ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 16

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

215.3k

Users

395

Likes

5.2k

Frequent Posters

Japonica thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous how you've built a story around that infamous, hated dialogue. Loved the final twist about Shyam being her brother! That was very clever, J😃
aarrsshhii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
all i have got is questions...questions and more questions..
shyam is her brother?????😲😲
and what does arnav do???😲😲
why has shyam ran away?
what the hell actually happened on the terrace???tht makes him not want to marry her??😲😲
u never fail to keep us on the edge ma'm...
terrefic begining
Edited by aarrsshhii - 12 years ago
blackdice1001 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Uh.. what just happened? Shyam is her brother? Arnav doing who knows what? Questions, questions.
Brilliantly written Juhi, as always :)
Newbiesoapfan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
ah -- the famous terrace scene!!

So Shyam is Khushi's brother and Arnav befriends her to find him?
kondhili thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Res
*************************************************************************************************************

Questions, questions and then some more questions???????😕
What an introduction and where you have left it off 👏 (Old habits die hard so a cliffhanger is a norm i guess)😛
Excellent narrative and did not guess at all that shyam is khushi's BROTHER 😲
What exactly is arnav up to and what happened in that terrace dammit!!!!!!!!! (I need some answers like right now)

A day or two till the next update you said. So i guess i will be waiting at the terrace impatiently with bated breath for you to come and answer our questions...😆

Once again Juhuji, excellent update which is not a suprise cause you are just awesome.
Thanks for the PM

Liza

P.S: About the dialogue and the terrace scene i agree with you totally i absolutely detested that scene so much so that till date i have never seen that episode and the entire week that followed 😡
Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago
1chilly thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
You really are the Queen of cliffhangers.
Loved the story. Loved this interpretation of the terrace scene.
Arnav works with the police or the secret service?
Also loved your depiction of Anjali as a strong woman.
Ad the end takes the cake. Nobody would have imagined this. Shyam is her brother.
Now I am impatiently waiting for the next part.
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
drmj5612 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
RES
-----
A terrace tale..!!!
i personally hated that scene.. 😡
n have never ever watched it again..

another job, owner of a boutique, marriage..?!?!!?!?!! 😕

n d last line.. i gasped reading Shyam is her brother.. 😲
Cliffhangers Queen..!!! 😛

i wonder, hua kya hai, on that day, terrace par..???

Edited by BitsArShian - 12 years ago
harsha.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
As usual mysterious and beautifully scripted.
Your updates make me wait for the next one eagerly.
sarrahyusuf thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow.. It was breath takin.. A very gripping story.. But as always all ur stories r gripping n lovely..
badfaith4u thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
That was unexpected
Shyam is khushi's brother? Interesting

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3 (85%)

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: heavenlybliss

4 months ago

Pyaar Ka Tropefest - My Series Of 5 Crossover Couple One-Shots

Hello everyone! I will be posting my 5 one-shots over here which I sent in for the Pyaar Ka Trope-fest contest. They are all standalones and...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: minakrish

8 years ago

One Girl. A Hundred Journeys.|Mrina's Index

Hello people, This is me, Mrinalini , aka Mrina or Mina . And here is the Index of my stories. Now it would be easier for you all to find my...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".