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Posted: 19 years ago
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fab part shirley 👏
and lovely couples 😃 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wow love at first sight!!!!!!! 😳 😳.But Karan said that love is nonsense ab kya hua first sight mein hi love ho gaya na 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!! fabulous....from the time i read the first part i was waiting for the second one.....u see..... waiting 4 the teenage love stories to start 😳 😳 ........very beautiful part and loved that part of gauri's fetish for choclates.....sapne main bhi choclates....she must be seeing a yummy dream......and luved all characters....... 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mastang

hey gr8 yaaar...really awsome.......cant wait for da next one ..when they'll meet..... 😳 ....really gr8.... 👏

thanx amal..about to write that episode now😃😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: amina877

fab part shirley 👏
and lovely couples 😃 😉

thanx amina jaan😳😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: diya7000

Wow love at first sight!!!!!!! 😳 😳.But Karan said that love is nonsense ab kya hua first sight mein hi love ho gaya na 👏 👏 👏

yeah...episode 3 mein dekho tho...kya hota hai..love at first sight...😳😉😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sia_lovely


wow!! fabulous....from the time i read the first part i was waiting for the second one.....u see..... waiting 4 the teenage love stories to start 😳 😳 ........very beautiful part and loved that part of gauri's fetish for choclates.....sapne main bhi choclates....she must be seeing a yummy dream......and luved all characters....... 👏

thanx sia...just wait and see the next episode😳😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: fakhra

wow shirley...............very gud..........

thanx mehreen😃😳

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Episode 3

(Amal is in a hurry to get to her art class, adi is in a hurry too)

amal(running): oh god...i should have skipped breakfats today...at least..i would have had time to do my hair...uff...my art book...yep..got..it...oh..do we have to go to school today?
adi(running): school..jsut got to london..yesterday..and already school..7th septembr..is such a bad luck day...wonder why they call friday the 13th bad luck day...monday the 7th is a bad luck day...

(amal is quickly setting her hair right..and adi is sorting out his stuff..as they ar eunware of what is happening..they bump into each other)

amal: woah!!!
(stuff falls to the floor..but adi doesnt see her face..as her hair was all over the place))
adi: oh..i'm sorry...my fault..should have watched where i was going...
amal: oh no..it was my fault too...not only yurs...erm...my sketchbook..where is my sketchbook?
adi(accidently gives his own sketchbook): here you go...yur sketchbook..
amal: oh..thank you..so much..and i think this is yurs...(accidently gives her own sketchbook)
adi: ok..see you later...

(both take their own separate ways to the art room..adi has already reached there..amal reaches in there late)

teacher: amal..is this any time to come to a lesson?
amal: i'm sorry...miss..
teacher: please take yur seat..
amal: yes miss..

(adi doesnt luk up as he is busy doing his artwork...)

adi(luks at the front of book): hang on..this isnt my sketchbook..my sketchbook has my name...and this sketchbook hasnt got a name on it...

amal(luking at sketchbook): this is got paintings of dragons and boys stuff..i neva drew that kind of things...

adi(standing up): erm...does this sketchbook belong to anyone?

(amal turns around..adi luks at her..for a moment..time stops...everyhing around the two.stops..all the students..teacher..birds in the sky..the only things moving are..the two..and maple leaves..that come through the open window..and fly around them tow...time starts running again)

adi: excuse me..i think i got yur sketchbook...
amal: yeah...erm...yurs is the one..with all that guys stuff in it...
adi: yeah..erm...i'm sorry..about earlier..how bumped into you..
amal: oh..thats ok..no sorries...needed..
adi: ok..but..whats yur name?

(before amal can say her name..the teahcer interrupts)

teacher: ok..you two..sit down...now..and get on with yur work...
adi: yes miss...

(Next scene: Karan~Diya)

(Diya is trying to get to her second lesson...and so is karan...both are outside..trying to reach the other part of the building)

diya(2 herself): uff..diya..jaldi karna chahe tha..tumhe..itne dhir kyun laga thi hoo...and this school..uff..will be so glad...when it finishes...uff..

karan(2 himself): kal london poncha tha..aur itne jaldi school shoro...zindagi..bhi kitne mushkil hai...school...i hate it..itne nafrat hai..school ke liye...16 bana itne easy nahin hai....

(karan unaware of diya...quickly runs ahead...but diya accidently drops her folders...and bends down..to pick them up..and has her back to karan...karan notices her..and decides to help her)

karan: erm..excuse me...can i help you?
diya(standing up): no..its ok..thanks very much..i got it now..

(diya turns around..but the wind is blowing and her hair is in the way..she removes her hair..and karan sees her.and diya luks at him..time stops again...everything in the world stops..only the maple leaves blow around the two..then time starts again)

diya: erm..thanx 4 offering to help me..but i had it under control..
karan: oh..no worries..its ok..erm..what lesson do you have?
diya: erm...i have biology..
karan: oh..i have biology too...we can go together..yeah?
diya: yeah..why not?

