Arhi OS: When With You

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Honey you have nothing to worry about! The OS was fantastic and definitely one of my favs!! LOVED IT!! The first thing about this that hit me was that how domestic it was. Something you would expect of Arnav and Khushi...It was beautiful. I loved how Arnav thinks he's inadequate for Khushi...and how Khushi thinks he's the perfect man...Thank you for the PM :) Can't wait to read more from you! :)

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

loved reading this beautiful os! Especially Arnav's feelings and point of view were so beautifully expressed!

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

A very well written OS! It had amazing depth and was a pleasure to read!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

aww man so she was according to him teasing his senses
well for her she was getting reacquainted with you
well she was missing you like hell
and why not you were pretty busy in getting the contracts so your wife was missing you
and now that she thought you were asleep she decided to take advantage of the fact
hey its not every day this is possible for her to do
and its not like you didnt like it
dont you just love this
ahhh that was bliss for sure
oh and good luck on your move and am sure all will be well soon

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

That was beautiful!!!!
Amazing they're so cute!!!!:D

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cherryteacake

@cherryteacake

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Lovely the way you made every action so meaningful, from Khushi's carressing of his face to his non-verbal messages of Arnav's affections for his wife 😊 the simple daily habits or looks most take for granted, you've penned down so well that it makes you realise how privy you can be to somebody's life...Great update