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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!! shirley simply terrific and superb.....all the parts were superbly written and excellent.......and i and vikram met....wow.... 😳 😳although shuruwaat fight se huyi hai....i am already blushing(for god knows what reason)...... it was very very well written......and i really like the idea of the maple leaves coming everytime a couple meets...... 👏
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Episode 4(Part 2)

(the girls reach home)

anu: hi children..kaise ho?
kashish: theek ho..papa//aur aap?
anu: absolutely fine..
prerna: aur..tum sab theek ho..school ka pehla din kaise tha?
sia: theek tha..lekhen...aaj maine..(luks guilty)
dida: kya hua?
amina: isne mujhe swimming pool mein push kiya tha..
prerna: kya??!! sia..? aapko aise nahin karna chahe tha..
sia: lekhen..mama...isne..
prerna: sorry kaho...abhi!
sia: sorry..
amina: its ok...
anu: arre..rose..yeh kya hua?
rose: oh....(the injury on her hand): erm..aaj minibus ka accident hogaya tha..
anu: kya...theek tho hoo? ziada injury tho nahin hui?
rose: nahin papa..main theek ho..perfectly fine...ek larka ni mujhe bachaya tha..
nihal: oh..larka ni?
bauji: oyee..chup...bechari ka accident hua hai..
rose: lekhen..phir mera bag ghir gaya..phir maine kaha tha..ki bag wapis chahe...aur..usse gussa hua..ki phirse wapis ajana aur bag ko wapis laana..he got angry..at me..and yelled at me..
romaila: uff..how dare the he..to shout..the..my..niece?
anu: erm..beta..bag ko rehena chahe tha..aapko kuch ho jaata phir?
prerna: ok..ok..anyways...baatein baad mein...girls..get ready...jaldi se...
marriyam: kyun..aisa kya hone wala hai?
prerna: aaj virani family aayenge...dinner ke liye...
diya(excited): really..phir main tho chale...(pauses): hang on..kahiin yeh...joke tho nahin hai../
anu: nahin..sahc hai..voh aaj aa rahe hai...
kashish: oh wow...main abhi aaye...(smiles): YES!!!

(the girls gets ready..later the virani family comes around for dinner)

(the boys step in the house)

karan: the house..hasnt changed..has it?
kavya: hi uncle..aunty...how are you lot?
prerna: fine...absolutely fine...
angad: new dining table..i liked the old one better....
vikram: do you just think about food?
angad: no..i think about girls too...
vikram: uff..not again...
daniel: rose's cinderella house has gone..she got over it..
kavya(sees the swing outisde in garden): sum1 still rides the swings...no difficulty there...its kashish...
adi: place luks clean..amal still hasnt lost her childhood tidiness...

(amal comes down..and sees adi)

adi: what are you doing here?
amal: excuse me..thats my question..my house..what are you doing here?
adi: i'm here for dinner..at my frend's house..mind you..
amal: frend's house? what frend do you have here?
adi: Amal Sinha..
amal(thinking): oh no...not him..its not who i think it is..
adi: u ok?
amal: erm..yeah..and you are?
adi: aditya virani..

(anu comes)

anu: oh..adi..isnt it?
adi: yes uncle..
anu: oh..adi..meet our amal..
adi(surprised): amal?
amal: yep..amal..me..(smiles)
adi: right...erm...hi...
amal: hi
adi: how r u?
amal: fine, what about you?
adi: fine

(Rahul~Poonam..next scene)

(poonam places the cherries on the table..rahul sees her)

rahul(shouts): CHOR!! CHOR!! CHOR!!
poonam: (puts her headin her hand) oh God, yahaan bhi agaya...
rahul: uncle isse dhakay maar ke nikaal dho, aap ke ghar chori karnay aye hai!!..pata nahin kahan kahan se aajate ho tum logh...
prerna: nahin beta yeh poonam hai...humari beti...
rahul: yeh chor hai...yeh...(pauses)aap ki beti hai...
poonam: hmph!!! (runs to the kitchen)
rahul: (thinking) oh dam poonam ke saamne apni bisti kar di...oh!!!

