Arhi TwoShot : On Resisting Temptation *complete*

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Jennymyola
U have a way with words, i must say. And this first part of ur two shot is the loveliest piece of writing i've ever discovered! If i were ur teacher, i would've given u 101/100 for this! Lol! 😃
I expect this part to be outrivalled by the next...
And may i add - U have made Arhi too sexy to handle!!

Lol I wish my teachers were this appreciative of me :P Thank you so much for reading this and commenting ... I'm so glad you liked :D :D I'm so happy you feel this way about this piece and can only hope I live up to expectations with the next one!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: summaiyasayed
awesome:)

Thank you!

Originally posted by: tinsel
Beautiful pieces of writing👏

Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: maazia
Awesome. Fabulous writing dear.

Thank you so much! Happy you liked it :)

Originally posted by: 9424976
AHHH AMAZING JKDSJFJDSLKFJ AWESOME.
YES
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lol *extremely happy* thank you!! Really glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: rana5
Love your writing, I was missing it. Please update MDJND!!!! I love that story!

Many thanks :) :) I'll try to update soon :)

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#103

Originally posted by: Nehasupnfan
Ooo!!! That last line killed me!!! OMG!!! WHY exactly is Khushi avoiding him? I mean I do understand on some level..But even then. what exactly is her motivation to avoid him! I LOVED THIS!! Thank you for the PM :) :) I can't wait to read part 2!

Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you've enjoyed this! Um, well Khushi's reasons are meant to be a bit vague at this point but it'll be clearer in the next part hopefully :) I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this - thank you for letting me know your thoughts :D

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#104

Originally posted by: vgedin
Aiyee, so lovely! Loved Arnav - audacious, charming, all smirky and confident - frustratingly confident!

And while I relished every detail you gave us, the last dialogue packed the punch - 'Delicious.'... 'And so was the laddoo.' Haha!

Arnav - 1. Khushi - 0. Game on!

Beautiful, Nafisa. As usual :)

Heya!! I'm so thrilled and pleased you liked this :D Thanks a bunch :) And lol, I probably enjoyed writing that last bit the most too, so very glad you liked it :P Thank you so very much for reading!

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Originally posted by: prerna31s
Wow !!!! Waiting for second part :-D

Thank you! I'll try to have it up soon :)

Originally posted by: SunriseGreen
That was adorable :) Bad Arnav lol.

Thanks!! Glad you liked - and don't we all just love a bad Arnav :P

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Originally posted by: A_BA
Your attention to detail is just amazing...the way you describe everything so in-depth is just great.

I really enjoyed the first part to this two shot. Can't wait for the next part. I doubt they will be able to resist temptation for too long!

I'm really happy you liked it :) Thank you! I hope I can meet expectations with the next part and you'll like it just as much :)

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#107

Originally posted by: anumadduri
Beautiful piece of writing ... This is what Arnav and Khushi are to me !!!! This naughty Arnav is so damn adorable !!!! Haaye main vaari jaawaa !!!! Mar daala Arnav ne mujhe 😊 Pls update the second part soon :)

Thank you sooo much!! I'm really happy you've enjoyed this story so far :) Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!

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#108

Originally posted by: canucks1714
That was simply WOW!
Absolutely loved that piece of beautifully writing!
I'm soo sorry that I haven't commented on any of your stories since a long time.
I had taken a break from IF and now I'm back! 😃
So sorry though.
I'm gonna read all I have missed in the next couple of days and I will surely comment then!
And again I absolutely loved this OS!
Please continue it!

Aw don't worry about it - I understand life can get busy sometimes :) I'm just really thankful that you took the time to read this and let me know what you felt about it! Super glad you liked it, and I hope you'll enjoy the rest as well :) Again thank you so much!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: SilentShadow
I love the flirty Arnav. I mean that side of the character showed up during the Jan-Feb of last year. Even though it was short lived, I personally think it's the heydays of the show.
I actually liked a khushi who was very confused with her thoughts and feelings. All she knows is that Arnav affects her alot.
And Arnav is so mean that he doesn't clarify with words but shows things through action. He keeps pursuing her and confusing her every day.

I can't wait for it the next part. 😃

I agree with you - the Jan-Feb period was short-lived but it reached a momentous high, and it was that high that sort of inspired me to write this TS, based in that timeline. I'm really glad therefore that it reminded you of that time :) Super happy you enjoyed this flirty Arnav-confused Khushi combination...I adored them in the show and am really happy you liked them here :) Thanks for reading and I'm so happy you liked it!

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#110

Originally posted by: aquagal
Beautiful.. Do you have doubts that you have to continue this??? God we can't do without it.. Update soon..
I loved how you portrayed their emotions. Her thoughts to avoid him and his displeasure when she does so. Also the way he knows he is staring at her but still doesn't give a damn. I love this Arnav who flusters Khushi by paying compliments saying things which leaves butterflies loose in her stomach...
Ohh I would like Resolutions update first..

Thank you!! Immensely glad that you've enjoyed this so far :) Arnav on the show was an intense person and I tried to bring that out in this story as well, so truly happy that you liked him here :) :) Again thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts!