Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 47

Episode 56

(Daniel~Rose arrive at seychelles..daniel wearing a black shirt and jeans..rose wearing black trousers..black shirt and red sweater)

rose: its beautiful..
daniel: it is...so beautiful..
rose: could have...so...(taking off her sweater): its hot..don't you think?
daniel: tell you what? let's go to a hotel...check in..and then..rest or do something...then..go out in the evening?
rose(with a mischevous smile): do something?
daniel(laughing): rose..! come on..

(both go into the hotel..get their room keys..and go into the room)

rose: wow..so good..
daniel: better than my room when i was in America studying to be a pilot..
rose: oh..speaking of pilot..what about you going to duty?
daniel: rose..hunny..ever mind..i got some days off..its just you and me..(closer to her)
rose(whispering): really?
daniel(whispering): really!

(both wrap their arms around each other...when there is a knock on the door)

rose: you were saying?


(back at London...Amina is getting ready for dinner..dressed in a deep-red sari..with her curly hair..red earrings..)

amina(thinking): brilliant! sujal wont be able to take his eyes off me..

(soon..she feels as if someone has placed their hands over her eyes)

person: guess?
amina: hmm..that voice..sujal!
(turns around..but no-one's there..amina sits down on her bed..upset that it had been a month or so since she was married..and her and Sujal ever had a romantic day or night together..a tear falls down her cheek..she quickly wipes it away when she hears footsteps..and turns around)

(sujal comes in the room)

sujal: amina?
amina: hmm? (looking away with her back turned towards sujal)
sujal: are you ready?
amina(pain in her voice): y-yeah..

(sujal smiles when he hears that crack in her voice..it made his heart beating louder..but a part of him wanted to go upto her and take her into his arms and cuddle up. Sujal resisted that. Whats happening to him?)

"I'm coming", said Amina, making sure her mascara isn't ruined. Sujal goes upto her and gently holds her arm..Amina feels a shiver down her spine - never had that happened. "Are you ok?" said Sujal with a slight worry in his voice 😳. "Erm" stammered Amina, and then turns around with sadness in her eyes.."I..." Amina suddenly starts to cry. Normally Sujal would have been pleased to see that, but today his eyes were full of pain, seeing her upset. "What's wrong".. hugging her tightly. His mind telling him to hate her, but his heart beating with its voice telling him to hug her. Amina looks up.."I feel as if i have done something" she said. "I don't deserve you" she managed to say out. "No..that's not true" he calmly said to her. "I love you" he closed his eyes, while saying this as he doesn't mean it. "You go dowstairs and i am coming..ok?" He explained with that same charming smile, to which Amina returned her smile. "Ok" she said and walked down with her long hair blowing. Sujal is going by when he sees a cupboard in Ansh's room open and seeing that no-one was near by, he decides to go in and sees papers occupying the cupboards.

He picks up a file and removes a group of photographs, which are of Daniel and Rose together with Dan's face covered up and Rose's photos all over the place. Sujal is astonished, but then picks up another piece of paper, which was screwed up, as if it was a practice draft of a letter. He picks it up and reads it - the letter was by Ansh to his gang of evil friends.

The letter:

"This is a emergency - Shravan has turned against us..."

Sujal reads on the letter as Ansh described the planned vicious death of Shravan and how he would trick Amina as being the most responsible...and how Sujal is a naive person to believe him.

The letter drops out of Sujal's hands and he drops to the floor, surrounded by dark and loneliness, just then a familiar voice calls him: "Sujal"! Sujal looks up and hears that Amina is calling him - he quickly wipes his tears and goes down.
"Why did you take so long"..hmm? She asked him with that sweetness in her voice..Sujal just kept looking at her, thinking of those rwo months he wasted in hating her when he should have loved her. "I knew it..you can't stop looking because i'm looking great, haina" she said with a twinkle in her eyes. Sujal nods and tries to smile. "You look perfect" he smiled at her truly for the first time. "Come on" she said as she joins her hand with his.

Both have gone to the party. Amina sits down and Sujal volunteers to get a couple of cokes for them two. While he is gone, a lady comes up to Amina and sits down. "How may I help you?" she says with a slight confusion on her face as who is this lady. The lady seems like in her early 30's not too old yet and had short, black hair and was dressed in the ordiary jeans and T-Shirt. "Believe me, I only want the good for you..not bad for you..I want your happiness and that's why I'm here today" she says in a cautious voice. "But..but..I don't know who you are" she said with a good but stern tone. She always had that, good-natured but feisty. "Your husband is.." Amian gives a suprised but yet a annoyed expression as soon as Sujal was brought into this. "My name is Anita and I came here to warn you about your husband". "Whats wrong with him" said Amina..her eyes clearly showed that she wasn't willing to hear a word against Sujal. "He hates you..a bit long ago..a member of his family called Shravan died" Amina's eyes blinked and were burning with confusion and anger. "So.."? she asked..still remaining calm.

