Jealousy inducing act- a nice representation.
The memory of parents- a nice example to understand the situation, decipher the emotions she's being through and most importantly, still have faith in Arnav.
Arnav feels and believes tht its not her who didn't want to talk bt the phone mst hv died'a beautiful depiction of level of the trust between two.
U know'initially I was really scared tht where Khushi might have gone to'especially in this drunk state'.I was worried also of the fact tht what if some goons got hold of her'.but I was really surprised when u mentioned the place to be the Garden-home. It expresses so clearly of her unconscious levels too. How, even in a drunk state, the place tht came to her mind to seek solace was a place where even Arnav finds his. A beautiful connection it depicts between two. Most Amazing thing!
And then the guilt tht Arnav feels'well tht was beautifull written too'I liked how he couldn't stop blaming himself'for Khushi's current state and unknowingly triggering a memory of her past. Nice work here too!
And lastly, I couldn't understand'what did lack of emotions meant when Arnav was talking to Siddhu? Was it just because he was guilty or has it got something to do with Siddhu?
Anyways I liked the update! :)
Arjun
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