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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Arnav ko mat maro plz...i know he wont die...

Awe khush was such a coincidence or a game of fate...who knows...ve knows...lol

nice one...thanx for the email...id love to read further

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Dynamix215

@Dynamix215

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

well, Im readin it only cuz u said ther is no sad ending ;P
oh and don't handicap Arnav or something k? I won't be able to stop cryin :'(
cuz the part where his 'legs are dead like ppl around him' scared me :P
so plz...?

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Res

Pata nahi kab unres karungi, but I will be back, only because you said there's no sad ending 😊

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mdeshpande

@mdeshpande

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Gosh, am chilled , scared,good to note it will not end on sad note. started to worry when Arnav drove that SUV though unwell, dreading that an accident's bound to happen. it did though,to the train and what a wreck, of life and destiny...will Arnav be crippled??? W8t...( fingers crossed )

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Humayra

@Humayra

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Loved it specially the kid Khush..

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Fabulous start !!!! And just love the title .. It is so unique and so apt for this story . You do need the strength to face these things head on ...Pls do continue soon :)

BTW Loved this comment and I just laughed out loud regarding men turning to lions when their wives are not in town 😆

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Dear readers,

I'm not sure how I wanted to go about the PMing, for I don't want people not interested to be bothered by my PMs, nor do I want to force people to read this Three Shot. So I decided that I'd PM people who commented/pressed like for part 1. I'd PM the silent readers as well, but I don't know who they are ... 😆 😕

Also, I want to take this opportunity to clear one confusion - The child, Khush, is not related to Arnav by blood. I know, it is too much of a coincidence, but then that's what it is. A stroke of chance.

Thank you so much for reading this story! I do hope you liked it. I certainly loved reading your comments. Sacchi 🤗

With love,

Vee

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Okay...WOW.

I loved the way you wrote this one out. You portrayed the characters really well...like I could see a brooding and very reserved Arnav and this cute little kid asking questions and being innocent, the way all kids are. :)

The train derailed!!! Fate. The last part of this chapter was just so hard hitting.

I don't know...I keep thinking there's some significance to the fact that Arnav met a kid who reminded him so much of Khushi...and his name is Khush as well. Kya hai...even I can't put a finger on..but I'll just wait for the next shot! :)

Really poignant. Yaad rakho...you said happy ending. :P :P

Looking forward to reading more! :D

Edited by ..SankiMedhz.. - 12 years ago

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

So ya i did press the like button and i commented as well last night so can i expect a PM when you update so that i don't have to stalk this thread...😆

Liza