Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 4

Wow!! that was so romantic and beautiful......and those maple leaves coming .....that is so nice......👏

Originally posted by: Shirley

p.s. sia 2moro tashu will write ur scene and it will b zabardast 😃 😉 u w8 n watch 😉 😛

OMG!! I cant wait.....just wwondering whats gonna be so zabardast......😊....update soon......plz.........

ZABARRRRDASSST YAAAAAR!!!!!!..... 😳 ...i cant stopr blushing...... 😆 ....too good......uuffff......very kooool...... 😳 ....
especially when every thing stopr...& maple leafs...tooo romactic,... 😳 .....WAY TO GO SHIR........ 👏 ......U ROCK...!!!! 👏 ....
really cant wait for da next one.....

Oh MY GOSH !!!!!!!!
Shril... now thats wat i call ....... LOVELY... just lovely..... that was soooooooooooooo beautiful n nice... the romantic scenes ofcpurs... n the rushing in the mrning thing... GOD.. wen will v learn to get up on time... 😆 😆 n the kiddi part.. too good on that too.. sooo sweet.. specially u n Daniel.. Cinderela... aah aah... 😉 😉 [ n me drawing spidey's cool... i like spidey n batman.. 😉
N the jodis dear.. lovely all of them.. n ahem ahem.. Ms . Rose 😉 is that wat i shud call u by from now 😉 n Tashu too got in to Kashish now.. ahha... Pinch her for me plzz... 😛
In short...lovely going dear... how cud i hav been so late in reading this 😳

n for this beautiful story..
👏

Originally posted by: diya7000

ufffff 😳 and gr8 part 👏 .

thanx diya...just wait till the next episode...😳😉

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

Wow!! that was so romantic and beautiful......and those maple leaves coming .....that is so nice......👏

OMG!! I cant wait.....just wwondering whats gonna be so zabardast......😊....update soon......plz.........

thanx sia...glad u liked..going to write yur 1st luv...soon..now...😉

Originally posted by: Mastang

ZABARRRRDASSST YAAAAAR!!!!!!..... 😳 ...i cant stopr blushing...... 😆 ....too good......uuffff......very kooool...... 😳 ....
especially when every thing stopr...& maple leafs...tooo romactic,... 😳 .....WAY TO GO SHIR........ 👏 ......U ROCK...!!!! 👏 ....
really cant wait for da next one.....

thanx amal...i know..i rock...hehe...😆😆...u dont have to wait a long time...going to update the next part..now!😉😛

Originally posted by: tunna

Oh MY GOSH !!!!!!!!
Shril... now thats wat i call ....... LOVELY... just lovely..... that was soooooooooooooo beautiful n nice... the romantic scenes ofcpurs... n the rushing in the mrning thing... GOD.. wen will v learn to get up on time... 😆 😆 n the kiddi part.. too good on that too.. sooo sweet.. specially u n Daniel.. Cinderela... aah aah... 😉 😉 [ n me drawing spidey's cool... i like spidey n batman.. 😉
N the jodis dear.. lovely all of them.. n ahem ahem.. Ms . Rose 😉 is that wat i shud call u by from now 😉 n Tashu too got in to Kashish now.. ahha... Pinch her for me plzz... 😛
In short...lovely going dear... how cud i hav been so late in reading this 😳

thanx tuhina...yep..me and daniel...just lsot in the world of fairy tales...😛😛😛....if u ant..you can call me..rose....either name will do..shirley or rose...😃

ok..you say so...next time she comes in front of me...i will pinch her...😆😛

Originally posted by: tunna

n for this beautiful story..
👏

thankoo so much dear!😳..i'm so touched by all of yur comments😉😃

Episode 4 (part 1)

(Scene continues from when Amina was saved by Sujal)

amina(away from the pool): thankoo you so much...i..dont know how to thank you..
sujal: oh, you dont have to thank me..it was my duty..
amina: thanx anyway...

