ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One*

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Unres my comments on Page 25

Liza

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Beautifully Written!

Loved the way you have flipped it entirely.Khushi being independent woman running boutique store,Anjali too established in field.Shyam the pervert in show ,but here he is Khushi's bro.Is Arnav a spy?Liked the way you have twisted,and spiced the plot .

Eager to know why Khushi dislikes Shyam?What happened after terrace part ..Cant wait for next Update:D

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Whoa. Isse kehte hain kahaani mein twist. So I guess Arnie is a secret service agent/CBI officer and Shyam is a wanted criminal. I'll wait for you to answer my one thousand and twenty questions in the next part :P Good job, Juhi.
P.S IDK if I've mentioned this already, but I really like this concept. :)

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akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Left us at the cliffhanger????? I am really confused. But what I understood is this much :

To the world and his family Arnav is the heir to Raizada business, but he also has another job not known to anyone. To fulfill that job he befriended khushi and proposed her within a short span of time. Khushi accepted the proposal without really knowing him properly as she has fallen in love with him. This love leads her to marry him inspite of his declaring that he had courted her due to some motive.

Still confused about Shyam and Anjali after knowing that Shyam is Khushi's brother?

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

if i say that i am speechless that would be an understatement...!!😳

okay...lemme use my advocate's brain here...!!😲

the facts i found are that khushi and arnav are seeing each other...khushi loves arnav that too very much...they are engaged...from two weeks...then arnav found khushi on terrace wid someone whom he didnt like and kinda shocked after seeing them...arnav is hiding something about himself from his family which khushi knows now...he tell her to call off the wedding...but khushi wants to marry her...there is extreme passion between both them...they cant resist each other...well...arnav is trying but he lost it...and then khushi confronts arnav about that terrace night and we gotta know that the person is SHYAM MANOHAR JHA...anjali's husband,,,,and khushi's brother...and khushi hate him like hell... he ran away and is missing from last seven days,,,i donn know why...anjali doesnot know anything...but arnav know and khushi also knows...one more thing i found about arnav extra career which he is hiding...HE IS A COP...right...????😉

ohh such a crap comment...isse abb tak ka sabse bakwaas comment ka award milna chahiye...!!😆

superb update juhi di...i loved it...seriously...aap hit ho...!!!👏👏👏

such a superb story...u sach me play wid my mind here...!!👍🏼

Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

I am very confused but I know you mst have planned a dhamakedar ending to this. Cant wait to read it. Thanks for the PM
God bless
Jenna

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nazca

@nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

Juhi, what to say about your writing. As usual nothing because your every update will leave me dumbstruck.

Is it possible to think that shifting of one thing to other in
a fraction of second like doubting, loving, hating, clearing, revealing, reliving, ... Yes it is possible. Your one chapter can make to travel all sorts of emotions.

Yes terrace scene is one of the initial of bad scenes in the show. But what she is said is not bad what the way he understood is bad. The decision made with the information of tits and bits will always be haste. Misunderstanding is always a scar which is made by the deep wound, if it is cleared and healed also the scar is a scar. It will remain there and sometimes sure it will haunt like a hell.

Thanks for starting the series. With loads and lots of love will wait for the next chapter.