(Next Scene: Sujal~Amina)

(amina comes down and sees sujal...and he sees her)

sujal: how was he swimming screaming?
anu: swimming?
amina: haan vohus din papa jab sia ne mujhe push kiya tha
anu: oh haan (laughs) to tumne bachaya tha isse sujal?
sujal: 😳 (smiles) ji
anu: thanks so much beta
sujal: its ok un...

(sandeep interrupts)

sandeep: haan thank you sujal, kyunke amina to doobnay ke darr mein bubble bath bhi nahin karti...(rahul bursts into laughter)...eik baar tho hum sab swim kar rehe thai bas amina hi bahir khari hui thi..(laughs)

kavya: thats not funny
sandeep: hain...(pauses and thinks)....oi (to kavya) idher ao
kavya: (goes to him) kya?
sandeep: abhi yahaan pe baat kya chal rehi thi?
kavya:(laughs)
(amina gets frustrated at sandeep's talks)

(sujal looks at amina and she looks at him...then sujal winks at her)

amina: (luks rite into his eyes and then smiles)
sujal: (mimes) i dont believe him (smiles at her...still luking into her eyes)

(amina gets shy and runs upstairs)

(diya runs off with gunjan's mobile)

diya: ha-ha-ha-ha...(running): come on...take it..take it....take it...if you can..
gunjan: diya..plz..mera mobile wapis do...come on..dont be a spoilsport..
diya: nope...
gunjna(snatches it off her): give it to me..
diya: uff...itna gussa acha nahin hai..ok?
gunjan: whateva..(turns around and bumps into akshat)
akshat(sees gunjan): oh...erm..hi...there..
gunjan(surprised): hi..lekhen..tum..yahan..kya kar rahe hoo?
akshat: frend ka ghar hai..dinner ke liye aaya hoo...
gunjan: dinner ke liye? lekhen tum ho kaun?
prerna: erm..yeh akshat hai..yaad hai..bachpan se..?
gunjan(surprised): woah..itne badi hogaye hoo...?
akshat: nahin...itne saalo mein chota hogaya hoo..well..obviously..main bada hogaya hoo...
gunjan: so...kab aaye thi..america se?
akshat: kal..wapis aaya tha..
gunjan: kal...se..? oh...right...

(diya quickly snatches her mobile again)

gunjan: oyee...diya...
diya: wapis karonge...(rushes off..and is playing games on the mobile..and bumps into karan..and accidently steps on his toe)
karan: owww....
diya: oh..kya hua?
karan: you jumped on my toe...
diya: oh..i'm sorry...(moves away)
karan: biology girl..a big habit of being late and jumping on people's toes...
diya: erm..lekhen..aap yaahn/
karan: frend ka ghar hai..iss liye aaya hoo...
diya: yeh mera ghar hai..
karan: aapka?
(diya finishes her game)
diya: oh..one minute..(she begins to enter her name for the highest scroes..)
diya: D...I...Y...A
karan: diya? yeh aapka naam hai?
diya: yep..diya..sinha..
karan(surprised): OMG...diya sinha..pehechana?
diya: kaun?
karan: main...treehouse...jumping down..and you jumping on my toe..
diya(smiles): karan?
karan: yeah..
diya: oh..i'm so glad...itne dhir ki baad...oh..badi hogaye hoo..(laughs)
karan: u havent lost yur habit of jumping on people's toes..have you?
diya: erm...(smiles)
karan: anyways..come on..

(next scene: priya is coming down..angad sees her)

angad: OMG...she is the same girl i saw on the train..so gorgoeus...yaar..
kavya: erm..angad...jsut relax..and forget her..
angad: oh..man..how can i let such a fit girl like ehr go so easily/
sujal: angad...no...u dont know who she is..
angad: i will find out...i bet she is related to priya..
(angad leaves)
daniel: she is priya..

