ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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nightfury

@nightfury

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

chapter 3 loved the CSI mode 😆

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

I quite agree with you about Arnav's age. It WOULD be unrealistic to have him in his late twenties here. And I don't see what difference it makes to readers anyway!

I love where this is going, despite the fairly morbid background so far.

Khushi's visions-- where do they stem from? And how are they related specifically to this serial killer (I presume)? And where does Arnav fit in here?

I'm waiting to see how these questions are answered!

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_disha_

@_disha_

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Wow,,,, What was that all about ???😲

So Khushi's visions are somewhat directly linked to the actual incidents taking place !!

Chapter 4 !!!! COME SOON !

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

take ur time... its ur story to tell... waisay bhi great buildings are set on solid foundations

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

I thought it was PTSD. And now it looks like epilepsy and hallucinations. What is going on?

To top that, her hallucinations are real events taking place elsewhere. And heres a mystery man outside her window. Oh, am I glad you update frequently!

PS - I wake up to MSS's Suprabhatam every morning. Thank god you added that lovely scene at the temple, or else Suprabhatam would spell spooky for me!

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

i think its a good idea to put a pg warning! some scenes can be disturbing to some people and mostly young people!

the part mentioning skinning her alive simply scared the hell out of me! i just cant imagine the amount of pain that poor girl must have gone through!

loving the way uve portrayed khushi's character! totally different from the usual ones but still very interesting!

epilepsy and hallucinations!

cant wait to read more of this!

superb update:)

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

love to read this ff n nice update thnaks for the pm

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Woah! That was damn great n gripping!!! U are 'in' police and mysteries too? I just love them, esp. the american serials, like bones, castle, perception, white collar, csi and all... I knw I'm gonna love this ff!!! Update soon!!!

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

alot of blood n gore... d person behind this is seriously some insane psycopath for sure...
on a very serious note..i cant wait for more...pls update sooon