bold - Yes!! I completely, thoroughly, totally agree with you!! I couldn't have said it better myself and I'm so glad you've enjoyed my attempt to write that intense chemistry that used to set our screens on fire! Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views!!

Originally posted by: katunkka
you always write beautifully! oh my this arnav is so...what is the word? yes "delicious" lol.
I can't wait till you update the second part!
I prefer you update new year resolutions first also I love MDJND too

Lol, 'Delicious' is a good adjective for them, na? :p I'm so happy you've enjoyed this so far, and really hope you enjoy the next part too!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

And preferences noted :)

Originally posted by: dumas
LOVED THE OS BEAUTIFULLY DONE LOVED HOW SHE KNEW WHERE IS WAS THAT HIS EYES WERE GOING TO BE ON HERS AND SO CUTE HE KNEW SHE MADE THE SUGAR FREE SWEETS FOR HIM LOVED HOW HE WAS TEASING HER AWESOME UPDATE LOVED IT BEAUTIFULLY DONE AND MY ANSWER IS MDJND THANKS FOR THE PM

Glad you enjoyed it!! Thank you for reading and for letting me know your thoughts - and for this lovely banner! I'm really grateful :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: anonyasr
Just utterly lovely!

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: rhearuhi
it is just brilliant emotions feelings so well described I felt like I was watching IPKKND again my heart going dhak dhak...awesome

Aw, I'm really glad you felt that way!! Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: seabeauty
awesome
update soon

Thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Shyam in the pineapple farm ...ha ha ha!

Loved it, the memories of the best kind of interaction between these two,,,so brilliantly written, so vivid that I could imagine it so clearly...the way you described his emotions and his point of view to the sound of her laugh, her bangles and her...amazing! Waiting eagerly for the next part!

Lol, for Shyam, living in a pineapple farm should be equivalent to a torture chamber :P

Thank you so very much for reading this and letting me know what you thought! I'm really glad you feel this way about it and have enjoyed it thus far :) Thanks once again!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
wow nafisa, that was wonderfully written dear
very well written, as usual
pls post the next part as soon as it is done
thx for the pms

Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you liked it :) :) Will definitely post as soon as I'm done with it - just a bit nervous...hope I won't disappoint :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b
That was lovely! Nice to see a wicked flirty Arnav! They both understand whats happening and while one is trying to run away from it scared of what it does to her heart and well being :-) the other revels in feelings that it evokes in him!

Love to read what happens next!

@bold - you've hit the nail on the head :) That really sums up why Khushi is avoiding him so well - I'm grateful to you for sensing that and mentioning it!

Thanks so much for reading this and sharing your thoughts! I'm much thankful for your lovely feedback :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Raila1014
This was a good flashback to the flirty Arnav during Payash wedding. It's so cute to wach him tease her mercilessly like that. She was avoiding him but then dressed up to tempt him, I am sure. Oh the wicked games these 2 play. Plea continue.

I love Mohabbat Door Janne NA De, so pls update this one for me pls, pls, pretty pls?

I'm glad this reawakened memories of that time for you! It was the golden era of IPKKND and I'm pleased this made you think back to that time :) Lol, I don't think Khushi's dressing up was a conscious ploy to get his attention - she just did coz it's a special occasion, which'll be a bit more clear in the next part. Thank you though, for reading this and sharing your thoughts :)

And I'm grateful for your support for MDJND too! thank you!

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Originally posted by: Pari93.9
Wow:) amazing os:) wanna read next part soon. . Just loved the words of arnav ' i can resist anything but temptation. You have written it too well. Hope to see the next part seen. Just loved to this flirting arnav and bewildered khushi. They were awesome. Thanks for the pm!

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it :) Especially the quote - it's one of my favourites and suits Arnav so well :P Thanks once again for reading and commenting!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Her feeble explainations for making sugar free desserts and his "teenager" reactions was so endearing...oh why ...why why cant my husband go "awww" like him when i do something so sweet for him 😡...you are spoiling me rotten with this temptation...how about...you update fast...i will read it faster...will comment even more faster ...so that i can then forget ...or atleast try forgetting him faster...i am so not making any sense...bottom line...i just love all your potrayal of arnav...all the time...😳

Waiting to read her reactions to his "delicious" comment 😆

C ya soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: FLGirl
To me the funniest part was "..in fact, let's pretend that Shyam fell down the stairs, broke both his legs, got a concussion and is now living in a pineapple farm. Ok? Ok. "

ROFL.. Shyam in a pineapple farm.. may his rear be pricked every second.. Is that why you chose to banish him to a pineapple farm?

Lol, actually, Shyam's supposed to be allergic to pineapples - so condemning him to a pineapple farm was like the meanest thing I could do to him without actually killing him off :P Though your idea's pretty cool 😆

And the mesmerizing part of the story was every other part of it. I could not help notice how Arnav spoke so less and with your writing you conveyed every emotion, every answer to Kushi's questions. I was transported to Arshi land while reading this. Please write. The Arshi interaction was magical. I felt every word of what you wrote

Thank you sooo much! This really means a lot to me! Arnav's always been a man of few words but one who manages to pack a truckload of meaning into what he does say, so I'm really pleased and relieved you liked their interaction here :) Thank you for reading!!

Question - Why was Kushi avoiding him for a month? I missed that part. Is that relevant to the story or is it just to set the context?
It'll be more obvious in the next part :)

Oh and please PM me when you update