vikram(luking at sia..sia has her back turned): excuse me..?
(sia turns around..and luks at vikram..vikram luks back..time stops...the maple leaves come through the open window..and blow around the two..time starts again)

sia: yes?
vikram: aapke behen tho..galat baat tho nahin kaha...sach tho keh rahe thi...
sia: matlaab? aap kehna kya chahti hai?
vikram: ussne..aapki..ahem-ahem..favourite actor ko mota kaha..lekhen...yeh sach tho hai...voh mota hai..
sia(angy): kya?
vikram: maine voh..film dekhe hai...aur..uss shirt mein voh tho buhut ugly lagta hai...uff..usse tho better hai voh frankenstein..
sia(angry): tum hote kaun hoo..?
vikram: erm...
sia: mere personal matters mein tum intefere karne ka tumahra koi haaq hai kya?
vikram: nahin miss..lekhen..aapne uss actor ke liye..voh actor jisi yeh nahin pata ki aap exist kar thi hai..ya nahin..uski liye..aap ne..aapne behen ko push kiya..yeh tho galat hai..right?
sia: lekhen..galat kya hai..aur sahe kya hai..yeh mujhe batane aap kaun hote hai?
vikram: maint ho..
sia(interrupts): shut up!! tum hote kaun ho...chacha..thaya...mama...ya dadi..nani...kaun ho tum/
vikram: main tho...
sia(interrupts): ssshh....
kashish: di..plz..phirse hungama maath shoro karo..plz..i beg of you...
sia: nahin kashish...isse samjhana chahe..ki perosnal matters..mein interfere nahin karna chahe...
rose: di..plz...stop it...
sia: nahin rose...isse pata hona chahe...
amal: dekho..main sabse badi hoo..aur main kehte hoo...ki chalo!!!
rahul: haan..isse le chalo...girls..pata nahin kaha kaha se aa jate hai...
(poonam covers her face with one of her books)

poonam: OMG..yeh tho wahi..hai..!!
sia: anwyays...iss din ki baad..kabhi bhi..mere personal matters mein intefere maath karna...
(sia leaves with the other sinha sisters)

vikram: aise baat kar rahe hai..jaise baad mein phirse milenge...uff..

(Sohan~Tuhina)

(Tuhina is playing tag with her frends..and on the other hand..nearby..sohan is playing tag with his frends too)

girl: tag..tuhina...ok..yur turn to catch us all...
tuhina: ok...
(tuhina runs after another girl..and sohan is running away from his frend...and accidently sohan bumps into tuhina..and tuhina falls..and sohan falls down the hill with her...and both roll down..tuhina lands on the floor..safe..and sohan lands on top of her...both luk into eahc other's eyes..time stops for a while...and the maple leaves on the grass..blow around them...time starts again)

tuhina; erm..excuse me?
sohan: oh..yeah...i'm sorry...
tuhina(getting up): its ok..it wasnt yur fault...
sohan: it was..i should have watched where i was going..and...
tuhina: its ok...no apologies needed...
sohan: so..erm..whats...yur name?

(just before tuhina can tell her name..their frends are calling out to them)

tuhina: lets go...shall we?
sohan: yeah..ok..
(both go back to their frends)

(Next scene: Arjun~Marriyam)

(School has finished for the day. Marriyam is going home with Gauri and Mamta)

marriyam: guess what..guys?
gauri: what?
marriyam: frist day...and i already got homework...from two lessons...
mamta: easy for you..at least..marriyam..gauri and i got from five subjects..
marriyam: woah!!
gauri: yeah well..they say dear sis..you can describe life in three words: "It goes on".
mamta: nice one...(laughs)
marriyam: life is so tough..
gauri: already discovered that...now i'm trying to discover the way of how to say 2 life is so beautiful..where you can relax...and..
marriyam(interrupts and gasps): aaahhh!!!!
mamta: what?
marriyam: luk at my uniform...