(Next scene: Rohan~Mita)

(Next..rohan and mita are in their biology class)

teacher: ok.class..hope you all had a enjoyable summer..
rohan(2 his frend): yeah..until today..i did..
teacher: 2day..in biology we will begin with studying animals..now..the first animal we will study...is fish..the species of fish...
mita(2 her frend): very interesting...isnt it?
mita's frend: ssh....dont wanna egt in trouble on the first day..do you?
teacher: so...we will be examining the physical structure of fish species today...we have some fish tanks there..and i would like you to examine some..and try and get some information on them...
rohan: come on yaar..lets study the fish...this is going to be very fascinating...

(rohan examines the fish...and on the other side...mita does too...but rohan suddnely sees mita exaining the fish...and cant stop luking at her..mita then luks at him...both of them luk at eahc other..non-stop....time stops for a moment again..everything around them stops...the maple leaves kept in a tray in the classroom..for another class's experiment..start blowing around them...time starts again suddenly)

mita's frend: ooii...chal..come on...we have to get some information on that fish...
mita: oh...erm..which one?
mita's frend(pointing): that salmon..lets get information on salmons..yeah?
mita: yeah...yeah..ok..lets go...(leaves with her frend..meanwhile rohan thinks about what jsut happened)

rohan's frend: and so...i decide we will research on the goldfishes...yeah?
(rohan is quiet)
rohan's friend): oii..rohan? rohan...Rohan!!!
roahn: oh...what? what is it?
rohan's frend: are you wid me? we will be researching goldfishes...ok?
rohan: yeah..ok..yeah..i'm all right with it...

(Rahul~Poonam)

(poonam is playing truth or dare wid her frends)

girl: ok..poonam..truth or dare?
poonam: ok..then..dare!
girl: ok..i dare you to pick off cherries off those trees there..
poonam: are you kidding me? its one of the school rules, no fruit picking in this school..
girl: oh..poonam is such a scardedy-cat...she is such a chicken...cant even do a dare..
poonam?: oh..ok..fine!

(poonam starts stealing fruits off the trees..and rahul who was passing by..sees her..)

rahul: oiii...humare rules thorti hai....chori karti hai...oi rukh jaaa....teri tho main...(grabs poonam from her wrist and poonam turns around)

(time stops once again with maple leaves blowing all around them, and then starts again)

girls: paaaaki!!!! paaaaki!!!! principal aa rehi hai...paaaki!!!!
poonam: i'm sorry...(bites rahul)
rahul:owww!!!!
(poonam turns to luk at him)
rahul: (smiles to himself) hmmmmm....paaki...woaaaaahhhhh hooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!

(Next scene: Akshat~Gunjan)

(gunjan is buying a present for her sis kashish from sum1 in skool)

gunjan: hey raj, i herd u sell mp3 layers...i want 1 4 my sis.
raj: sure gunji here u go
gunjan: gunji?
raj: oh u didnt mind did u?
gunjan: nahin, yeh mind karne wali koi baat hui?
raj: thats the spirit.
gunjan: ohhh i only got 19.20 and its for 20.00...
raj: its ok its on 80 pence (gives the mp3 player to gunjan)
gunjan: um hold on...(hands the bag to akshat coz hes behind...(unknowingly)..

(time stops and maple leaves fly in through the door..around the two)

gunjan: thanx..bye...(takes the bags from akshat and leaves)
akshat: ok...just handed me her bags...and...very weird!!

(Next scene: Sujal~Amina)

(sujal is swimming and his bro r watching him...amina and her sisters walk in)

amina: sia.... rohan in kabhi khushi kabhi gham is such a freak...mota kota.....
sia: 😡 amina!!!!!!!!!(pushes amina into the swiming pool)
amina: (cant swim) hell(starts blowing bubbles under water)
kashish: didi...u no she cant swim
sia: kashish tum bhi jaanti ho ke i cant stand anything against my jaanu

(sujal saves amina...times stops and starts again)

amina: (sees she is in his arms and moves away and goes into the water again, she grabs and hugs him)

daniel: (does a wolf whistle) aye haye haye haye
sujal: ur alright dont worry, uparchar jaye
amina: mujhe darr lagh raha hai
sujal: (carries her in his arms and escorts her out of the pool)

The jodis left:

Kavya~Kashish
Sohan~Tuhina
Arjun~Marriyam
Angad~Priya
Daniel~Rose

Hows dat, ppl?

p.s. sia 2moro tashu will write ur scene and it will b zabardast 😃 😉 u w8 n watch 😉 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shirley


diya turns around..but the wind is blowing and her hair is in the way..she removes her hair..and karan sees her.and diya luks at him..time stops again...everything in the world stops..only the maple leaves blow around the two..then time starts again)


ufffff 😳 and gr8 part 👏 .

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