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aarrsshhii

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

simply fabulous...the flow was too good... ur wrk as usual is outstanding...

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-doe-eyes-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: kbtr
beautiful! very well written. captured the intensity of real emotions beautifully!

Thank you sooo much 😃 Very happy you enjoyed it!

Originally posted by: prettyji
AW nice

Thank you :) :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Beautiful! It was so peaceful, their emotions which you described their feelings and love, their level of understanding and the honesty in their relationship came out so well through the story and your magical words...

Loved their teasing and the comfort they bring to each other. It was perfect!

Hi :) I'm so very glad you liked all those aspects of the story - it was what I was trying to bring out and the fact that you liked them and enjoyed them is very, very reassuring. Thank you for reading and for sharing your views :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: summaiyasayed
nice updt

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: tina_1234
NYC os

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii
simply fabulous...the flow was too good... ur wrk as usual is outstanding...

You're too sweet :) Thanks so much for your kind words and I'm so very happy you liked this piece :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: segad
Living alone can be quite an adventure, don't be so down!

your writing abilities astound me every time. i feel tongue tied to even attempt to describe how perfect this OS was. that is the holy grail. letting down your guard in front of another and letting them know you as you are, flaws included.

Awww, thank you :) That's one of the sweetest compliments I've ever been paid and I'm honoured that you enjoy my writing and liked this OS :D It's readers like you that keep us going so thank you so much!!

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

It was simply beautiful...
With all naughtiness 4m Arnav's side,,love 4m both of them n Concern care ,sense of belonging,understanding...each n every emotion was written so beautifully...I also love another thing about ur writing n that is they are extra longg...i want to keep on reading n on n on...
Hope to see another OS 4m U...wish u best luck for ur life...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Nooro
It was simply beautiful...
With all naughtiness 4m Arnav's side,,love 4m both of them n Concern care ,sense of belonging,understanding...each n every emotion was written so beautifully...I also love another thing about ur writing n that is they are extra longg...i want to keep on reading n on n on...
Hope to see another OS 4m U...wish u best luck for ur life...

Hi :) Thanks so much for reading and liking! I'm delighted that you enjoyed it - and pleased you approve of the length :P Somehow when it comes to Arhi I keep rambling on and on and on hehe. Thanks again for sharing your views and your kind words - and hopefully I'll be posting other oneshots soon too

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arsh_18

@arsh_18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

This was such a cute OS :D. Totally made my day.

It was one scene, but Oh! there was too much feels :P The emotion behind each and every thing they said or didn't say to each other but just knew. I feel like I'm just rambling, because I don't know how to tell you why I loved this OS sooo much. SO I'm just going to stick with saying, Thank you Nafisa, you gem of a writer for giving us such wonderful stories :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: arsh_18
This was such a cute OS :D. Totally made my day.

It was one scene, but Oh! there was too much feels :P The emotion behind each and every thing they said or didn't say to each other but just knew. I feel like I'm just rambling, because I don't know how to tell you why I loved this OS sooo much. SO I'm just going to stick with saying, Thank you Nafisa, you gem of a writer for giving us such wonderful stories :D

Thank you! And this comment has totally made my day!! :D

I am so very grateful to you for reading this and sharing your views, and giddy that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much :) Plus, I'm also blushing as I reply to this comment, it's just that sweet!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

^ Me after reading this.

^ Me right about now dreaming about future relationship.

^ Me while dreaming.

My future relationship is going to have scores to settle with you, sweetheart, and with the Arnav you create...cos I am probably going to be like this to him -

Bechara...doesnt stand a chance!

My heart belongs to Arnav as it is! *Dramatic Sigh*

*Blushes*

Anyway...I LOVED THIS! This was adorable like Lindt chocolate which is ALL MINE! :D

The way she looks at him, caresses him, thinks about him thoughts she is too shy to share with him...Eeeps! <3

And the best part?!

He is awake!

And the bester part?

She doesnt speak out loud one single word but he still hears all that her heart beats for him!

And the bestest part?

They understand each other perfectly, they love each other completely and they are written by you. Eeeps! <3

Beautiful job, Nafisa! :)

I loved how this was not just a random romantic piece but instead so much more and that too in such an unassuming, simple way which just added on to its effectiveness! The fact that she is missing him but is still understanding his need to be 100% concentrated on his work and the fact that he realizes how mature his wife is being and realizes how much his staying at home just one day would mean to her...and how they both are just there for each other! Amazing! <3

So sorry for the late reply...I had read it earlier, just didnt get time to respond that time... :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago