ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed] - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago

Khushi waking up to "Kausalya supraja" remidned me of my childhood days...most of the days my sis and I also used to wake up to this...courtsey : my mom playing MS.'s cassette...diligently every day with out which she couldnt start her day :)

coming to the update...reminded me of various Law & Order: SVU episodes, bones, CSI etc.
Am a big fan of the above shows...though not necessarily paying huge attention to the crime scene itself..i tend to close my eyes when they show the crime scenes esp. the very disturbing ones...your description of the same, you pen it so well that one cant help imagine/visualizing it..but hey! what the heck...like i said in my previous comment am hooked to this so with you all the way.
take care

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an absolutely gruesome scene ...

am a little foxed though ...
this crime happened in the city where Arnav was stationed before coming to Mysore ...
and here in Mysore Khushi had an insight about the ghastly crime that just took place ...
is there some connection between Arnav ... Khushi and the psychopath indulging in
these crimes ???
but I suppose whatever it is will be revealed as the story progresses ...

Just love the Suprabhatam by MS ... feel so much at peace listening to it ...
Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it...

I can understand Khushi's condition... She needs a doc... It pains to see such a patient

Well at least it is soothing that life is almost normal with doctor's supervision
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice updates..
Ch-2 - Bharadwaj seems like a nice guy & an old pal of ASR. Well explained description of Mysore.
That was such a vivid & scary epileptic attack of Khushi.
Looks like ASR is already bowled over by Khushi :)
Ch-3 - Very intriguing story!! That crime was what Khushi had foreseen during her attack..right? The crime scene was detailed & appropriately put together. It's scary that there had been 5 similar crimes in the past. Did Khushi foresee all of these crimes? It must have been so hard for her.. Good thing is that at least she had Payal by her side during these epileptic attacks.
Looking forward to the next update!
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am ina fix regarding this story. Should I read it or not! As you know I have a severe heart condition. Normalli I avoid reading anything distressing.
Being a huge fan of your writing I don't want to let go a chance to read your work.
The story is really interesting and I will see whether I should c ontinue reading. Please do continue to pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love this FF... I especially love it that both Arnav & Khushi are older & hopefully wiser :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
a superb update...
loved it...
thanks for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
stry s intriguing
gd dat khushi has payal vth her
5 similar crimes in past
waitng fr d case 2 unfold
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Posted: 12 years ago
The psychotic murderer takes one back to Hannibal the Cannibal.
Khushi seeing visions/ hallucinations is a very interesting premise.
I like where you have placed Arnav age wise and also his experience in his profession.
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Posted: 12 years ago
the crime scene arnav visited...its ?
how can anyone so animal

do something like this with any woman

So now i got the story khushi mind get visions that scene in her mind
so its build before incidents or after it.

how painful for khushi to handle and bear these

its upto reader how much violence a reader can read
its better u give warning.

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