Anita tells her the whole story of how Sujal planned to destroy her and the entire story with the solid evidence. Anita and Amina see Sujal coming back to the table with the cokes. "I think i should be going" Anita says in fear as Sujal came. "No..don't you dare" she said..her eyes clearly showed the anger now. Amina looks up at Sujal with pain and thousands of questions surrounding the two. "Is she telling the truth"? Amina points to Anita..and holds up the entire load of evidece that she had seen. "You wanted to drive me mad with drugs because you think I murdered Shravan" she said with ager flitering in and out of her voice. She never yelled - that's her nature. She doesn't do that. "I...listen.." Sujal said..but wasn't able to say anything. The greatest fear and greatest sin had been discovered.

How was that ppl? 😃

Precap: Gauri's memories of her old life begin to haunt her, causing Torchwood to worry. Sujal regrets suspecting Amina murdering Shravan and tries to reason with her and Swayam decides to take control of things that end up in dire consequences.

😃 😳

Woohoo!!Finally,Sujal knows the truth now...i hope all misunderstandings are cleared soon between them. 😳 😳 Overall,very sweet and romantic episode. As i was reading,i was also imagining them as it was really happening.Yehi toh jadoo hai tumhari ff mein. 😳
Hope everything fine with you:)
Love you!!

very very nice part!! that was so nice that sujal got to know the truth but the anita sumthin 😡 !! anyways nice part 👏 👏

wow !!!!!!!!!!!!
Goin Rocking Hunny !!!
👏

after such a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggg time read ur ff ... My god...soooooooooooooooooooo many things hav happened i cant even keep track.. but am really happy for u n daniel atlast gettin together.. good for kavya n kashish... really rockin things going on.. but hey where's me??? hmm... 😉
wow... so u havnt lost ur touch in thes months.. keep updatin.. me'll also keep myself updated...
n congrats rose dear 😉

Originally posted by: amina877

Woohoo!!Finally,Sujal knows the truth now...i hope all misunderstandings are cleared soon between them. 😳 😳 Overall,very sweet and romantic episode. As i was reading,i was also imagining them as it was really happening.Yehi toh jadoo hai tumhari ff mein. 😳
Hope everything fine with you:)
Love you!!

YAY!!! Good that you are happy wid this episode😃😳...i kew you would be...i was thinking that its best not to keep it stretched😉...oh...you're too kid...sweetheart...😃😳...yur comments really do touch me..they really do...😃😳

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

very very nice part!! that was so nice that sujal got to know the truth but the anita sumthin 😡 !! anyways nice part 👏 👏

thanx sia..a lot of curiosity is here now that anita is here😉...but let me assure you...she's just there for one episode or two...😊

Originally posted by: tunna

wow !!!!!!!!!!!!
Goin Rocking Hunny !!!
👏

after such a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggggg time read ur ff ... My god...soooooooooooooooooooo many things hav happened i cant even keep track.. but am really happy for u n daniel atlast gettin together.. good for kavya n kashish... really rockin things going on.. but hey where's me??? hmm... 😉
wow... so u havnt lost ur touch in thes months.. keep updatin.. me'll also keep myself updated...
n congrats rose dear 😉

awwwwwww....thankoo tuhina dear...😳😃..really nice to hear from you after a long time..😃

just wait and see what else i have in store for you all

keep o readig ad complimeting...hehe...😆😆😆

Episode 57

The Virani House is surrounded in darkness as Sujal~Amina enter home. Throughout their whole journey from the party to home, Amina completely ignored Sujal and his pleas to talk to him. They enter the house. "Amina, please, talk to me" Sujal begged. Amina had her back turned towards Sujal. Her eyes brimming with tears but she fought them back. She can't tell him anything. "Amina, I can't bear this silence and distances between us" he said. His voice bearing the utter regret of suspecting her. "Goodnight" she reluctantly said. As she did, she forced her feet to walk herself to her bedroom. Sujal is left alone in the darkness and lowers himself as if sitting down leaning on his knees. The sog "Thora sa pyaar hua hai" (sad) comes on:

