Arhi OS: When With You - Page 10

Originally posted by: Semanti

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That was lovely. This is honestly what I'd always imagined Arnav and Khushi to be like after their second marriage. Arnav would still be the occasional ASR and Khushi would just be Khushi-- loving, slightly crazy and infinitely patient.

I liked this one specially because so little happened, yet every wayward thought, every emotion, every insecurity, every drop of gratitude and the enormous amount of love was all so beautifully captured!

When you write, I can almost SEE it all playing out in front of me in these poignantly etched images. Your Arnav and Khushi stay so true to the original! This is the man that I always see in Arnav Singh Raizada-- ruthless, a workaholic, short-tempered, hot-headed, secretly vulnerable, with a golden heart that overflows with love for his family and for Khushi especially, yet an inability to express that love.

Oh, and I missed devastatingly sexy. Even when asleep.

I don't blame Khushi AT ALL. If I'd been married to Arnav Singh Raizada, I'd never be able to look away. Embarrassment be damned.

This is one of those pieces that make me feel disgustingly mushy and happy inside.

And also make me miss the show so much. *bawling*

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

A very well written OS! It had amazing depth and was a pleasure to read!

Originally posted by: Nehasupnfan

Honey you have nothing to worry about! The OS was fantastic and definitely one of my favs!! LOVED IT!! The first thing about this that hit me was that how domestic it was. Something you would expect of Arnav and Khushi...It was beautiful. I loved how Arnav thinks he's inadequate for Khushi...and how Khushi thinks he's the perfect man...Thank you for the PM :) Can't wait to read more from you! :)

Originally posted by: chavvi16

aww man so she was according to him teasing his senses
well for her she was getting reacquainted with you
well she was missing you like hell
and why not you were pretty busy in getting the contracts so your wife was missing you
and now that she thought you were asleep she decided to take advantage of the fact
hey its not every day this is possible for her to do
and its not like you didnt like it
dont you just love this
ahhh that was bliss for sure
oh and good luck on your move and am sure all will be well soon

Originally posted by: PixieFlame

THIS IS BRILLIANT!
Loved the way you expressed both their feelings in such a descriptive way! :)

Originally posted by: cherryteacake

Lovely the way you made every action so meaningful, from Khushi's carressing of his face to his non-verbal messages of Arnav's affections for his wife 😊 the simple daily habits or looks most take for granted, you've penned down so well that it makes you realise how privy you can be to somebody's life...Great update

Originally posted by: x-Ri-Ri-x

Very well written

Originally posted by: dmg123

So sorry for the late reply! I had actually seen your pm and I told myself to finish studying for my midterm so that I could read this OS as a treat...and what a treat it was!! Absolutely Brilliant!!
It was very very well written! The way you descibed Arnav's features through Khushi's point of view was so good!
I could imagine everything so clearly! It was just perfect:-)

This OS was really very good!
All the best with moving out! I hope everything goes smoothly!!


Thank you very much for the pm!