Arhi TwoShot : On Resisting Temptation *complete* - Page 10

Originally posted by: Hriju321

"Shyam fell down the stairs, broke both his legs, got a concussion and is now living in a pineapple farm."...🤣

Please update part 2 quickly😊

BTW...what about : A series of most fortunate incidents and Mohabbat Door Jaane na de Nafrat paas aane na de ?

Originally posted by: meem17

Beautiful
Loved it
Thanks for writing

Originally posted by: mkd4020

Wow... That was so beautifuly written... I am in love with this Arnav, of whom we were given snap shots in the show, I, mean during the wedding and then mission get-khushi-back.

I wonder though, why is khushi avoiding Arnav. Guess something like ''the new year resolution plot'' must be going that dimag of hers...

Kindly update soon... Pls pls pls pls and some pretty pls also with cherries on top...

Originally posted by: preethi28

I'm so very late😭

This is because of you Nafisa . I was continuously checking MDJND and NYR for an update and the little time I was offline you have posted a new Twoshot😔 .

*holds ears* sorry!! I do intend to update both those stories once I finish this, and I'm really sorry for keeping you waiting :s

par uske liye bhi tumhe maaf kar deti hoon just for of this

let's pretend that Shyam fell down the stairs, broke both his legs, got a concussion and is now living in a pineapple farm. Ok? Ok. 😃

Lol, chalo, Shyam ko torture karne ke bahane maafi bhi mil gayi! :P

This one reminded me of all those reasons why I love Arnav Singh Raizada in the first place😳

The predatory gleam in his eyes,the roguish smirk,the devilish remarks and the oh-so-blush-inducing innuendos .

The love,the longing and the ache caused by the separation was starkingly evident in Arnav's thoughts.The way his eyes were stuck on Khushi...hay mein mar jawa😆

And when he followed her to the kitchen and was flustering her, reducing her to to a quivering mess,shaking like a leaf inside but putting a brave face outside *swoons*

Lol, I'm so glad you liked! I'm personally very fond of writing this roughish, mischievous Arnav - probably because I adored watching him on screen so much! So it really means a lot to me that you enjoyed reading this, hopefully as much as I enjoyed writing it :) Thank you so much for reading and sharing what you felt with me!!

Moments which captured my heart

It was incongruous, it was eccentric, it was quirky ' and it was quintessentially Khushi.

It swept over him like the shimmery caress of rain, washing off the grit and grime gathering on leaves and trees, rinsing them.

Rejuvenating them.

The farther she ran, the harder he'd give chase.

. As he tugged her back to face him, her fiery eyes flashed at him in defiance ' and his heart sang its triumph.

Now THERE's the Khushi I know and lo-

Ahem.

Khushi, head hanging like a sullen little child, was mumbling disconsolately, 'Well, Buaji isn't allowed much sugar either and neither is Nani, and Mamiji is also on a sugar-free diet and-'

'That's too bad though,' Arnav cut in whispering lightly, 'I don't like sharing.'

'Delicious.'

And then, with a wicked grin and heart-stopping wink-

'And so was the laddoo.

Awww, I'm so thankful you took the time to pick out those lines and let me know your thoughts! That really means a lot to me :) :) Thank you so very much!!

🤗for giving this amazing piece of work and making my day.

Thank YOU for this wonderful comment and making MY day :P

I want MDJND update because I feel that the story is in a crucial juncture now.😊

Originally posted by: shree10

Nice one. Reminded me of golden days of IPK.
Waiting for part 2.
I wish you update NYR first. I have been dying to know abt Arnav's POV which you wickedly keep pushing away! 😭

Originally posted by: rati123

Beautiful update. I just love the way you write.

I loved the Arnav in this story. So romantic.

Pl update the 2nd part soon and send me a PM.

Also pl update the other stories also , any one you choose to do first. Pl also update; "A seires of Most Fortunate events"

Originally posted by: LondonChick

Loved it.
Please do continue it or I will spam this thread like a crazy girl 😆.
And please please update MDJND first?
Thanks forcthe PM
God bless
Jenna

Originally posted by: damonzlady

You've got me swooning over Arnav and
Khushi! Love it! Can't wait for the next part!

Originally posted by: archa2810

arnav is too hot to handle... i was blushing all the time

Originally posted by: arsh_18

Oh dear Lord what a wonderfully written story once again Nafisa :D

All through the story I could feel/see the crackling chemistry between A & K like it was all happening right in front of my eyes.

And that last line -

'Delicious.'

And then, with a wicked grin and heart-stopping wink-

'And so was the laddoo.'

Hayye <3

I think I died and went to heaven and then came back to earth with that one line. So quintessentially Arnav - roguish and downright sexy ;)

Nafisa, you write so very brilliantly, that I DEMAND (in the nicest, most polite way possible) a quick update of part 2 :P.

Favorite moments in this update -

'You made sugar-free sweets for me?'

And his heart was palpitating again, just like a teenager mooning over his first crush.

His first love.

And every line of Arnav psychoanalysing Khushi's every action, every expression. Sigh! what have you done to my head NAfisa? It's turned into a pile of mush, with no coherent thought except a long suffering 'Haaye...' :P