ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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akai

@akai

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#1151

😊Hey,

I came across your ff some months before, because of your description of the concept I was in dilemma because my heart can't take scary ideas 😉😉

But, today I thought to read it. Really Iam impressed.

I had set up my mind about the concept before I start to read but really it's unpredictable.

I am really impressed about your ff.

It's completely different from other mystery fiction.

Good work.

I heartly appreciate it.

Continue to pen your thoughts in fiction.

😊

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#1152

WoW! Very intense psych thriller. Thanks.

Have read most of your works now...

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coolpd93

@coolpd93

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#1153

Nyc one...haha..dont wanna finish wid those 2 wrds...res fr a while;)

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iss97

@iss97

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#1154

Read this story in one go
Loved it
Truly a thriller
Keep it up
Plan to read more of your works ⭐️

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1155

Was quite apprehensive to read this due to the thriller genre. But the try was worth it. I guess I should try to read more of this genre.

You have a great command over the language and it's amazing how you come up with so much of versatility in your story plots.

But iam not clear on why akash did what he did to attract Arnav's attention.

*Could you please write a sequel to " Paint it red "?

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RockBarbie

@RockBarbie

Voyager

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#1156

Originally posted by: ...Iyla...
*Could you please write a sequel to " Paint it red "?

The thread is for people to recommend me scenes. Once that's done, I will have to watch those scenes as I haven't seen the show myself. And then write that scene out.

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#1157

Wow.. Wow.. WOW!!
This is brilliant to say the least.
Hats off to you for attempting something so brave and clever.
I started it as my bedtime reading but it got me hooked till the end that I stayed awake till 4 in the morning to complete it. 😊
Great job, RB!
This is my second story of yours after gravity and I very much look forward to reading all your work.

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#1158

Another great piece by you RB, the unraveling of the whole story was bone chilling to say the least..

I felt the opposite emotions to what I felt after Dante's Labyrinth..

There I kept thinking Khushi must be born that way and it cannot be just the environment..

Here I thought how can they think the children of the murderers are born that way, no body is born criminal; it's the circumstances, environment etc. makes one..

Initially I thought the experiment was noble as there was a chance of some social benefit?? But then when I read they will be rounded up again, I was like no way..

I never thought Aakash can see Khushi until you brought it up, that was bone chilling.. He committed gruesome murders just to get Arnav's attention & torment him?? He is one example of the experiment gone horribly wrong I guess..

You made their confrontation easy and Arnav killing him was swift.. Thank you for that..

And the epilogue was just perfect ⭐️