"Bewaffa tum nahin hoo bewaffa hum ahi hai"

(remembering how Amina sincerely took care of him when ill)

"Apne kismet mein…dukh aur kya hai"

(how Amina remains angry with him)

"Mujh ko tahai chor ki…ho ho ho…mujh ko tahain chor ki"

(How Amina walked away)

"Sukoon bhi kaise aaye"

"Thora sa pyar hua tha…kuch bhi nahi bakhi"

"Thora sa pyar hua tha…kuch bhi nahi bakhi"

Sujal walks up to his bedroom and opens the door and goes inside. The lights are turned off. He takes off his jacket, tie and places them on a chair nearby. He un-straps his watch ad places it on the dressing table and un-does his cuffs ad opens the first three buttons of his shirt and lies down on his bed. He turns to his left and sees Amina asleep. She changed from her deep red sari to a misty-pink sari. Her gold bangles shining their beauty on the moonlight that came in through the window. Her curly hair had not lost its style ad still remained in its former position. She turned from the side to face Sujal. Sujal, helplessly, continues to look at her, unable to take his eyes off her face. He gets up and goes to her side and sits besides her on the bed. He switches the lamp on, the light shining on her face and the off. On and off. On and off. He leaves the lamp off ad lifts his had ad places it on her cheek. And slowly, he strokes her cheek lovingly. He enjoys the feeling of adoring his wife after a long time. Feeling this, Amina gently moans in her sleep. She slowly, slowly opens her eyes and for a minute, she wanted to smile at the sight in front of her, but then the painful truth came in front of her. She fully opens her eyes. "What the…"she gasped, as she turned her face away from Sujal's touch. "I…erm…I just saw you…and…I'm sorry" he apologised ad went back to his side and lied down ad closed his eyes. Amina kept her eyes on him, even though she was angry with him. She sighs and then turns back and closes her eyes.

The next day as the sun rises

Tulsi is carrying the fruit bowl ad places it on the dining table. Yug comes in ad sits down. "Good morning, Yug" said Tulsi. "Morning aunty, looking good", he said with a cheeky wink. "I know" she smiled. "Hmm" Yug seemed confused. "My husband says the same" she jokes. Mihir begins to choke on the drink, as Savita tries to fight back the grinning smile.

Upstairs, Sujal and Amina are still asleep. Sujal, in his sleep, spreads his arm across and accidetly strokes Amia. Amia feels a radiant touch ad immediately gets up ad moves Sujal's hand. Sujal realises what he has done and gets up. "Sorry" he muttered. "It's….Amina paused. When she couldn't forgive for last night, what would this matter? Amina runs her hair through her hair. It lost its curly style and was scattered all over her shoulders. She gets up and goes in the shower. Sujal is left alone, desperate for one word, or let alone that, even a glance from her would enough.

Amina stood in the shower, with the water showering upon her. She thought about what Anita said. She wanted to forgive Sujal, a part of her did. But another part of her was hurt by what he wanted to do to her. She couldn't believe it. She turns the shower off. And quickly, she dresses in an orange trouser suit and dries her hair. She comes out and looks in the mirror and lets her hair out ad flicks it around and some of the drops of water hit Sujal's face. She turns around, facing him: "Sorry" she said, but without a smile. But Sujal did, at least she was talking to him. Amina saw that. How he smiled. God, he looked cute, she thought. She wanted to turn around and embrace him, but then the painful truth came in front. "Erm, I need the shower" he said. Amina nodded. "Won't be long" he said, as he closed the door. Sujal stood, unable to express the joy of hearing Amina's voice uttering a word to him. He was begging for a glance but he received something bigger than that. Today, he thought, no work, no meetings. He wanted to make it up for her. Of course, 24 hours are not going to do anything. But, all he had to do was make sure, that these 24 hours will be one of the most memorable ones she had. He got dressed and came out of the shower and saw the room empty. She was downstairs. "Great" he whispered. He quickly, put on his jacket and watch and shoes and everything and rushed downstairs.

