Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 2

Originally posted by: amina877

awww tht was soo sweet 😳
lovely part shirley!! 👏

thanx amina jaan!😳😳

Originally posted by: diya7000

SWEET PART AS USUAL shirl 👏.

aww...thanx anu😛

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

good part as usual 😊

thanx sia😊

Originally posted by: sweet_mita

AWesome intro & gr8 part 👏

thanx mita...will include you in the ff..havent forgot you..😳😃

Originally posted by: sweet priya

gr8 inntro and sweet part 👏

thanx priya..u tell me...which guy do you want for..yurself?😉😳

hey gr8 part shir....really......very good....... 👏
keep it u p.....me & adi ....rocking as usuall.... 😳 😉

Episode 2

(6th September 2006 - the Virani boys return back to London after 10 yrs, all r now 16yr olds)

ejaz: wow..london..bilqul wahi london..wahi big ben..wahi buckingham palace..wahi parliament ki building...yaar..london is still ulking beautiful..
sujal: zamana badla..main bhi zara thora badal gaya..lekhen london bilqul nahin badla hai..still the same..
daniel: London-England-Europe-Northern Hemisphere-Earth-Solar System..YAY!! We did it!! wooo-hooo!!!! london..finally..here!!!
sohan: nice..one...london...dekha...adi...kaha tha maine..koi plane crash nahin hoga...aur tum bhi..(mimicking adi): plane crash hoga...plane crash hoga..
adi: chup kar!! aur chalo..

tulsi: fight maath karo..aur chalo...!!!

(the Virani family go to their house: Shanti-Niketan)

karan: Home Sweet Home..

(the rest of the family baa..savita...indu and all welcome them)

mihir; ok boys..bedtime..
arjun: huh? what bedtime..kya bedtime?
mihir: beta..kal school hai..Year 11...last year hai school ka..aur kal subha jaldi bhi uthna hai..ok? now chalo..chalo...
rahul: fine...sara mazaa khatam hogaya aur voh bhi ek pal mein..(all the boys go upstairs)

(Next day: 7th September 2006 - Virani House..the Big Ben just struck 7:00am..the Big Ben disturbs the virani boys)

ejaz(pillow on top of head): uff..this big ben neva shuts its mouth...jab bhi dekho..strike kar thi rehte hai..
daniel: america was way better..at leats there wa sno big clock that disturbs you in the morning...(luks at the calender): its..7th september..ok..(pauses): 7th SEPTEMBER...SCHOOL DAY..BROTHER!!
arjun(waking up): huh? what..why..what happened? who died this time?😆 😆 😆
sujal: no-one is dead yet..but we will be..if we dont get ready in time...

(tulsi comes in)

tulsi: getting ready...boys?
karan: we are getting ready...in no time...
tulsi: actually..its 6:00am..
ejaz: what?
tulsi: from now on...London has deicded that to wake up everyone...the Big Ben will ring at 6:00am...
daniel: and i was panicking for nothing! uff...
tulsi: come..on...get yur uniforms on...

(the boys see their uniforms laid out)

adi: hmm..black trousers...black blazer..white shirt..and blue sweaters..and..blue ties...very smart..
rahul: quit yur complaining and get ready!!

(the boys begin to get ready)

rahul(brushing his hair): hey ejaz....what are yur views on love?
ejaz(pauses): love?
rahul: yeah man..love..pyar..ishq..mohabbat?
ejaz: pyar? pyar kashish hai...(smiles to himself)