(priya is in the kitchen alone...putting the food into the dishes..angad comes in)

angad: hi..
priya(turns around): tum?
angad: haan ain..lekhen iss baar thori andaaz se aaya hoo..
priya: forget it..yeh flirt..aur yeh wagera..i'm not going to fall for it...(about to leave..but angad grabs her hand and pulls her back)
nagd(2 priya): u r so gorgoeus...
priya: thanx 4 the compliement..let go of me..
angad: i dont let go of girls..like you..seriously..so beautiful..you are..
(angad hugs her..)

priya: get off me...
(pushes him)
angad: but..
(prerna calls priya)

prerna: priya..?
priya: yes..mum?
prerna: bring the dinner out..now..
priya: yes mum?
angad(shocked): priya? priya sinha?
priya: yep..
angad: uff..how could i be so crazy...going after you?
priya: i knew you would react like this..(leaves with the rice)
angad: but still..angad..dont let such a girl go easily like that..yep..still got to have her...but work..on that yur impressions...
(leaves and goes after her)

(Next Scene: Vikram and Sia)

(sia comes down and sees vikram)

sia: tum?
vikram: erm..miss..mere baat..
sia(interrupts): tum yahan kya kar rahe hoo?
vikram: miss..mere baat tho suno...
sia: get out...out..i say....GET OUT!
prerna: erm..sia..yeh vikram hai..
sia: vikram..(pauses)....virani?..voh main....i'm sorry...main salad le ke aati hoon.

(Next: Rohan~Mita, Sohan~Tuhina, Arjun~Marriyam)

(everybody esle goes out of the room, kavya goes to find kashish, daniel goes to find rose and only rohan, sohan and arjun r left in the room....Mita, Tuhina and Marriyam come down)

rohan: oi sohan agar chaho tho kisi ke saath tum roll kar sakte ho...baad mein keh dhena "i'm sorry".
sohan: SHUT IT!!
rohan: ufff...
sohan: even by now u must have noticed that all 3 of these lot are either kashish, rose, marriyam, Tuhina or Mita.
arjun: larkion apna naam tho batao.
marriyam: i'm marriyam
tuhina: tuhina, thats me
mita: and i'm mita.
arjun: is ka matlab kashish aur rose upar hai
marriyam: ji, adha rite....kashish kitchen mein hai..aaj ziada khaana use ne banaya hai par priya ne chaat banaya hai..aur rose upar apni sandals pehen rehi hai.
arjun: i'm hungry.
(kashish comes out of the kitchen)
kashish: marriyam di, khaana lagne wala hai....thab thak main baahir hoon.
marriyam: acha (smiles)
arjun: hi i'm arjun
kashish: hey i'm..
arjun: kashish, i know
rohan and sohan: hi
kashish: hello

(Next: Daniel~Rose)

(Rose is walking by...but trips..daniel catches her in time)

rose: you?
daniel: you?
rose(moving away): not you..
daniel: what are you doing here?
rose: what? hang on..thats my line...what are you doing here?
daniel: i'm here..at my frend's house..for dinner...
rose: frend? what frend? this is my house..
daniel: oh..neva mind..what do you care?you just care about your bag..dont you?
daniel: erm...prerna aunty?
prerna: haan daniel beta?

(rose is surprised to see daniel)

daniel: where's rose?
prerna: oh..dont worry..i'll call her..she will be here in no time...erm...Rose?
rose: yes mum...i'm here..
prerna: come down...quick..
rose: ok mum..be down there in a minute...

