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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

nice..interesting..waiting for the next update...

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

RES

very nice! so there is no sad ending, thats good to hear! why was that kid reminds arnav about khushi? was it only cos arnav was missing khushi to much? cant wait for the next part.

sorry for the delay

Edited by opsyellow - 12 years ago

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Very catchy start. Khush, what role does this child play in this story? Khushi, she is in Lucknow, figuratively or literally? I cannot wait to read the next parts :)

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

How Will I miss Vee s work. What a gripping way of writing!!! I fell I love with your Glass work, then Glitter now this, you have some touch of psychologic approach to the caracters, that interested me more. Here Arnav's cararacter is so like associated.

By the way when rasagulla recommended your blog link of glass was so happy and read the chapters, can you update glass when you can, glass kushi trauma is beyond words and would like to know how she is psychologically changing I know it won't happen in flash of lightening it will take its time first make accept what happened is beyond her control and how she is going to overcome it and face her future. Glass Kushi is so into my mind please try to give the update.

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

awesome start though i was shocked when i continued reading about the horror that followed!!!! gosh that was frightening!!!! plz update soon!!

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Hope I will get a pm. Waiting

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

I loved the way u narrated the story. But all the time while reading I was very scared as to what will be the ending. The only reason I dared to continue reading is that u promised us that there will be no sad ending. Will be happy if u could PM me the next update.