Arhi OS: When With You

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

I know I am really late, sorry!

I loved this OS for one reason – its extraordinary in its simplicity. The beauty of small gestures, a heartfelt thank you, a quick kiss, a kind goodnight wish, an involuntary cuddle, a spontaneous embrace… beautiful, Nafisa. Also, I love any scene which has to do with running your hand through you beloved's hair or having them sleep on your lap, I just find them amazingly warm and lovely. So, thank you for writing this, loved it!

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: vgedin
I know I am really late, sorry!

I loved this OS for one reason - its extraordinary in its simplicity. The beauty of small gestures, a heartfelt thank you, a quick kiss, a kind goodnight wish, an involuntary cuddle, a spontaneous embrace... beautiful, Nafisa. Also, I love any scene which has to do with running your hand through you beloved's hair or having them sleep on your lap, I just find them amazingly warm and lovely. So, thank you for writing this, loved it!

Aww please don't say sorry! I'm just overjoyed you commented! Thank you :D

Gah I'm so happy you liked this piece! I'll admit that I adore small gestures of affection too...a couple of scenes where Khushi is sleeping and Arnav lightly kisses her forehead or brushes back her hair or almost reverently holds her hand on the show made me swoon to embarrassing degrees :P So I thought of turning the tables a little bit here...and I'm extremely relieved that you liked it! Thank you so much for reading! It's always a joy to read your comments :)

Edited by -doe-eyes- - 12 years ago

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: arshi_sunshine
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Thank you :)

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MidnightReader

@MidnightReader

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Hi! 😊

This is simply one of the most beautiful OS I have read. You have showed such a realistic, pure relationship between a husband and wife. I really like how you included such realistic moments between Arnav and Khushi, such as, Arnav being rude to Khushi because of work load and how Khushi as a wife understands this. Very lovely! 👏 You showed a mature understanding between the couple very real. 😊 I really enjoyed reading this OS and I just really like the realistic aspect to it. My words come short as to how beautiful this OS is. 😃

Please PM me your future work. ⭐️

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

loved the OS

os in depth of both of their feelings, sometimes i love how some writers write about a normal day in arhi's life

thanx for the pM:)

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Rimz_k09
Hi! 😊

This is simply one of the most beautiful OS I have read. You have showed such a realistic, pure relationship between a husband and wife. I really like how you included such realistic moments between Arnav and Khushi, such as, Arnav being rude to Khushi because of work load and how Khushi as a wife understands this. Very lovely! 👏 You showed a mature understanding between the couple, very real. 😊 I really enjoyed reading this OS and I just really like the realistic aspect to it. My words come short as to how beautiful this OS is. 😃

Please PM me your future work. ⭐️

Hey :) Before anything else I wanted to tell you that yours is one of the sweetest comments I've read so far! Thank you so much :) I'm very glad and relieved you enjoyed the moments portrayed in this OS - they were simple, small and perhaps everyday, but it's always the smallest gestures which mean the most and I was trying to portray that in this story, trying to keep it realistic. So it means a lot to me that you appreciated and enjoyed it! Thank you so much :)

Will be adding you as Buddy so I can PM you in future...just hope you'll like my other work just as much :D Thank you for reading :)

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: cpervaiz
loved the OS
os in depth of both of their feelings, sometimes i love how some writers write about a normal day in arhi's life
thanx for the pM:)

Thank you!! Very happy to hear that you read and enjoyed this OS...it really means a lot to me :) Thank you for reading and commenting :)

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

beautiful! very well written. captured the intensity of real emotions beautifully!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Beautiful! It was so peaceful, their emotions which you described their feelings and love, their level of understanding and the honesty in their relationship came out so well through the story and your magical words...

Loved their teasing and the comfort they bring to each other. It was perfect!

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Living alone can be quite an adventure, don't be so down!

your writing abilities astound me every time. i feel tongue tied to even attempt to describe how perfect this OS was. that is the holy grail. letting down your guard in front of another and letting them know you as you are, flaws included.