(daniel is surprised..)

daniel: oh..rose..erm..you're...grown up..and..hi..
rose: hi..
daniel: so..erm..can i ask you something?
rose: yeah..?
daniel: what was in that bag..that was so precious?
rose: erm...i..cant say..cant tell you that..
daniel: oh..come on..you can tell me..
rose: it has my phone..
daniel: what was so special about that phone..?
rose: it has a frend's number in it...
daniel: oh..yur boyfrend you mean...
rose: daniel..i'm sixteen..but no boyfrend..
daniel: aww..still single?
rose: hmm...
daniel: no Prince charming yet?
rose: no..
daniel: anyways...i think you owe me sumthing..
rose: what?

(daniel has his arms open..rose hugs him..he hugs her back)

(Next scene: Kavya~Kashish)

(kavya goes in kashish's room..to find her..he luks out of the window..and sees kashish riding on the swings..outside)

kavya: oh..Kashish!!!

(he quickly runs down....and goes out in the garden)

kavya: KASHISH!
(kashish turns around..)

kashish(smiling): kavya!!
kavya: yep..
kashish: oh..
kavya: i knew i would find you on the swing..even today..
kashish: come and ride on the swing wid me..
kavya: have you still saved my space till today?
kashish: how could i not? no-one can eva take yur space..
kavya: so..sweet...and i will sit on the swing..but..first...come and give me a hug...

(kashish runs and hugs him)

kashish: kavya..u r hugging me too tight
kavya: i havent seen you for ten years...so..what are you going to do about it?
kashish: nothing....but i missed you too...
kavya: on the swing?
kashish: why not?

(they both sit on the swing..and start talking)

kavya: do you still remember that day...when i kissed you on the cheek?
kashish: yeah...but that was so lame..how you didnt tell us before...
kavya: i'm sorry...
kashish: its ok..

(prerna calls out)

prerna: kids...its dinner time..
(kashish runs quickly)

kashish: come on..kavya..
kavya: woah..hold on..a minute...u keep going on yur own...i told you to keep company...come back here now..
(gives his hand..kashish takes it..and both walk inside the house..laughing and talking)

Precap: The 12 jodis meet each other at school, and enjoy the day out together.

howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

wow!! shirley simply terrific and superb.....all the parts were superbly written and excellent.......and i and vikram met....wow.... 😳 😳although shuruwaat fight se huyi hai....i am already blushing(for god knows what reason)...... it was very very well written......and i really like the idea of the maple leaves coming everytime a couple meets...... 👏

thanx sia...😳😳😳..just wait and watch for the other upcoming episodes..😛😛

besides...vikram~yurs..scene was thought of by tashu..😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Whattttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!a gr8888888888888888 episode shirl awesome description of all the pairs👏.Now Karan and Diya has recognized each other and now...........romance will.......... 😳.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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just awesome.....just read the second part.....it was really fabulous...... 👏

And u said that my sceene in the last part was thought of by tashu......so sweet of her 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: diya7000

Whattttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!a gr8888888888888888 episode shirl awesome description of all the pairs👏.Now Karan and Diya has recognized each other and now...........romance will.......... 😳.

thanx diya..and now..yep...romance will happen...hehe....😳..bas..dekhte raho...😛😛😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: sia_lovely


just awesome.....just read the second part.....it was really fabulous...... 👏

And u said that my sceene in the last part was thought of by tashu......so sweet of her 😊

thanx sia 4 the comment...and i will tell her...about the comment...you made..😉😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
ok ppl - will update the ff next asap! 😃 😳 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
are wah!!! isse kehte hain timing.. wenever u say posting.. i'm here waiting 😉
waiting as usual shirl..i mean rose.. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
but shirl... fab fba fab fab fab fab fab fba fab fab fab fba fab
FABULOUS EPISODES 👏
all the jodi scenes were toooooooooooooo good !!!
u think of sooooo many ways to unite na..
goons,heroes,tag,mobile,accidents,drawing bks...everything... mind u ur n daniel scene ws like sooooooo reminds me of veer-zara 😉 😉 i can imagine u too hanging like srk n priety 😉 wat a pretty site no.... 😛 😉 😉 😉 😃 😃 😃

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