ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One* - Page 17

what to say ..
I am really stunned ..

waiting for the next update..

Omg this is so good!
I can't wait to read more.

Awesome one.

From the beginning of the story, I felt like I was being sucked into a whirlpool of mysteries.. Which kept on sucking me deeper and deeper into it, as I kept reading.. Maanna padega Juhi tujhe... Tusi great ho.. You have definitely chosen the right scene from IPK... The terrace scene was a sore point for me too.. Mother of all evil, or misunderstandings, between Arnav and Khushi... Tune, yeh topic ched kar, mere dil ko thandak pohchaadi.. Though ,now, I'm still a confused mass of protoplasm;), I still have hope, that you've planned something great for it, to turn this dil ko chubhaane wala kaanta event, into something remarkable...

Awesum...i m realy w8ng 4 u guys to post now...gr8 idea juhi n semanti...kudos!

Hain what the
So Shyam is her brother
And she wanted him to leave his wife
But why is it because he did something bad
Wow loved the twit of the terrace scene
Though if am being truthful your terrace scene makes more sense than show one dear
So they are married but he was still trying to get away from her
What exactly did he tell her that she was adamant in not marrying her
Or was there some secret
Whats going on I wonder
So what exactly does Arnie do
Cause he ain't a businessman here for sure
Well it seems that anji aint that weak thing she was in the show
But of course Arnie doesnt believe that
So finally they have consummated their marriage
But there is something going on
But what that keeps making him pull away from her every time
And khushi is tired of fighting it out with him
Well am sure the concluding part shall clear it all
Cheers for pm

I am addicted already!...what a twist...!..bravo!

great start! Can't wait to read more!

Oh my god what a wonderful start with a bang.

Love this bold Khushi who knows exactly what she wants and is going after it as well with single minded determination.

Shyam is Khushi's brother now that concept never in my wildest dream entered my mind, I tell you I have got wild imagination.

So I guess we have got Arnav who works in some sort of secret service as he has a gun ohhh that's so exciting to even think about it's a shame he is not in a uniform as well now that will be hot beyond imagination.

She actually seduced him, me like that a lot. Though did not take a lot of effort on her part, the question is why did she have to do that? Why Arnav is trying to avoid Khushi?

Lots of confusions and lots of answers will have to wait patiently for the next update.

Beutifully written as always.

Thank you for PM.