Arhi TwoShot : On Resisting Temptation *complete*

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A_BA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Your attention to detail is just amazing...the way you describe everything so in-depth is just great.

I really enjoyed the first part to this two shot. Can't wait for the next part. I doubt they will be able to resist temptation for too long!

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SunriseGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

That was adorable :) Bad Arnav lol.

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anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Beautiful piece of writing ... This is what Arnav and Khushi are to me !!!! This naughty Arnav is so damn adorable !!!! Haaye main vaari jaawaa !!!! Mar daala Arnav ne mujhe 😊 Pls update the second part soon :)

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adiya1714

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

That was simply WOW!
Absolutely loved that piece of beautifully writing!
I'm soo sorry that I haven't commented on any of your stories since a long time.
I had taken a break from IF and now I'm back! 😃
So sorry though.
I'm gonna read all I have missed in the next couple of days and I will surely comment then!
And again I absolutely loved this OS!
Please continue it!

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

I love the flirty Arnav. I mean that side of the character showed up during the Jan-Feb of last year. Even though it was short lived, I personally think it's the heydays of the show.
I actually liked a khushi who was very confused with her thoughts and feelings. All she knows is that Arnav affects her alot.
And Arnav is so mean that he doesn't clarify with words but shows things through action. He keeps pursuing her and confusing her every day.

I can't wait for it the next part. 😃

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Beautiful.. Do you have doubts that you have to continue this??? God we can't do without it.. Update soon..
I loved how you portrayed their emotions. Her thoughts to avoid him and his displeasure when she does so. Also the way he knows he is staring at her but still doesn't give a damn. I love this Arnav who flusters Khushi by paying compliments saying things which leaves butterflies loose in her stomach...
Ohh I would like Resolutions update first..

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shonagudia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

This was beautiful.. You have written this with the golden days of IPK, with no shyam , no anjali and no hate mrg.. I love the depth you take while writing ... Flirty Arnav and Nervous Khusi always a treat to read...
Continue soon ...

I have started reading your FF. Will finish soon and catch up with you...

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emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

That was wonderful!! I wonder if Arnav will figure it an enigma that is khushi!! Looking forward to part two!!!

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

wow...am out of words here...yet another beautiful story by u.. how do u do this everytime... every single time u leave me wishing for more...
this was so sensual n beautiful u made me fall in love with arhi all over again...my mind is now painted with images of everything u have written down here and i cant seem to come back...kudoos to u for ur brilliance and i hope u update soon...