(all the other boys snigger a little)

ejaz: why..whats so funny/
adi: they are thinking of..you know who..kashish sinha...
ejaz: oh..come off it...thats not so funny..quit laughing u all...
karan: besides..now we speak of them girls..where are they? i bet..diya still jumps on people's toes..(laughs)
adi: i bet..amal..still gets annoyed with the little kids' mischief...
ejaz: i bet..kahsish still rides on the swings...
ejaz: but..anyway...karan...what do you think..about love?
karan: love...is complete nonsense...
arjun: exactly...aur...hindi mein...pyar ko baqwaas kehte hai..
adi: mujhe lagta hai..ki...pyar...dosti se shoro hote hai...yeah! what about you..daniel?
daniel: what love?
adi: yeah.
daniel: never experienced it before..and neva will...but..i know..that she is out there somewhere...
sujal: she? does she have a name?
rahul: yeah..rose...
daniel: sshh...sujal..what do you think?
sujal: pyar...still waiting for it to happen..and you neva know..it might happen today...
sohan: really? is 7th september a lucky day...where love happens?

(next scene: The Sinha House)

(a lady is doing the pooja in her house: the lady turns around..and its prerna!)

prerna: anu? papa..bachay kaha hai?
bauji: aa rhae hai..anu aa rhaha hai...tu fikhr na kar...oii..anu..jaldi aaa!!
anu: coming!!

(anurag comes down)

anu: gud morning...bauji...
bauji: gud morning...
anu: gud morning..prerna..
prerna: gud morning..nashta karo..phir office ka time ho jayega..
anu: ok..madam...
prerna: arre nihal?
nihal: jee chachi?
prerna: jakar..tuhina..rose...kashish..gauri..mamta..priya...mita..g unjan...sab ko bula kar..aao..
nihal: jee..

(goes up..and knocks on the door..)

nihal:girls..jaldi karo...school ka time..hogaya hai..dont wanna be late..do you?
amal(sleeping): shut up!!
nihal: shut up?
kashish: disturb maath karo...!! (pulls the blanket over her face)
nihal: uff...yeh aise nahin maanege..wait a minute!!!

(starts pretending)

nihal: OMG...ejaz...ejaz..aaya hai..OMG...kashish..aao..ejaz..aaya hai...(kashish gets immediately out of bed and luks out of the room)

nihal: hahahaha!!! just a joke...made you get of bed!!!(leaves)
kashish(angry): uff...tumhe dekh lunge..nihal!!
gauri: where...is the chocolate(still in her sleep)
mamta: chocolate?
aal: she is dreaming..(whispers 2 gauri): gauri..chcolate fridge mein hai..
(gauri immediately sits up)

gauri(awake): really? fridge mein? kool..abhi jaate hoo...
diya: no..no..abhi nahin...ready ho kar..phir jao..ok?
gauri: right..abhi aaye...(goes to change)
amina: and missy rose..is still asleep...
rose: oh..i need sleep...
amina: u already had 9 hours...of sleep..
rose: i need more...
poonam: hang on a minute...(whsipers to rose): rose...rose..wake up!!

(rose quickly wakes up)

rose: huh? what happened?
marriyam: first day of school..missy...thats what happened...

(all the girls get ready and go down)

prerna: gud morning..beta...
sia: gud morning...
mita: ooh..whats for breakfast?
anu: erm..everything..beta..chalo..eat...
priya: erm..dida...pass me the corn flakes...

(the girls have their breakfast)

kshish: ok..thats that! school time...bye mum..bye dad!!
anu: bye..
all girls: BYE!
anu-prerna: bye!!!

Precap: All the jodis meet each other for the first time (love at first sight).

Howz dat, ppl?

Originally posted by: Mastang

hey gr8 part shir....really......very good....... 👏
keep it u p.....me & adi ....rocking as usuall.... 😳 😉

thanx amal dear...yep..u and adi...always rocking! hehe😳😛

hey gr8 yaaar...really awsome.......cant wait for da next one ..when they'll meet..... 😳 ....really gr8.... 👏

The couples in the story:

Daniel~Rose
Ejaz~Kashish
Karan~Diya
Rahul~Poonam
Akshat~Gunjan
Rohan~Mita
Sujal~Amina
Aditya~Amal
Sohan~Tuhina
Arjun~Marriyam
Vikram~Sia
Angad~Priya

Hope I havent left anyone out? 😳