He came downstairs and saw Amina having her breakfast. There was a seat empty next to her. He quickly ran and sat next to her. She looked at him and then down at her plate. She was using her right hand to pour more milk with her cereal, while her left hand was resting on the chair, under the table. Sujal grabs her had ad holds it tightly, stroking it with his thumb. Amina astonished at this. She tried to get her hand out of his, but he held it. She moved her left foot and stamped hard on his right foot. Sujal gasping with a painful expression on his face. Amina couldn't bear to hear that. She immediately left after excusing herself. Sujal followed her. She quickly went in the bedroom. "How can you stamp me like that" he said as he stormed in. "Oh right, I can't do that but you forcibly hold my hand" she yelled. "Oh, now I hold your hand, it hurts you, does it"? he asked, hoping that she would say no. "No, she truthfully said. "But, what Anita told me yesterday that did, indeed, hurt me" she said. "But, there was something that I needed to tell you" he finally admitted. "What" she asked. "Last night, I found out the truth" he admitted. Amina looked shocked. "When you went downstairs, I saw…" he said, as he told the whole story of how he found out the truth. "And that's the truth" he said, as he finished. Amina stood there for a while, unable to believe. "How do I know that's the truth" she asked. Sujal walked up to her and gazed into her eyes. He placed his hand on his heart. "I swear, whatever I have spoken right now is the truth" he said. Amina looked into his eyes, which were full of truth and sincerity. "I…I'm sorry" she said, finally. "I…i…could not stand the truth that you hated me" she said, with the crack in her voice. "I can never hate you" he said. "I rather di-" he stopped, as Amina placed her finger on his lips. "Ssssshhhh…." She whispered. Both continuously look into each other's eyes and unable to resist the attraction of each other, Sujal presses his lips against hers in a gentle, but memorable kiss. When pulled away, Amina could not help but smile. "I'll take you out tonight" he smiled. "Sure" she agreed. Seeing the two, Swayam burned with anger. "Oh no, not these two as well.

Kashish is in the kitchen, preparing something for lunch. Kavya sees her and stops. Unable to do anything, he just admires the sight in front of her. Looking around to avoid boredom, Kashish notices Kavya. "Hey", she smiled. "What's up" she asked. "Erm, oh, I was just…" stammered Kavya, unable to find the right words what he wanted to do. He actually wondered to himself why did he come here. "Did you have an errand or a job to do" Kashish asks. "Erm, yeah, yeah, Mum is wondering what is being made for lunch" he said, anything that came in his mind. "Aloo Gobi" she said, and smiled. "Oh right, good that's good…making Aloo Gobi…good" he said, as he quickly ran out of the kitchen to avoid embarrassment. As he left, Kashish could not help but break into uncontrollable laughter. She knew Kavya lied and Tulsi aunty did not ask what was for lunch, because it was her that decided what is there to be made. She put down the knife and actually thought why he came. Then the "L" word came in her mind but she shook her head to shake the thought. "That's impossible" she said to herself. But then she remembered Kavya's infamous saying, "Impossible means I'm possible". But, she resumed back to the cooking.

Later, during the same day, Gauri is at Torchwood.

Gauri was inside the Torchwood headquarters, clearing up the papers and mess. She looked at the jar which had that hand, which was discovered some weeks ago. She sat down and begins to hear a thrumming noise, the most beautiful sound she ever heard. The sound was moaning and groaning. She blocked her ears and the noise stopped. She gets up as she hears the door opening and footsteps pacig around, but getting closer and closer. "Oh hey Tosh" she smiled, as Toshiko stepped in. "I know" she said with a stern expression on her face. "Know what" Gauri asked. "I know the reason why you are always lost in thoughts and always looking sad and upset" she said. Gauri looked at her, with a cofused look. "What" she said. Tosh walked up ad puts her hand on Gauri's shoulder. "You're in love, aren't you" she asked. Gauri looked at Tosh for a miute, but then started siggerig ad from sniggering she burst out laughing. "Me? In love" she said. "Don't be ridiculous" she giggled. "I know you fancy him" she blurted out. Gauri was thinking of who she was going on about. "I know you fancy Jack" she claimed. "Jack", asked Gauri. "Yep, Jack" said Tosh. "Jack Harkness"? she said. "Yep, Jack Harkness", said Tosh. "Captai Jack Harkness", asked Gauri. "Yes…yes….Captain Jack Harkness" said Tosh. "Our Captain Jack Harkness, asked Gauri. "Oh yeah", said Tosh. "I wouldn't fancy him in a million years" said Gauri. "Oh Gauri, he isn't that bad" said Tosh. "Anyways, I better get back to the others" she said. "Course, don't be long" she said. As the door closed, Gauri hoped that he was here soo. "Where are you, Doctor" she whispered.

Precap: Gauri begins to get confused over what she is seeig, while Kavya~Kashish remain lost in thoughts about each other and Swayam decides to use each boy and girl from the families to accomplish his goal.