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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

So sorry for the late reply! I had actually seen your pm and I told myself to finish studying for my midterm so that I could read this OS as a treat...and what a treat it was!! Absolutely Brilliant!!
It was very very well written! The way you descibed Arnav's features through Khushi's point of view was so good!
I could imagine everything so clearly! It was just perfect:-)

This OS was really very good!
All the best with moving out! I hope everything goes smoothly!!

Thank you very much for the pm!

Edited by dmg123 - 12 years ago

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moon8387

@moon8387

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

This... Is a masterpiece...

Emotions, all that we feel is so complicated... And with the clarity that you have penned them down is amazing...

I can say that you are a natural when it comes to expressing what the heart feels, the heart wants and may be all that too which the heart doesnt want to feel or experience...

P.S: I know staying alone is so difficult. ask me... Its been 3 years now am alone in a city for my job... But dont worry... You will like this new change in a few days time... Hold on and keep writing such masterpieces...

P.P.S: Sorry for such a late response... was hell lotta busy...

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RebeccaDaphne

@RebeccaDaphne

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Lovely, thank you! Please continue your other stories, I love your writing and really enjoy all the imaginative scenes of Arnav and Khushi! 👏

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SS88

@SS88

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Oh my ! What a beautiful OS. I can understand your predicament. Are you going to college in another city? All the best! And skype zindabaad! You can always stay connected!

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suma.2911

@suma.2911

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

amazing!!!!

started as something so light and even little funny and later on became emotional!!! loved the way you have expressed both their point-of-view and emotions :)

thoroughly enjoyed reading this one

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Omg why would anyone hate this?? I freaking loved it, it's beautifully written!! If this is what you call a product of a disturbed mind, then I need to quickly find the time to read your other works as they are known to be some of the best stories on IF. So far I only had read an TS from you which was simply wonderful.

PS: I wish you all the very best in this phase of your life & who knows you might eventually come to love the perks of being independent.. Good Luck! :)

PPS: When you said prompt for OS did you mean like requests? I would actually love to read an OS from you on how you would have concluded the end of the show. Thanks for pm.