(marriyam luks at her uniform..which is dirtied with mud..arjun gets out of the car..both luk at each other...time stops...everything around them stops..maple leave that were on the streets blow around them...time starts again)

arjun(luking at her uniform): miss..believe me...i..am..sorry...so...sorry..i didnt mean to do that...seriously..i didnt..
marriyam: at least..you regret it...but...will i wear to school tomorrow?
arjun: oh..not to worry...(takes something out of his pocket): here you go..5...for the dry-cleaning..
marriyam: its ok...i know u didnt do it..delibrately..its ok...neva mind the money...
arjun: plz..take it..and use it or the dry-cleaning...at least..i wont feel guilty throughout the whole night..or throughout my whole life...sorry again..(gets back in his car..and leaves)
marriyam: how nice of him..
gauri: you cant get a guy like that in 100 yrs...you just got 5 for nothing...sis...
mamta: why is that?
marriyam: bcoz..i will get mum to wash my uniform..no dry-cleaning needed...and this 5 will be spent on things like chocolate..
mamta: and the bechara guy thinks you r going to spend it on dry-cleaning..
gauri: yep..(laughs)

(Next scene: Angad~Priya)

(priya is going home...and is waiting for the next train..angad is waiting for the next train...both go in the opposite way...angad is about to get in the train...and priya is left behind...angad sees priya in the distance...and gives out her hand to her..but hasnt seen her yet...he turns his attention to sumthing else..and turns around and sees priya..priya luks up to him..time stops..maple leaves that were lying around...blow around them..time starts again)

angad(pulling her in): come on!!
priya(goes in): oohhh!! (falls to the floor in the train..where it is just them two)

(angad tries to open the door)

angad: oyyeee....kulja..sim-sim...uff..where is that hussain when you need him?
angad(2 priya): erm..ghar phar koi nahin hai...jsut us two..
priya: ok...(smiles)
angad(sits down): aapko pata hai..ki yeh door kaise kulti hai...?
priya(formerly): erm..no..
angad: thought so..

(priya begins to read a book..angad..who is a flirt..starts to flirt with her)

angad: aisa lagta hai..ki maine aapko pehle kahiin dekha hai?
priya(serious luk): what?
angad: erm..robbie ki party phar..right?
priya: main parties nahin jaate...
angad: gud...acha karti hai aap..main bhi nahin jaata...i dont like them at all...
priya(thinking): uff..god...ghar kabh aayega?
angad: yeh go..aapke ankhen haina?
priya(luking annoyed): kya hua mere ankhon ko?
angad: erm..mujhe aapki ankhon ko dekh kar..mujhe kisi ki yaad aate hai..
priya: oh really..kis ki..
angad: mere mummy..ki..unki ankhen aapki tarha..thori se neele..thori se peele..
priya(interrupts): dekho..plz..leave me alone..mera peecha choro...
angad: ok..its alright wid me...

(priya starts to read her book.again..angad starts putting his head in her lap to see the book)

priya(2 angad): kya...what now?
angad: oh..dont mind me...parthi raho...main sirf yeh jaana chahta tha..ki up ulti book parthi kaise hai..very interesting method...
priya: dekho..buhut hogaya...keep to yur limits...

(suddenly..anjali..priya's frend..comes through)

anjali: oh..priya..(sees angad): busy hoo..kya?
priya: erm..nahin..(pushes angad aside)
angad: uff...i hate girls..
priya: whateva...chale anjali..thori dhir mere ghar mein rukhna..needed to talk to you...
anjali: sure..(both leave)
angad: i hate girls..

(Next scene: Kavya~Kashish)

(kashish is on her way home..and reaches the playground where junior students play...she hears a noise)

kashish(turning around): who is it?
(silence)
kashish: is anyone there? hello/
(silence still)
kashish(smiles a little): msut be me...get stressed when eva i am in school..
(hears the voice again)

kashish: ok..who was that?
(silence)
kashish: whoeva it is...show yurself..
(5 guys come out..surrounding kashish)

kashish: luk..let me..go...through..(about to go..but one of the guys stops her)
guy 1: let you go? a girl like you..go?
guy 2(laughs): how cna we let such a gorgoeus girl go? huh?
kashish(nervous): luk..i didnt do anything...and i didnt even say anything to you...so..why..? jsut let me go...
guy 3: why?
kashish(grabs a hug stone from the ground): this is why..(throws it at him..which injures guy 3 at the head)
guy 3(furious): you r going to pay for that...
(about to strike her..but someone stops him..by holding his hand..he pucnhes all of the 5 guys..all of the guys are on the floor..betaen by the boy..the boy takes kashish away..and runs away..to a safe hiding place...the guy is none other than KAVYA)!!

