ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

i have a question why she only one who get the visions about these?

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

OMG!!! we will have to give it for your writing... that was freaking raw... I m kind of numb n scared after reading the crime scene... Can u please differentiate the crime scene in different font so that people who r not so comfortable reading gory scenes can skip it???

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

interesting..well written..continue soon..😊

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Feeling really bad for Khushi that she has to go through all that. Reading them is so painful, can't imagine being in Khushi's or Shukla's place.

So there's a feeling of familiarity with Arnav that she's feeling.

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Hmmm...was Khushi a scientist of sorts that she had to forget science and embrace faith/beliefs?

So this murderer is a serial killer - very Jack the Ripper like! And like old Jack, elusive too.

Is this the person responsible for Arnav's unsolved murderers? I'm gonna bet on it!!

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Freaking awesome !!! The crime scene was so chilling to the bone ... To go through something like especially when alive is something unimaginable . The Vekateshwara suprabatham was so soothing to the ears amidst all this goriness .

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Very different frm other ffs..itzzz somethin intriguing.
Wud luv to read more..chap 3 was gripping
Thnx for pm

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

interesting RB. For me, it's right on your part to put Dark. Nobody can stop people who are interested and When u put it's dark, then more will be attracted to know what's it abt. Human tendency. But as a writer it's good that u already warned. i'm following it ...

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akaps

@akaps

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Chapter 3 - Now I am completely hooked to this story. I dont know when again arnav and khushi will meet . But it seems both have the answers to each others problems/circumstances.

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

wow...so khushis is epileptic just like arnav guessed...and she hallusinates...and the same dream happened in reality...woah im hooked now and yeah wnat really to read what happens next...

this is like something out of CSI...so cool and yeah understood meaning of dark...

you are one great writer...please do keep it up...