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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: moon8387
This... Is a masterpiece...
Emotions, all that we feel is so complicated... And with the clarity that you have penned them down is amazing...
I can say that you are a natural when it comes to expressing what the heart feels, the heart wants and may be all that too which the heart doesnt want to feel or experience...

P.S: I know staying alone is so difficult. ask me... Its been 3 years now am alone in a city for my job... But dont worry... You will like this new change in a few days time... Hold on and keep writing such masterpieces...

P.P.S: Sorry for such a late response... was hell lotta busy...

Hi! First of all, please don't worry - I can understand how busy people can get with their lives. What matters is that you took the time to drop by and not only read this OS but share what you felt about it, and I'm honoured and overwhelmed :) Thank you so much! Yours is one of the sweetest reviews I've read so far :) Can't even stop smiling - your appreciation means a lot to me!! Thank you :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: suma.2911
amazing!!!!

started as something so light and even little funny and later on became emotional!!! loved the way you have expressed both their point-of-view and emotions :)

thoroughly enjoyed reading this one

Thank you so much :) I'm really glad you enjoyed the OS and the transition it goes through - happy you liked it, and thanks for commenting :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: -Shalu-

Omg why would anyone hate this?? I freaking loved it, it's beautifully written!! If this is what you call a product of a disturbed mind, then I need to quickly find the time to read your other works as they are known to be some of the best stories on IF. So far I only had read an TS from you which was simply wonderful.

PS: I wish you all the very best in this phase of your life & who knows you might eventually come to love the perks of being independent.. Good Luck! :)

PPS: When you said prompt for OS did you mean like requests? I would actually love to read an OS from you on how you would have concluded the end of the show. Thanks for pm.

Lol thank you so much :D I'm so, so happy and flattered and relieved that you feel this way! Thank you so much for reading, and for dropping by to share your views - that really means a lot to me :) And awww... I'm blushing like an idiot now- whoever's been saying that about my stories is a sweetheart, and so are you for your wonderful reviews and encouragement! Thank you!!

And thanks for wishing me luck - that's really thoughtful of you :)

As for your prompt - will get back to you soon on that! ;) Thank you so much once again for your lovely review :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: ShiningStar18
So romantic! <3
Absolutely loved this! Got to read an OS on Arnav and Khushi after so long!😳
Great work darling 🤗

Hey!! I'm thrilled that you liked it and thought it romantic :D Thanks so much :)

Originally posted by: damonzlady
Love this OS! Wonderfully written!always
Love whatever you write!

Wish you all the best!

Awww, thank you!! That's really, really sweet of you to say! I'm honoured :) So happy you liked this OS! :D

Originally posted by: FLGirl
Loved it. Not sure why you did not think highly of it. I would come back and read it again & again. Bookmarked.

Aw shucks😳 Thank you!! I'll probably start gushing soon...I'm so very happy you enjoyed this OS so much!

Originally posted by: Riima_Azraa
wooow!!! that was beautiful!

I'm really happy you think so! Thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: dmg123
Just read this OS once more:-)
Beautifully written!!
... Hope your packing is coming along well 😃

Oh gosh, now you've got me blushing again!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! I am literally floored that you liked this OS so much - and came back to read and comment again. I can't tell you how much that means to me! You're the best :D

Oh and the packing is coming along OK I guess *sigh*

Aaand oohhh, hope your midterms went well!! Sorry I didn't ask about them first :s :(

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Rimo22
Nice!
Beautifulll!
I love it!
The desription was Awesome! :)

Hi! Thank you so much for reading and liking! Glad you enjoyed it :)

Originally posted by: ..Anita..
Ver well written

Thank you :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: mandy15
loved it dear:)

Thank you :)

Originally posted by: -Sadi-
awsome

Thanks!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

This was so, so stunning. So beautiful Nafisa. Words won't suffice. Its effectively brought out what essentially Khushi and Arnav's characters started out as. And my, I am still left dazed. Loved it, period.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: mistyrains
This was so, so stunning. So beautiful Nafisa. Words won't suffice. Its effectively brought out what essentially Khushi and Arnav's characters started out as. And my, I am still left dazed. Loved it, period.

Aww thank you :) :) I'm almost giddy reading your feedback - that's really sweet of you to say! I'm so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for reading and letting me know what you thought :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: -doe-eyes-

Woah...I am well and truly humbled that you felt so powerfully after reading this! I mean, I am...floored! I didn't think much of it at all when I wrote it, I was just so depressed, and now I'm seeing my own OS in a different light. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I seriously love you for being SO supportive and sweet! I wouldn't even be around here right now if you people weren't here to egg me on :) This is possibly one of my favourite comments now - you've brought me a smile I thought was impossible when I was writing this and I'm so grateful! I mean, it always means a LOT to me when readers pick out things they like and try to explain what it made them feel - it's my true reward, and I'm so happy :)

And I would definitely try to write more OSs if I have time :) Would be glad also if you prompted me - a word, a song, a picture, anything at all. It kind of makes it more challenging and fun :D

Eek!! It makes me so khush that a comment of mine has made you so happy <3
I really love it when writers write back to us!! And anything you write will be golden! A prompt...hmm how about more issues like this- normal hardships that people have to go through in life, marriage, work, etc. Take your time, I will be gladly waiting for a pm with "New OS" written on it ahah. Thank You for writing such great things!! Lots of Love!