Arhi OS: When With You - Page 14

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

^ Me after reading this.

^ Me right about now dreaming about future relationship.

^ Me while dreaming.

Did you know that reading your comments is very therapeutic? I came home flustered and ready to murder a window or two, and instead sat down and logged onto IF - and suddenly I'm smiling like a giddy fool and can't exactly pinpoint why I was mad :P

(Btw, mind if I borrow some of these gifs? They seem rather apt when describing half my reactions when I read something by you :P)

My future relationship is going to have scores to settle with you, sweetheart, and with the Arnav you create...cos I am probably going to be like this to him -

(Just had to say this - this picture reminds me of my baby cousin. He literally has this same deadpan look on his face and pounds away at whatever is in front of him -including people- when he wants something. I hooted with laughter at this one :P )

Bechara...doesnt stand a chance!

My heart belongs to Arnav as it is! *Dramatic Sigh*

*sighs along* Same story here 😉 I'll be a hellish wife to contend with to whichever poor soul has the misfortune of being tagged with me - and all because of a fictional character.

And as far as settling scores is concerned, you should know you're a major stakeholder in spoiling me for any future relationship, toh hisabh barabar :P

*Blushes*

Anyway...I LOVED THIS! This was adorable like Lindt chocolate which is ALL MINE! :D

The way she looks at him, caresses him, thinks about him thoughts she is too shy to share with him...Eeeps! <3

And the best part?!

He is awake!

And the bester part?

She doesnt speak out loud one single word but he still hears all that her heart beats for him!

And the bestest part?

They understand each other perfectly, they love each other completely and they are written by you. Eeeps! <3

Beautiful job, Nafisa! :)

I loved how this was not just a random romantic piece but instead so much more and that too in such an unassuming, simple way which just added on to its effectiveness! The fact that she is missing him but is still understanding his need to be 100% concentrated on his work and the fact that he realizes how mature his wife is being and realizes how much his staying at home just one day would mean to her...and how they both are just there for each other! Amazing! <3

:D :D :D Thank you!! For looking beyond the simplistic enough romance into the depth of the OS, and for touching upon each of the little, meaningful gestures which make their relationship all the more special! I'm so happy you liked it :)

So sorry for the late reply...I had read it earlier, just didnt get time to respond that time... :)

No worries...I understand :) Look at me, I'm still struggling to catch up with my reading, so yeah :P

Originally posted by: LittlePrincess8

just loved it !!

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

this is the second thing i have read by you.the first one being the other two-shot.
i hope u have a smooth journey during and after moving out. wishing u well for tht.
u are a talented writer i dnt knw how i missed reading your work earlier.

Originally posted by: akaps

Found your index today and have begun reading your work with this OS. Just loved it. Will be reading all of your works.

Two entirely different individuals tied together by some unseen cord/string. Very well brought out the connection in their thoughts & beauty and harmony in their relationship. His insecurity about losing her due to his past deeds and his nature is still there conveyed by you beautifully.