(kavya and kashish hide behind the big gym..)

kashish: are they..
(before kashish can complete her snetence, kavya turns arond..and puts his hand on her mouth...kavya luks at kashish for the 1st time..and so does kashish...time once again stops..everything around them stops..the maple leaves around them..blow around...and time starts again)

kavya(whispers): sorry about that...but..we cant let them hear us..bear with me for a moment..ok?
(kashish nods her head)

(in the distance..the five guys are trying to find the two)

guy 4: oyyee...yaar..lagta hai ki voh dono chale gaye..chal aaja...lets go...
guy 1: nahin..abhi nahin...
guy 2: oh..lets go...we will sort that guy out tomorrow..if we see him...now lets go..
guy 1: fine..

(the five guys leave)

kavya: its ok..i think they're gone...but..let me..check..(takes a peek and sees them gone..)
kashish(whispers): is it safe enough now?
kavya: yep...come out now...its safe..
kashish(relieved): uff...thank god...oh..thank you so much..for saving me...if you hadnt come.then..i dont know what would have happened...
kavya: oh..its nothing..miss...dont thank me....thank god..thank yur stars...
kashish: how cna i eva repay you?
kavya: there is one way...u can repay me..
kashish: whats that?
kavya: by taking care of yurself...make sure...you have someone accompanying you from school to home..its the 21st century..and london is not that safe..as it used to be...ok? (smiles)
kashish: ok..but..thats i can do...but is there something that i can do..for yur own benefit..not my own?
kavya: u have security..wid you..someone wid you..to protect you..thats enough for me..
kashish: ok..erm..thanx again..
kavya(smiles): no problem..
kashish: bye..
kavya: bye...

(both leave)

(Next scene: Daniel~Rose)

(Rose is in the schol minibus..going home..after school..suddenly the bus topples over the mountains)

rose(falling): AAAARRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

(the teachers one by one..rescue all the students..except one left..rose)

(daniel was passing by...as he was going home..sees the crowd)

daniel: what...is it? what happened here?
teacher: there is a student trapped down there...
daniel: student? where..?
teacher(pointing to rose): there..
daniel: oh..a girl..neva mind..i'll get her..up again..
teacher: but..we cant risk yur life...and it is dangerous..
daniel: well..it will soon get dangerous..when that girl will be fighting for her life..we dont even know whether..she is unconscious or not..

(daniel holds on to the rope..and goes down...and helps rose get up..and secures a safety belt around her..and connects the belt to his own..and picks her up)

daniel: PULL US UP!
(his attention turns to rose..and sees her and cant stop luking at her...rose who was scared..luks up..and sees him..both luk at each other...time stops for a while..everything around them..stops...the maple leaves around them start blowing around them...time starts again..rose..lowers her gaze..but daniel keeps lukign at her..suddnely rose's school bag falls down)

rose(shouts): STOP!! STOP!!!
daniel: what happened?
rose: my bag fell down...plz..get it back for me...
daniel: its only a bag..miss..let it go..
rose: i cant let that bag go..it has something really precious for me..
daniel: what? more precious than yur lfie..and mine's?
rose: yes..now take me down..or i will go down...myself...
daniel: but..
rose(shouts and interrupts): STOP!!! MY BAG!!
daniel: ok..ok...sir..
teacher: what?
daniel: take us down...
teacher: have you gone mad?
daniel: just do as i sya..and take us down...
teacher: fine..(takes them down..and dnaiel gets rose's bag and gives it to her)
daniel(little angry): here! ok..pull us up..

(after bringing rose..back up..daniel gets a little angry wid her)

daniel: did..you..know..how much commotion you caused..jsut because of yur little bag? what..kind of a person are you..that finds a bag to be more precious than 2 lives at risk? for the first time..in y life..i htough that by saving you..trapped down there..i would have done a good job..something good..something that i would be proud at myself for..but..now i dont..because..the way you acted was..simply silly..i'm sorry..but it was! (daniel leaves..rose walks home)